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  • awe so cute!!! love this story!

  • MY NAME'S BROOKE ! YESS ! i made out with joe jonas, and im okay with that (:

  • lucky!!! hahahaha

  • God

    I love the translated once. Joe was funny, nick was hot.

    just. absolutely loved it!

  • Hahaha "You want to do what they're doing?" Hahaha!!! Joe make me crack up!! :D

  • YAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY WHAT ABOUT KEVIN?!?! Dx HOOK HIM UP TOO!!!!!:[[[[[[[[[

    I LOVE KEVY!

  • so sweet! and very sexy indeed!

    I thought is was funny when Joe and Brooke just decided to kiss lol...

    great chapter! :D

  • i thought their mum would of opened the curtain.. i actually swore out loud when i read that and my mum looked at me and raised her eyebrow so i said "i said sheep mum! sheep, theres sheep in the video! haha" then she asked to see the sheep so i ran upstairs with the laptop and swore again :)

    Awesome chapter :D

  • haha did you know that I'm Keri by day and Bob by night? No? Well now you do. It's a secret, so ssh! xD

    and that was more of a question than a rhetorical question, sorry lol If I think of a good one, I'll let ya know ;D

    Ah! Totally loved this chapter!

    I like the description you made when they were making out. I almost felt like I was making out too hahaha, okay, that don't make sense but it did to me xD

    I love how Joe and Brooke just stand there. I'd be like "do you mind?!" haha

    Love you Doody!x

  • I can't seem to get those dumbass questions right! GAHH!

    It made sense to me... And now I don't know if the making out thing was a good choice xD

    Love you too Bob

  • Oh I've got a rhetorical question for ya.

    Say if something bad was to happen and you would complain about it. You'd say "why me?!" or "why does this always happen to me?!"

    THAT'S a rhetorical question because you aren't addressing anyone in particular and so people can't necessarily answer it...yeah, you get how it works? lol

    I hope you get it now :D

  • gaahh...

    That was soo cute :)

  • OMFJ IM CRINGING RIGHT NOW :L.. I Know I should comment at the end of it but I had to put this in :L.. I'm right where Joe pulls the cirtian open.. Crap.. They got caught BAADDD :L Awesome so far...

    Ok, I just finished it.. AWESOME!! I Loved it!! Cant wait for the next one!!

  • Can I ask why you were cringing? 'Cause to me, that's a bad thing...

    But you still loved it, so thank you. But I'm getting mixed signals :S

  • Noo Noo... Cringing isnt a bad thing!!!!!! Noo!! Its like me getting embarrassed for the character!! I Love it! Not hate it!! Sorry for the misunderstanding!!

  • I actually know what you mean now ;) I do that ALL the time!!! No problem for the misunderstanding. It was my bad ;)

  • Phew.. I thought you were like guna hate me for hating your stories!! Noo I'm like in love with them.. Lol

  • No, of course not :)

    Thank you :)

  • ahh! im a new subscriber.. gah these are amazzzziinnngg!!! ahahah more (:

  • Ooo Summer and Nick!! That was so funny and cute. Haha

  • bahhhh! it's so cuuuuuute i can hardly take it!!!

    seriously. keep posting!

  • haha.... Love it!

  • whoa. of course joe and brooke would be the only ones too oblivious to realize they probably shouldn't let them close the curtain again.... haha awesome chapter!! again!!! post more soon!!!

  • AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I LOVEEE IT!!!! it was like so sweet... they were making out the whole chapter... lol

    i wish i was her... lol

    post moreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleassssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­eeee

  • this chapter was RED HOT!!!! ok, ironically, Burnin' Up is playing right now. (u no, red hot, burnin up....yeah, i'm not funny) but i just realized not only that those 2 r similar but the significance of Burnin' Up playing while they make out. i get it now..... XD

    sry my comment makes no sense but, the point i'm trying to make is that that chapter was AWESOME. that's all. lol.

    POST MORE SOON!!! <3

  • I love how your comments make no sense :D But yeah, I purposely put Burnin' Up in this chapter :)

  • OOW!

    hahaha I loved the "this was fate" part!

    like totally romantic! haha

    I agree about the golden youtube emmy... from: lazylaura94

    hahaha

  • "Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of?

    If you actually say that out loud, you WILL start laughing! lol I love this chapter it was so cute!

  • HAHA I SO TRIED SAYING IT OUTLOUD AND IT WAS HILARIOUS! lol

  • lol i know right...

    btw r u stuck on caps lock? lol jk

  • haha now i was just very hyper ..im always hyper! :D

  • I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! WOOOO!!! hahaha.

    so did joe ask brooke to officially be his girlfriend, or did they just assume they are together?? lol

  • more plz=] nick and summer r such a cute couple=]] i wonder wat theyd be call like nummer or sick haha or wat a bout joe and brook jook? or broe?????????lol

  • Hahaha they all made out LOL thanks for posting today. Kristin

  • Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of?

    best part i wish i won that contest i would love every min of it lol

  • woah man...

    you win the golden youtube emmy :D

    lol....

    for the best Jonas Love Story.

    I mean if there is any better then send 'em to me but i am staying with you SHAAAAY "DD

  • do i smell a sex scene in the near future? lol

    LOVE IT!!!!

  • No, you don't :) Just felt like I had to clear that up :)

  • "Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of? Summer forces out. I grin and kiss towards her collarbone.

    No This was fate, I mutter into her collarbone

    love this part

    great chapter as always :)

  • POST MORE!

  • Wow!! Love it :D Reminds me of something lol xD

    Joe, Joe, Joe... did you really have to ask? I thought you already knew the answer ;P

    Post more soon :D

  • You're kidding me right? ;) BAD BEX <3

  • WHAT?! I'm just saying ;P <3

  • I totally see you like, looking around and smiling. Don't ask me why ;) <3 you too

  • almost got too far good thing brook and joe came in!!!!!! but i dont think nick and summer would do that...but who knows!! btw love your stories keep writing!!!! post more....like toite pleasseeee

  • Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of? Summer forces out. I grin and kiss towards her collarbone.

    lol!! hee hee YAY!! i loved this

    once again i love how you write Descriptively!!

    lol LOTS OF LOVEEEE

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