this is pure transcendence ...a thing of being ripped from the material world..plunged right back towards it,and then away again...a rites of passage towards whatever enlightenment turns out to be...and that perfect merciless rain in the background....i love how you're going right out there mark.
@Idlinfarm Great! Thank you Ida. I could hardly hear myself speak at times, for the rain. Seemed like the right moment to record though, suitably distorted, somehow distant.
this is pure transcendence ...a thing of being ripped from the material world..plunged right back towards it,and then away again...a rites of passage towards whatever enlightenment turns out to be...and that perfect merciless rain in the background....i love how you're going right out there mark.
marycigarettes 1 month ago
@marycigarettes Fab comment, thank you mary. I'll push on and try to finish writing the series..
dashpoet 1 month ago
Excellent. I am going to listen to this a couple more times.
cosmicskydaddy1 2 months ago
@cosmicskydaddy1 I do hope this piece stood up to further listening! Cheers to you, and thanks for the feedback, Mark
dashpoet 1 month ago
Your poems are so genuine and warm-hearted - it makes me think deep into my heart as well!!
<3
SybylFlight 2 months ago
@SybylFlight That is a lovely comment to receive, thank you. I can't stop myself! A blessing and a curse...
dashpoet 1 month ago
Excellent. It held me to the end.
Idlinfarm 2 months ago
@Idlinfarm Great! Thank you Ida. I could hardly hear myself speak at times, for the rain. Seemed like the right moment to record though, suitably distorted, somehow distant.
dashpoet 2 months ago
Beautifully written (struggled to stop myself saying "tastefully written") extended metaphor. Happy Christmas! :-)
PoetLina 2 months ago
@PoetLina Thanks PoetLina, and best wishes back to you. I won't tell the turkeys!
dashpoet 2 months ago