I think chapter 14 is good. Though some sentences may be removed, you did a pretty good job. Also, it isn't an exiting chapter, because it's a bit summarising. You need that in a story once in a while. So it doesn't matter. Just keep writing, because the story is really good
I haven't been paying attension, have I? didn't see chapter 13 last time I checked, but it's really good. You can see the bond that's growing between Troy and Gabi. Please go further with writing!
thanks hun, you can read the story if you want, it's a fanfiction story and the first 11 chapters are already out. if you want to read it, the links are over there --------------->
chapter 18 is finally out
HSManubisBmw4ever 2 years ago
O_O Sharpay is going mad! I'm so exited! please get the next chapter out:P
Mathildesan 2 years ago
chapter 17 is out
HSManubisBmw4ever 2 years ago
Finally, sharpay is out of the way:P
Mathildesan 2 years ago
chapter 16 is out.
HSManubisBmw4ever 2 years ago
Gabie is finally out of trouble and it's the turn of Troy. I wonder how long it's going to take him to dump Sharpay :P though words: "I love you" :P
Keep writing, it's getting better and better.
Mathildesan 2 years ago
chapter 15 is finally out :)
HSManubisBmw4ever 2 years ago
I think chapter 14 is good. Though some sentences may be removed, you did a pretty good job. Also, it isn't an exiting chapter, because it's a bit summarising. You need that in a story once in a while. So it doesn't matter. Just keep writing, because the story is really good
Mathildesan 2 years ago
alright, thank you
HSManubisBmw4ever 2 years ago
I haven't been paying attension, have I? didn't see chapter 13 last time I checked, but it's really good. You can see the bond that's growing between Troy and Gabi. Please go further with writing!
Mathildesan 3 years ago
chapter 13 is out
HSManubisBmw4ever 3 years ago
Good old Troy. Taking care of the girls :D It was a really good chapter!
Mathildesan 3 years ago
thanks
HSManubisBmw4ever 3 years ago
chapter 12 is out
HSManubisBmw4ever 3 years ago
LOVE IT <3
it gunnuhh' be great
lilmissCute222 3 years ago
thanks hun, you can read the story if you want, it's a fanfiction story and the first 11 chapters are already out. if you want to read it, the links are over there --------------->
(in the description box)
HSManubisBmw4ever 3 years ago
chapter 11 is finally out.
HSManubisBmw4ever 3 years ago