i thought their mum would of opened the curtain.. i actually swore out loud when i read that and my mum looked at me and raised her eyebrow so i said "i said sheep mum! sheep, theres sheep in the video! haha" then she asked to see the sheep so i ran upstairs with the laptop and swore again :)
haha did you know that I'm Keri by day and Bob by night? No? Well now you do. It's a secret, so ssh! xD
and that was more of a question than a rhetorical question, sorry lol If I think of a good one, I'll let ya know ;D
Ah! Totally loved this chapter!
I like the description you made when they were making out. I almost felt like I was making out too hahaha, okay, that don't make sense but it did to me xD
I love how Joe and Brooke just stand there. I'd be like "do you mind?!" haha
Say if something bad was to happen and you would complain about it. You'd say "why me?!" or "why does this always happen to me?!"
THAT'S a rhetorical question because you aren't addressing anyone in particular and so people can't necessarily answer it...yeah, you get how it works? lol
OMFJ IM CRINGING RIGHT NOW :L.. I Know I should comment at the end of it but I had to put this in :L.. I'm right where Joe pulls the cirtian open.. Crap.. They got caught BAADDD :L Awesome so far...
Ok, I just finished it.. AWESOME!! I Loved it!! Cant wait for the next one!!
Noo Noo... Cringing isnt a bad thing!!!!!! Noo!! Its like me getting embarrassed for the character!! I Love it! Not hate it!! Sorry for the misunderstanding!!
whoa. of course joe and brooke would be the only ones too oblivious to realize they probably shouldn't let them close the curtain again.... haha awesome chapter!! again!!! post more soon!!!
this chapter was RED HOT!!!! ok, ironically, Burnin' Up is playing right now. (u no, red hot, burnin up....yeah, i'm not funny) but i just realized not only that those 2 r similar but the significance of Burnin' Up playing while they make out. i get it now..... XD
sry my comment makes no sense but, the point i'm trying to make is that that chapter was AWESOME. that's all. lol.
more plz=] nick and summer r such a cute couple=]] i wonder wat theyd be call like nummer or sick haha or wat a bout joe and brook jook? or broe?????????lol
almost got too far good thing brook and joe came in!!!!!! but i dont think nick and summer would do that...but who knows!! btw love your stories keep writing!!!! post more....like toite pleasseeee
awe so cute!!! love this story!
AllyandFroggy 2 years ago
MY NAME'S BROOKE ! YESS ! i made out with joe jonas, and im okay with that (:
xnickjonasismyheroxo 2 years ago 3
lucky!!! hahahaha
2good2be4gottenepms 2 years ago
God
I love the translated once. Joe was funny, nick was hot.
just. absolutely loved it!
Janaaahaa 2 years ago
Hahaha "You want to do what they're doing?" Hahaha!!! Joe make me crack up!! :D
TheTwilightTwins232 2 years ago 2
YAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY WHAT ABOUT KEVIN?!?! Dx HOOK HIM UP TOO!!!!!:[[[[[[[[[
I LOVE KEVY!
kmandze33 2 years ago 6
so sweet! and very sexy indeed!
I thought is was funny when Joe and Brooke just decided to kiss lol...
great chapter! :D
jadealexmorgan 2 years ago
i thought their mum would of opened the curtain.. i actually swore out loud when i read that and my mum looked at me and raised her eyebrow so i said "i said sheep mum! sheep, theres sheep in the video! haha" then she asked to see the sheep so i ran upstairs with the laptop and swore again :)
Awesome chapter :D
StacyLuvzNickJonas 2 years ago
haha did you know that I'm Keri by day and Bob by night? No? Well now you do. It's a secret, so ssh! xD
and that was more of a question than a rhetorical question, sorry lol If I think of a good one, I'll let ya know ;D
Ah! Totally loved this chapter!
I like the description you made when they were making out. I almost felt like I was making out too hahaha, okay, that don't make sense but it did to me xD
I love how Joe and Brooke just stand there. I'd be like "do you mind?!" haha
Love you Doody!x
cutierose1234 2 years ago
I can't seem to get those dumbass questions right! GAHH!
It made sense to me... And now I don't know if the making out thing was a good choice xD
Love you too Bob
Shay081793 2 years ago
Oh I've got a rhetorical question for ya.
Say if something bad was to happen and you would complain about it. You'd say "why me?!" or "why does this always happen to me?!"
THAT'S a rhetorical question because you aren't addressing anyone in particular and so people can't necessarily answer it...yeah, you get how it works? lol
I hope you get it now :D
cutierose1234 2 years ago
gaahh...
That was soo cute :)
LovingTheKevinJonas 2 years ago
OMFJ IM CRINGING RIGHT NOW :L.. I Know I should comment at the end of it but I had to put this in :L.. I'm right where Joe pulls the cirtian open.. Crap.. They got caught BAADDD :L Awesome so far...
Ok, I just finished it.. AWESOME!! I Loved it!! Cant wait for the next one!!
ILoveJonasForeverxD 2 years ago
Can I ask why you were cringing? 'Cause to me, that's a bad thing...
But you still loved it, so thank you. But I'm getting mixed signals :S
Shay081793 2 years ago
Noo Noo... Cringing isnt a bad thing!!!!!! Noo!! Its like me getting embarrassed for the character!! I Love it! Not hate it!! Sorry for the misunderstanding!!
ILoveJonasForeverxD 2 years ago
I actually know what you mean now ;) I do that ALL the time!!! No problem for the misunderstanding. It was my bad ;)
Shay081793 2 years ago
Phew.. I thought you were like guna hate me for hating your stories!! Noo I'm like in love with them.. Lol
ILoveJonasForeverxD 2 years ago
No, of course not :)
Thank you :)
Shay081793 2 years ago
ahh! im a new subscriber.. gah these are amazzzziinnngg!!! ahahah more (:
xxMissNickJonasxx5 2 years ago
Ooo Summer and Nick!! That was so funny and cute. Haha
irongirlstri 2 years ago
bahhhh! it's so cuuuuuute i can hardly take it!!!
seriously. keep posting!
CoolKidsSayEh 2 years ago
haha.... Love it!
lollipop950093 2 years ago
whoa. of course joe and brooke would be the only ones too oblivious to realize they probably shouldn't let them close the curtain again.... haha awesome chapter!! again!!! post more soon!!!
x0MrsNickJonas11010x 2 years ago
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I LOVEEE IT!!!! it was like so sweet... they were making out the whole chapter... lol
i wish i was her... lol
post moreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleassssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
bayardi 2 years ago
this chapter was RED HOT!!!! ok, ironically, Burnin' Up is playing right now. (u no, red hot, burnin up....yeah, i'm not funny) but i just realized not only that those 2 r similar but the significance of Burnin' Up playing while they make out. i get it now..... XD
sry my comment makes no sense but, the point i'm trying to make is that that chapter was AWESOME. that's all. lol.
POST MORE SOON!!! <3
xoxogg77 2 years ago
I love how your comments make no sense :D But yeah, I purposely put Burnin' Up in this chapter :)
Shay081793 2 years ago
OOW!
hahaha I loved the "this was fate" part!
like totally romantic! haha
I agree about the golden youtube emmy... from: lazylaura94
hahaha
analau93 2 years ago
"Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of?
If you actually say that out loud, you WILL start laughing! lol I love this chapter it was so cute!
charmedangel95 2 years ago
HAHA I SO TRIED SAYING IT OUTLOUD AND IT WAS HILARIOUS! lol
kmandze33 2 years ago
lol i know right...
btw r u stuck on caps lock? lol jk
charmedangel95 2 years ago
haha now i was just very hyper ..im always hyper! :D
kmandze33 2 years ago
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! WOOOO!!! hahaha.
so did joe ask brooke to officially be his girlfriend, or did they just assume they are together?? lol
coeyjbfan93 2 years ago
more plz=] nick and summer r such a cute couple=]] i wonder wat theyd be call like nummer or sick haha or wat a bout joe and brook jook? or broe?????????lol
bratierocker71 2 years ago
Hahaha they all made out LOL thanks for posting today. Kristin
nltvfcjblover 2 years ago
Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of?
best part i wish i won that contest i would love every min of it lol
lydiaxo33 2 years ago
woah man...
you win the golden youtube emmy :D
lol....
for the best Jonas Love Story.
I mean if there is any better then send 'em to me but i am staying with you SHAAAAY "DD
lazylaura94 2 years ago
do i smell a sex scene in the near future? lol
LOVE IT!!!!
nicksgirl2012 2 years ago
No, you don't :) Just felt like I had to clear that up :)
Shay081793 2 years ago
"Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of? Summer forces out. I grin and kiss towards her collarbone.
No This was fate, I mutter into her collarbone
love this part
great chapter as always :)
jblovers65 2 years ago
POST MORE!
ilovenickjonas1494 2 years ago
Wow!! Love it :D Reminds me of something lol xD
Joe, Joe, Joe... did you really have to ask? I thought you already knew the answer ;P
Post more soon :D
BexDee 2 years ago
You're kidding me right? ;) BAD BEX <3
Shay081793 2 years ago
WHAT?! I'm just saying ;P <3
BexDee 2 years ago
I totally see you like, looking around and smiling. Don't ask me why ;) <3 you too
Shay081793 2 years ago
almost got too far good thing brook and joe came in!!!!!! but i dont think nick and summer would do that...but who knows!! btw love your stories keep writing!!!! post more....like toite pleasseeee
hoopz10195 2 years ago
Did I—pant—win a—pant—contest I—gasp—wasnt aware of? Summer forces out. I grin and kiss towards her collarbone.
lol!! hee hee YAY!! i loved this
once again i love how you write Descriptively!!
lol LOTS OF LOVEEEE
k2babyk2 2 years ago