[Short Story] MapleStory; Moonlight Garden

[IcecreameSundae199]

That was so cute!!!!

[xXreiketsu]

there was no audio on this video is i decided to put the song, Kiss The Rain by Yiruma

[Facepalmalldaylong]

Awwz awz awz so sweet ^^

[mrayvinm]

2:27 was so award because u can't just force a girl to love right

[reyuni4]

Awesome story ;D

[MsPlaidz]

(My ending version) Lianna falls in love with Denny and they all live happily ever after ^^

[Edius8888]

Wow this is good 4 a first video!!!! Thumbs up if u think so

[shengbozhu1]

Is it my phone or is there no music?

[chipettesqueakquealf]

@shengbozhu1 no music it's not ur phone

[KatanaTsusuka]

wow...its ur first short story u made and its already this good >:O i love it <333333

[LeeAnne323]

psh stupid notice -_-

[Dantewilleat]

nice !!! :)

[XxXseashellXxX]

WHAT ABOUT DENNY????? OR LIANAA?????? very cute story btw. ^__^

[flowerflow100]

@XxXseashellXxX well they got together obviously like really? didnt think of that?

[christktheif]

What happened to Denny and lianna

[bluelove1999]

lol, a spare house. xDD

And cutte story, but what about Denny. :<

[KateFantasizes]

awe thats an adorable story :)

[xEmilyannx3]

BOIII HOOKKKERRRR..

o-o

[o0BlueMagixo0]

how come denny and ricky has the same expression in each memory while elise has another one....

[o0BlueMagixo0]

at 1:19 i love it when she said CRAP!

[jmccooper07]

This is ur first vid?!?!?! Ur not a noon this is da best! Awesome job I'm subscribing!

[TheMangaSan]

1:12 THATS WHAT SHE SAID MUTHAFUKA!!!!!!

[XkimmyXProductions]

*mouth still hanging from 6months ago *MORE VIDS NAO

[Holyalcad]

Bunch of loose ends though, what happened to Denny? Were they just magically friends again? Also rickys' girlfriend? What happened to her? O.o not bad but ending was so..... Like.... Didn't look like a real ending

[mimihgfh]

interesting^-^

not much people do comedy and romance on short storys:D

[xVanessax123]

So sad



[imSariseria]

LOL this is the 1st love story that I kept loling at xD Its just so cute! :D

[XxXdecimo]

not bad.....but not good either.....good start.....bad ending but nice >.<

[xIchigoMiku]

i'm a bit confused but i cried ;)

[AznDreamFantasi]

errm wat happend to lianna ?

[DragonGirl48]

ME LIKE :D

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[Junkyrox]

Errr.... if Ricky has a gf why he like Elise?

Did they break up? o.o

[liewjianjie]

y they always wear the same clothes don't they nid to wash it?

[chaudo59]

@liewjianjie Lol :D

[kirbyisawesomefan]

AAAAW~

[iLickPopsicles]

Lol. Cute. Noob-ish, but good enough to keep me interested through the entire thing. :]

A little rushed, but still, cute. :D

[AznChewyGumx3]

it is good :DD <333 

[xDCelineyxD]

not too bad 4 the first short story :)

[stephanie2796]

nice short story

[cookiesandapom]

No comments :(

Well its cute about teh story and yah but i think its tooo soon to be in love with ricky...o.o

[darklink801]

@cookiesandapom check 6:18