@iMASiNGERdUh YEP.... out of all of BNV poems nothing can't and still hasn't toped that one!!! TOO REAL, with REAL EMOTIONs, Emotions of PAIN , Pain in REALITY, and REALITY IN THE TRUTH!!!!
This is the best poem I've seen from these finals so far. Not to knock any of the other poets, but their poems often turned into long anecdotes (as this one is) with the conclusion leaving something wanting. The ending of this poem left an impact and brought together every detail state before it in a rather clever way.
this girl is an inspiration to me. great poem great delievery.
youmysecretlove 3 weeks ago
This young lady is so insightful as well as a brilliant slam poet. She moves me so much. Love her!
thelipstickfemme 10 months ago
She is so INSPIRING TO ME. I love her poem everything is on point for real
bisexual234 1 year ago
wow
nayshun1 1 year ago
"i attempted to clarify my statement..." lmao! sweet
VeltGurl08 1 year ago
Talented..
ihatefakkhoez 2 years ago
brown and flaky on the outside...white and fluffy in the middle. YEP
prbyv 2 years ago
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this is horrible and her voice just makes it worse
wickcityprincess 2 years ago
Holla! You are what you eat. CLAP IT UP
BeeNaturalMe 2 years ago
whats a jim crow south? i know about jim crow laws but i dont get it.
jj11895 2 years ago
@jj11895 That's exactly it. Jim Crow south refers to ALL of the southern states that had Jim Crow laws.
bubblebuttxo 1 year ago
YOU ARE WHAT YOU EAT!!!!!
i like that
brave new voices is my show.!
philly the best!!
chunkichunkz 2 years ago
the main thing i love about this poem is the imagery that she brings she is an amazing writter!
babyof83 2 years ago 2
This is so ill and poetically beautiful... and that conclusion is as perfect as perfect can get.
poetryselite 2 years ago 2
Wow
young7hriller 2 years ago 2
her poem crutches is ABSOLUTELY amazinGGG! greatness.! greatness;
iMASiNGERdUh 2 years ago 8
i'm searhing to and that one and i can't i'm sad
lalaanddada 2 years ago
i meant i'm searching for that one. I love CRUTCHES. this one is awesome as well. her words are so real
lalaanddada 2 years ago
@iMASiNGERdUh YEP.... out of all of BNV poems nothing can't and still hasn't toped that one!!! TOO REAL, with REAL EMOTIONs, Emotions of PAIN , Pain in REALITY, and REALITY IN THE TRUTH!!!!
magiccow64 10 months ago
her poem "crutches" is just as amazing, she's great.
KozPlay 2 years ago 3
"As she scooped up the 1930's Jim Crow South and put it in her mouth, I suddenly remembered.... You are what you eat"
All I can say is DAMN. Her metaphors are on point.
brownsuga0323 3 years ago 17
Wow wow the use of metaphors
rblast14 3 years ago
damn she killed it.
samia719 3 years ago
my favorite
UrbanInkpen 3 years ago
'suddenly i remembered, you are what you eat.' that was fantastic!!!
cuzoma7 3 years ago
omg
the metaphors & message was ridiculous!
[in a good way lol]
keda416 3 years ago 3
Damn!
splitlevel 3 years ago
amazing.
totallytoe 3 years ago
i love it and your amazing, and love the end!
lunachiarolover 3 years ago
i love this yo this is the best one period no doubt in my mind
MI88YRISSAPOOH 3 years ago
This is the best poem I've seen from these finals so far. Not to knock any of the other poets, but their poems often turned into long anecdotes (as this one is) with the conclusion leaving something wanting. The ending of this poem left an impact and brought together every detail state before it in a rather clever way.
fookehleek 3 years ago 3
Gawd that was freakin' amazing!
ztolk 3 years ago