wow, you guys r even smarter. i was calling them freshman when they were freshman. i think i would know they arent now since i go to school with them. way to be stupid guys
Its ok for freshmen work I guess...It seems kinda well boring though. Just add somestuff to make it stand out and make people want more..,like if I was in assembly and heard this I would fall asleep.
bwah-ha-ha mwa-ha-ha! Greetings from General Ursin, I see you have 1158 hits (including my hit here). Maybe we should talk... Talk about surrender? Maybe you can solve a few quadratic equations for me and I'll be easy on you all.
thats the point i was trying to get across i was not trying to be mean or rude just that maybe next time get some tips from Mr. Riebli since he dose teach video editing or let his class go over it since me being in the class i would have gladly taken a look at.
I understand that students put a lot of work into making this it just needs something to make it stand out
MelloxMaster makes some really good points. I always figured that the correlation between the students' pictures and the text of the poem was obvious, but now I see that it's not.
The way I see it: Freshmen (and teenagers in general) are often stereotyped and underestimated. By pairing these everyday pictures of freshmen with lines of poetry that speak to great ambition and great potential, it, well. . . it shows people what teenagers can do.
It was okay. I really liked the poem and how you guys showed off the students of your school. Though it was a little boring, just seeing pic over pic does get a little tiring. Though the poem is excellently done and just the easy soft guitar in the background is nice. The only thing I wondered is, What does the poem have to do with all the students of your school?
One last thing, I wouldn't really know how to change your presentation without taking all the pics off. Dont try to add a whole bunch of different transitions, that makes it look horrible, but just try something different maybe?
Thank you for your feedback on the video, and for taking the time to post a response to it. Not very many viewers are so kind.
Please keep in mind, though, that a lot of people worked really hard on this, and while your criticism may hold validity and weight, it is more likely to be accepted if delivered in a constructive way.
i dont know u guys???? I think u got somthing more in there, somthing better
FASTMOVINGBROOK 1 year ago
that was fagish
elindiokiller 3 years ago
god alex lanz is a sexy beast
JoelFandel1 3 years ago
FRESHMAN NOOBS!!!!!!
hamslice1600 4 years ago
their not freshman anymoe dumbass
powpuGR 4 years ago
Well aren't you smart. It's almost been a year since this, so obviously were not freshman anymore.
xoelizabethleeox 4 years ago
wow, you guys r even smarter. i was calling them freshman when they were freshman. i think i would know they arent now since i go to school with them. way to be stupid guys
hamslice1600 4 years ago
Its ok for freshmen work I guess...It seems kinda well boring though. Just add somestuff to make it stand out and make people want more..,like if I was in assembly and heard this I would fall asleep.
sayyestoemo 4 years ago
0:33 rocks
jamesdas2 4 years ago
Tyler and Marshan have the best expressions :P
massault 4 years ago
We got 1,749 hits. It may not be 10,000. And we may have lost, but I would say that was pretty good for 20 days. (=
xoelizabethleeox 4 years ago
3 minutes until midnight, it looks like we have lost.
Ticket53 4 years ago
The war is not over. I can promise everyone that.
primbirdhs 4 years ago
Lets see here...
Since my last post 2 days ago you went from 1158 hits to 1246 hits.
That's (1246-1158)/2 = 39 hits per day.
With 10 ten days left we can extrapolate: 39*10 + 1246 = 1636 hits!
jonnyursin 4 years ago
bwah-ha-ha mwa-ha-ha! Greetings from General Ursin, I see you have 1158 hits (including my hit here). Maybe we should talk... Talk about surrender? Maybe you can solve a few quadratic equations for me and I'll be easy on you all.
jonnyursin 4 years ago
ten thousand hits everyone COME ON
greendaylvr101 4 years ago
to smithdl
thats the point i was trying to get across i was not trying to be mean or rude just that maybe next time get some tips from Mr. Riebli since he dose teach video editing or let his class go over it since me being in the class i would have gladly taken a look at.
I understand that students put a lot of work into making this it just needs something to make it stand out
sry for the miss understanding
mythicalgenius 4 years ago
what happens if you dont get 10,000 hits?
powpuGR 4 years ago
MelloxMaster makes some really good points. I always figured that the correlation between the students' pictures and the text of the poem was obvious, but now I see that it's not.
The way I see it: Freshmen (and teenagers in general) are often stereotyped and underestimated. By pairing these everyday pictures of freshmen with lines of poetry that speak to great ambition and great potential, it, well. . . it shows people what teenagers can do.
smithdl 4 years ago
It was okay. I really liked the poem and how you guys showed off the students of your school. Though it was a little boring, just seeing pic over pic does get a little tiring. Though the poem is excellently done and just the easy soft guitar in the background is nice. The only thing I wondered is, What does the poem have to do with all the students of your school?
MelloxMaster 4 years ago
One last thing, I wouldn't really know how to change your presentation without taking all the pics off. Dont try to add a whole bunch of different transitions, that makes it look horrible, but just try something different maybe?
MelloxMaster 4 years ago
its good
smile4me16 4 years ago
I agree with Mr. Smith on the response to mythicalgenius. But thank you for your feedback and for your criticism.
xoelizabethleeox 4 years ago
Dear Mythical Genius,
Thank you for your feedback on the video, and for taking the time to post a response to it. Not very many viewers are so kind.
Please keep in mind, though, that a lot of people worked really hard on this, and while your criticism may hold validity and weight, it is more likely to be accepted if delivered in a constructive way.
Thank you,
Derek Smith
smithdl 4 years ago
eh..... could have been better with some animation just pic after pic gets really old like i literally fell asleep watching this its so boreing
mythicalgenius 4 years ago
WE NEED TEN THOUSAND HITS! EVERYONE HELP!!!!!
Thanks From Taylor
primbirdhs 4 years ago
What a talented bunch! Mrs. R
primbirdhs 4 years ago
Great job...good for you!
nancymoon 4 years ago
THIS IS GREAT!!!!
io watched 2:42 of it and i saw myslfe
haha
---Fudgey---
fudgey1919 4 years ago
Woot Woot! Libby is first! She looks like a dork.
AbigailMary 4 years ago
this is so amazing. =]
munchkinxxrawrr 4 years ago
10,000 hits y'all.
smithdl 4 years ago
im not in it! bahaha
chandlergirl 4 years ago
I love this so much. Somebody please give it to me on a disk or something?
KeefeChalk 4 years ago
YES! It's done. Finally!(=
we're amazing.
xoelizabethleeox 4 years ago