page d'ecriture

[brighamman0]

What just happened?

[cyther39]

so inspiring!

it seems like the teacher is having trouble solving 16+16. Lol. look @ 2:12 did he use a calculator?

[jujafon]

bealtifullllllllllllllllllllll­llllll

[shimauma]

schön

[iamanonymxD]

sweet ^^

[sod4602]

grazie waltribel e SlaughteredKid.

thank you, animeObsessionist, Staringathesun and questcequetufait.

danke (i think) EvarocksDarmstadt

thank you all very much. glad you appreciate it.

[waltribel]

bellissimo!!!!!

[animeObsessionist]

i just listened to the song in french class :) really cool, and the bird is adorable.

[EvaRocksDarmstadt]

wie süüüüß!!!

[Staringathesun]

That little bird is adorable.

[yoyental]

Beautiful!

[SlaughteredKid]

:))) Molto bene! Veramente 'luce' e divertente!

[chez1029flips]

hahahhhahha

[questcequetufait]

that was really cool. we just read this poem in french class today. too bad this wasn't in french. but either way, i really enjoyed this. good job!

[sod4602]

hello and thank you renegade. there is an other short movie on my account videos. thanxs for the critics, the animation process was done by 2 collegues of mine, who gave it the intention they thought appropriate for the short. one blocked out the whole thing, the other one refined out the animation working on Fcurves and so... the expressions are infact not perfect beacuse of a modeling problem (my mistake) and some linearity on non mixable blend shapes.

cheers!

[renegade5005]

Nice animation! great camera movements. the animation could be more realistic. Maybe try working more on the animation curves. nice modeling style. The face expressions are a bit stiff.

I'd give it an -A

thanks a lot for sharing. Do you have any links to any other works?

[sod4602]

hy ozadi thanks for the nice comment. i'm 4602 from xsibase by the way. you can find a subtitled ver here nofatclips com/pagecriture/pagedecriture.­mp4 cheers!

[OzAdi]

Didnt understand much, but GREAT! :)

[sod4602]

@alzemon: muchas gracias! de los mejores comentarios hasta ahora recividos!

@flyinga: thanx a lot! glad you liked it mate.

it's basically a math lesson... 1+1=2... and so on. the child says "come and play with me birdy!". and at the end the teacher get's upset.

[FlyingA]

I don't understand italian either, but i loved it! Great animating and modelling.

[alzemon]

De parte de mi hija "esta muy bien hecho"

[sod4602]

thanks thatsewalds!

thanks egokesi. we decided to use the same chararacter for "artistic" and technical reasons. as well as a practical thing. we took the desition at the begining and we stook with it. it would have been great to have the time to desing, model, and rig 10 characters, but we played it the best we could. cheers!

[egokesi]

saw your link on cgtalk. don't know italian but it was understandable :)

nice modeling. perhaps you could have had different looking students and I bet many people told you that already. well a nice short overall ;)

[ThatsEwalds]

Just fantastic!

Great story,colours and animation.

5Stars!