American Beauty meets Twilight Zone on story and directing. Good job, you told the story without going over the top - (which could have happened easily).
Wow, that was great! 5*'s from me. I enjoy making movies myself but I have trouble coming up with a short that has a fairly good story. I really enjoyed this one. Props to you!
The roses at the end weren't very noticeable, to respond to loveablemoggy
I just noticed a continuity error. At the end.. when the camera shot changes. There are red roses in front of the husband prior to 8:00. then when the camera shot changes, the roses are white. *goes back to watch again*
resembled a Hitchcock-style of story telling - had a taste of rear window and then a lil american beauty with the roses. I also enjoyed the simplicity of involving 4 characters, but only using 3 and having only really 2 interact.
looked like fun - are you all shooting on film or using high-definition?
From the moment I started watching this I went "This sounds so desperate housewives". Then whe she was talking about her missing husband I knew that he wasn't there.
The roses in the vase in the last scene are red in the close up shot but change to white in the wide shot! Seems a bit too obvious. Was it on purpose?
That was a cool short film, but at the end when the credits go on, the roses are red, then when it cuts to the guy's back you see that the roses are white. Or maybe I just saw it wrong!!!
ahhh... i dunt no, i didnt care much for it, the characters and story were pretty cliche over all, even a few shots were cliche. Having said that, the technical aspect (editing, lighting, sound, cinematography) was good. But the story itself was just "w/e" to me. Maybe cuz ive seen similar stories all over the place. Im pretty sure u can take a couple of "Simpsons" story lines and put together this film. It feels like ive seen it before. 3/5
VERY nice.
mrmossart 8 months ago
What camera was this movie shot on? Great picture, the outdoor scenes turned out very well.
StudioLineMike 2 years ago
haha!! brilliant concept
hojadecoco 2 years ago
Nice acting.
ReDNavigators 2 years ago
I guess that the message is that roses can bring out the best in us, the worst in us, and the psychotic homicidal hand-chopping murderers in us too!
charmedmagic92 2 years ago
scary...
cutaxelem 2 years ago
Well, eh.... thats a clueless husband for you.
crazy0beyond0sanity 2 years ago
Let the competition be fair and square
mohdyaserarafat 3 years ago
Nice work.
Zoldina 3 years ago
American Beauty meets Twilight Zone on story and directing. Good job, you told the story without going over the top - (which could have happened easily).
looeeez 3 years ago
hahahhaha man...
how come the husband read the same newspaper from the first minute of movie to the end....
i love the story... and camera technique
cermentious 3 years ago
Psychotic!
loveforeignaccents 3 years ago 2
Wow, that was great! 5*'s from me. I enjoy making movies myself but I have trouble coming up with a short that has a fairly good story. I really enjoyed this one. Props to you!
The roses at the end weren't very noticeable, to respond to loveablemoggy
grraorwwl 3 years ago
Omg.. do people still wear clothes from the 50's?
I just noticed a continuity error. At the end.. when the camera shot changes. There are red roses in front of the husband prior to 8:00. then when the camera shot changes, the roses are white. *goes back to watch again*
loveablemoggy 3 years ago
that's really awesome :D
HerrFischauge 3 years ago 2
reminds me of stepford wives a little
eivul 3 years ago
resembled a Hitchcock-style of story telling - had a taste of rear window and then a lil american beauty with the roses. I also enjoyed the simplicity of involving 4 characters, but only using 3 and having only really 2 interact.
looked like fun - are you all shooting on film or using high-definition?
NicChristie 3 years ago 5
LOL!!! poor woman. XD
xxhristxx 3 years ago 2
I liked it nice video!
nachobetsim 3 years ago
From the moment I started watching this I went "This sounds so desperate housewives". Then whe she was talking about her missing husband I knew that he wasn't there.
chaoticpix93 3 years ago
i saw that coming, but the film was still okay. definitely not the best i've seen from VFS though.
NthDegreeStudios 3 years ago
I loved this from the beginning :)
It's so funny how the husband never does anything else xD
crazyeye34 3 years ago
Well, that was crap.
madeye0 3 years ago
cool video....only thing is too many movies use this type of music. wrks for american beauty much else.
geoshelewis 3 years ago
New bill could mean the end to Internet piracy! ... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ionel71089 3 years ago
Nice.
The roses in the vase in the last scene are red in the close up shot but change to white in the wide shot! Seems a bit too obvious. Was it on purpose?
popaddict 3 years ago
Ugh...nuff said...
JerryChristia 3 years ago
how come the husband doenst even notice?
clumsygirlrox 3 years ago 2
he didnt care about her, even before she was gone ;)
TheBigOne0305 3 years ago
lol thats a great film!
dizzylizzy6 3 years ago
awesome :)
zaytin1 3 years ago
7:50 roses are red?
8:03 roses change to white, if there is some subtle message I don't get it, or if it was a mistake
NoDoubtFilms 3 years ago
I think it might be a production blooper.But the white roses at the end show the "blood" much better.
ridingisasport 3 years ago
whats the blooper that ur tryin to call out?
twiztidty18 3 years ago
Rose colour change. Red in garden, white in vase.
ridingisasport 3 years ago
i thinkn they change to red for a reason. to show that there was blood shed over the best rosses therefore u have the red ones instead
twiztidty18 3 years ago
That's a really messed up film either way 5/5
NoDoubtFilms 3 years ago
lol didn't see that coming xD
Lardothefox 3 years ago
hmm. thats genious! ima do the same thing for my garden! thanks for the advice!
deathsluver 3 years ago
coolio!!
coralcay222 3 years ago
i say that all the time and my friends are like " coolio? " they just dont get it. but u do!!
twiztidty18 3 years ago
behhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhsknee
Thinkproduction 3 years ago
Good work.
muleewiles 3 years ago
niceeeee!!
Thinkproduction 3 years ago
That was a cool short film, but at the end when the credits go on, the roses are red, then when it cuts to the guy's back you see that the roses are white. Or maybe I just saw it wrong!!!
Seaco1988 3 years ago
i see that too! haha i wonder if that was on pourpose!
Thinkproduction 3 years ago
Yeah maybe!!!
Seaco1988 3 years ago
Nice Job Mr. Flick. 5/5 of course. And...
Meh.
splizza 3 years ago
ahhh... i dunt no, i didnt care much for it, the characters and story were pretty cliche over all, even a few shots were cliche. Having said that, the technical aspect (editing, lighting, sound, cinematography) was good. But the story itself was just "w/e" to me. Maybe cuz ive seen similar stories all over the place. Im pretty sure u can take a couple of "Simpsons" story lines and put together this film. It feels like ive seen it before. 3/5
CellarDoorFilm 3 years ago
rate it either 1/5 or 5/5 nobody rates 3's and 4's anymore! like come on!
Thinkproduction 3 years ago
i gave it a four lol
lonSinceInsane 3 years ago
Lol, i dont rate 2's and 4's. If the film was ass, i woulda gave it 1, if the film was great, i woulda gave it 5, the film was "so so" so it got 3 :P
CellarDoorFilm 3 years ago
very nice,epic
want2bes 3 years ago
Yeah....thats what you get for being nosey! XD
Awesome work as always ^^
KnightsLantern 3 years ago 2
It sounds so fuggin good, it makes my nuts tingle!
JohnnieWalker405 3 years ago
Oh wow, I loved it!
saruhara 3 years ago
Nice work.
Hazaraid 3 years ago
Nice and psychotic.... I love it!
lollerskatez1 3 years ago
Two-line headlines should be force-justified... up the point size to fill the space available... or add words.
voyeurdug 3 years ago
great :)
HerrSchokopudding 3 years ago
very nice, but may want to remember how newspapers are written, the shots of it at the end looks like its an essay. Needs to be in collums.
Other than that very good.
LordMigit 3 years ago 3
epic
coconut994777 3 years ago 2
A rose by any other name would smell so macabre.
Philinspaces 3 years ago
Lol, she's married to Wilson from Home Improvement.
pjunk 3 years ago
Great Job! That was funny! but a little creepy
(First view)
AppUlous 3 years ago
awesome
UKSkaterstar07 3 years ago
nice
Exotic47 3 years ago 3