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From: JayeMichael
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  • I appreciate that you like these tales enough to care that they are late. Hopefully, two in two days (9 AND 10) will help make up a bit for the delay. By the way, is the handle in any way a reference to the old time radio cartoon about an alleged superhero/dentist called "Chicken Man?"

  • This story keeps on getting better, why hasn't anyone arrested that idiot gun jerk yet? he is too stupid to function in normal society :)

  • WOW great chapter best yet! beginning ROFLOL! 'act casual walking outside in gown', he says! 'Tina' really likes him the way she kissed him! I like the ESP connection! some great touches like Mrs G pretending Tina can cook so as to impress a guy. Also Jack saying what have you done with my hair! Jack is sure turning Macho the way he knocks the guy out! Also, I think Tina loves being Tina & wouldn't want to swap back! God job adding crowds. Keep up the great work.

  • The plot gets more and more interesting with each episode

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