Also towards the breakfast club scene: You might try lowering your voice a bit with the same inflections and seeing what you think of the video with a bit lower, or perhaps sharper, voice compared to the video posted that had a bit of a raspy sound from what I could hear. It might come off more powerful with a lower tone. Overall I think the acting is above average.
In this J's ladder video, I think you should come off more jittery and with wider eyes and see what you think.
Nice job being vulnerable first off- though I agree with greencow. From my perception, your voice inflections outweigh what's showing on your face through a lot of this scene. I felt this towards the breakfast club re-enactment as well. Your voice was very good in that but I didn't get enough of the principal's threat as a sense of lunatic excitement towards the idea of fighting Bender and winning.
I haven't seen the movie this is from, but I felt that in the beginning most of your energy was focused on your vocals and that sacrificed some good reactions you could have had in your facial expressions, but raising the stakes really made a difference in the second half. :)
Being a proffesional West End drama tutor, I'd say you're not bad. To be critical however, your breathing is incredibly timed. Tone down the breathing and remember the expression before movement rule. Move less express more. But remember subtle. Your voice I'm glad to say is near enough perfect, if not quite the impersonation of Tim Robbins. I can't judge fully because I haven't seen you in person or act at other roles. You could act like this all the time. Keep at it you can make it. Work it.
hey, its triplej909's brother. WOW!! your amazing. U truly will make it very far in life if u keep that talent of yours up. I'm an actor my self, me and my brother enjoy acting ALOT, but we're just beginning.
like the vid, and loving the quality of the new camera!!! man i love your acting!! its truly a work of art...oh yea and how much did the cam cost? i'm thinking of gettin one myself.
Well done! And thank you for uploading it for our audition!
TinkStoneProductions 1 year ago
I think this is a spectacular job. Especially considering, ya know, you're talking to a wall. This would be excellent anyways
tiptonsimsxo 1 year ago
You're at your sisters silly hahah this is my house! I was probably outside the door like WTF is he doing hahahah I love this
tiptonsimsxo 1 year ago
@tiptonsimsxo: Hahaha, you probably were. That was when we did that connect-ti-cutt scene, lol.
ArtsyPhilosophyGuy 1 year ago
You're awesome Keith.
tiptonsimsxo 1 year ago
Woah, thats amazing. You'd be good in a real movie. How's my acting? please tell me
SheaCassandra 1 year ago
hey man! Nice work!
Bfolks84 2 years ago
Also towards the breakfast club scene: You might try lowering your voice a bit with the same inflections and seeing what you think of the video with a bit lower, or perhaps sharper, voice compared to the video posted that had a bit of a raspy sound from what I could hear. It might come off more powerful with a lower tone. Overall I think the acting is above average.
In this J's ladder video, I think you should come off more jittery and with wider eyes and see what you think.
Great job.
Rosabeth06 2 years ago
Nice job being vulnerable first off- though I agree with greencow. From my perception, your voice inflections outweigh what's showing on your face through a lot of this scene. I felt this towards the breakfast club re-enactment as well. Your voice was very good in that but I didn't get enough of the principal's threat as a sense of lunatic excitement towards the idea of fighting Bender and winning.
Rosabeth06 2 years ago
Excellent job my friend!
Gaby.
pili2255 3 years ago
Are you Chris Pontius' "Jackass"stunt double?
lesliepetros 3 years ago
I haven't seen the movie this is from, but I felt that in the beginning most of your energy was focused on your vocals and that sacrificed some good reactions you could have had in your facial expressions, but raising the stakes really made a difference in the second half. :)
greencow423 3 years ago
You are really good man. I got a feeling you'll make it.
Hard work, does pay off.
MentalShakeDownTV 3 years ago
For some reason you remind me of a soap opera actor
ironclownfish 3 years ago
You got some talent. Good job.
jenniiie 3 years ago
If you lived in portland Orgegon i would try to get you in my short films... So yeah, your acting is pretty goddamn good.
RedLetterDayFilms 3 years ago
good job
WOF08 3 years ago
Your really good
Torzadio 3 years ago
Being a proffesional West End drama tutor, I'd say you're not bad. To be critical however, your breathing is incredibly timed. Tone down the breathing and remember the expression before movement rule. Move less express more. But remember subtle. Your voice I'm glad to say is near enough perfect, if not quite the impersonation of Tim Robbins. I can't judge fully because I haven't seen you in person or act at other roles. You could act like this all the time. Keep at it you can make it. Work it.
phil946 3 years ago
ye u r good.... try not to move about quite as much tho
keep the body actions strong but try to stand more or less in one place
you seem to have quite a gud understanding of the role
be a bit more facially expressive but unless its a drama obviously dont go too over the top
gud luck with it
logopants 4 years ago
great!!!
GreenDaygirl0766 4 years ago
ive seen alot worse. keep i up man.
Fearlessskater19 4 years ago
Cool =D
Dammprinsessan 4 years ago
it was ok.
PoopSlop 4 years ago
Awesome...you should do this full time.
dramafreeek 4 years ago
very nice delivery. Good choice w/ Jacobs ladder also.
hurtzwolf 4 years ago
a bad trip isn't quite like this.
it's more like curling up in a ball and rocking. or talking in weird sentences that make no sense. you're way too calm.
spanky43 4 years ago
ok I have no clue what is going on here. Is he auditioning for a crappy soap opera?
RuinerxxSINCITY 4 years ago
hahah props.
primordialoddity 4 years ago
good acting, almost professional
nuts1972 4 years ago
wtf, was tht real? was he talkin to anyone?
bad buzzz
Nostix88 4 years ago
hey, its triplej909's brother. WOW!! your amazing. U truly will make it very far in life if u keep that talent of yours up. I'm an actor my self, me and my brother enjoy acting ALOT, but we're just beginning.
OutCrown 4 years ago
like the vid, and loving the quality of the new camera!!! man i love your acting!! its truly a work of art...oh yea and how much did the cam cost? i'm thinking of gettin one myself.
triplej909 4 years ago