Jarrod Yeomans - Skeletons (original) (C)

[dreamcatcher1090]

good job:)~

[darkamythyst]

doing great, nice sound!!! keep smiling and stay cool!!!

5*****

[IRISH4711]

you're doing incredibly well, jarrod, and you're getting better as you go along... keep up the great work!!!

[cassie0722]

LOVE these lyrics -- amazing. Still a little more punch...? Your voice is great...sound very soulful like Mayer, maybe you could handle going up a half step on the chorus and staying there? Do some skat or somethin?

[allshookup77]

Excellent! You wrote a good song here with a good message too! Well done, I enjoyed it very much... FrAnK (★★★★★)

[Belyeomans]

I like all of it except the

"face your demons fight back

dont let them keep you under attack"

for some reason . . .

The rest is good, that part for some reason just doesn't sit right? I don't know, good work thought look forward to hearing more

[arcticwolf1985]

thanks bru

ill give it a look in

[cdkkiss1952]

Another great original song..I look forward to hearing your songs in the future..

Craig.

[groberson2007]

Your songwriting shows talent...5 Stars!

Subbed...

Keep it coming.

[bester34]

I enjoyed the message of your song. Keep writing songs. You are a talent song writer.

[ABELPACMOR]

Great song !! keep rockin !! thanks for sharing !!

Have u seen my last songs ?? Hugs

[funkyro0ock]

thats good

i was amized

goood job

[eddiemaidenfan]

Nice song :D your vocie is very good :D

[Fatherfilms]

Really liked this dude, lyrics are really good, really spoke to me I guess, nice tune as well. Very nice stuff

[arcticwolf1985]

thanks :)

[ChichaCanna]

Here is a sweet lullaby... i like your voice a lot

[AshleyTroxursox]

i like it, well done!!! :)

[bikergirl254]

very nice job

[brittanyleeann04]

Very nice:)

[jjfan17]

i like da line 'drown dem in da light'

good song ***** XD

[menelikjoe]

really cool, I like your choices in the songs you cover!

[chaz23j]

I like the 2nd verse man. I know it's still 'new' but, maybe I would do more contrast in the vocals to the strumming pattern. Together they're 'short' in pattern may to contrast the strumming draw out the notes more in singing. Idk you'll figure more stuff out as you play. Good luck! :-)

[joeyjoejoejunior2009]

could use some refining but all in all pretty good

8/10 :)