Eminem's Verse - We Shine

[steveofromthecuse12]

@ MrFlargas

I seen flargas n threw him in a can of garbage, it was August, this motherfucker had the largest, domepiece i had ever seen....i laughed n screamed, at the same time, n punched him in his fuckin spleen....he curled up like a phetus, i kicked his ass like butt- head did to beavis, n locked him down like darelle revis, thats word to jesus, keep this, in your fuckin mind, n hold it there like it was one of a kind

[steveofromthecuse12]

@ MrFlargas

Damn i cant believe someone commenmted on my verse.....flargas being totally honest with you i wrote that in about 5-10 minutes one night after i saw some other kid who wrote some garbage ass verse...i got a few more under some other old skool eminem songs...but i jus do it to piss other people off....here ill make one for u real quick

[cocodrillo1012]

Dude... Remix or not this shit is FIRE!! If this ain't the original can someone PLEASE let me know the name if the original

[theshit1209]

Is this the original beat for this verse?

[robotchickenaj]

straight fire man. i wish more people knew about this shit than just lighters and love the way you lie.

[helloulotful]

whats te beat name?

[kevpizza911]

your sour, go take a fuckin shower, i can write more ryhmes in a minute then u can in an hour, im gonna devour, higher than the fuckin CN tower, im losing all my power, to this coward, whos looking like a howard, i see u movin backwards like ur a small turd, im gonna kill u just like all the other nerds

[steveofromthecuse12]

@AlphaKovax

AlphaKovax, lose an arm like mad max, get smacked n go eat ur girls pussy snatch.

Just for u, imma rite this rhyme in less then two, send it ur way n see wat the fuck u do.

"man you are so whack" faggot git cracked, git ur whip jacked, if i ever seen u in person id kick u in ur nutsack, then laugh while u thriving pain, aim at ya dame, make that slut give me some brain, fuck her up her ass n leave a nasty stain, rite across her face, ill see u anytime anyplace.......U BIRRDDD

[MrFlargas]

@steveofromthecuse12 How long did it take you to write that, that was good but that verse was probably bitten. other wise that was a neat rap but ur not impressing anyone with the dumb comments make a song id give them a listen

[steveofromthecuse12]

@crazytrent01 crazytrent u should give up rapping for lent

cause those rhymes are patheitic

u sound like a retarded kid tryin to set it

its over when i dead it

fake ass bitch trying to use big words

ur nothing but a fuckin bird

now put ur fuckin teeth on the curb n bite down u fuckin herb.

I hope you respond back in a timely manner

cause im holding this sledgehammer sitting here with ya grandmamma waiting for u to get here so i can body slam ya.

[AlphaKovax]

@steveofromthecuse12 man, you are so wack

[ShakaSamurai]

this song make me remmeber shit

[Whiteboyxxx44]

Damn

[R0NJ0N]

i prefer the original

[crazytrent01]

this trials and tribulations got me pissed like an emperors nation,

got my mind gathering information for this infiltration

i got this planned out,robbed a store and ran out,

just like land i expand out,im not like any of you so i standout,

fuck publicty i hate the fame,all those who took it are bieng raped today,

bye paparatzi im as angry as a ww11 Natzi

[crazytrent01]

i remeber when i had beef with this thief named westley,

he bite eminem style thats how it became deadly,

so i got on the mic n dissed him back fuck you this is what u get for talking smack,

after this he should be renamed medling,

u remind me of the cartoon show on telivsion,

where the kids find out mysterious of a place history,

n the scobby dog is a big sissy so are u shaggy,

[joeyslag]

Genius

[youralcoholicdad44]

we squash beef in the Mo

when you aint breathing no mo'

hah its so simple but dope as fuck at the same time

[SGR760]

perfect.

[MrSlimshady313]

BRILLIANT

[samthesquid]

I dont like those other remix beat onthis song*

So this originla one is good

Whole song please

[MDC313]

@samthesquid this is the whole song...the song actually starts wen EM comes

[samthesquid]

whole song lpease

I like those other remix beat this is one the best