supposed to be longer legato lines! Not much support and raising of the velum is used and it can definitely be heard in the vocal nasality. Keep trying!
@Franz4939 I have been searching all over for the clearness in the words and have such a hard time understanding what the singers is singing. Thank you so much for singing so clearly. I have to preform this song live, in front of my class room on Tuesday. Thank you. Your the greatest. I am a gospel singer, singing songs like Cece Winan and Marvin Sapp types of songs. I have never sang songs I couldn’t understand. This is different but I can do. You made it possible pronouncing the words2me.
@love4musicnart I quit a couple of months ago and my range is really starting to open up on top...somedays I can hit a Bb full voice!
and ok I'm sorry but what is that like a 5 octave range? haha, there are somethings that are impossible for me, I'm content with my 3 octaves haha. I am mildly obsessed with falsetto singing now though, male alto's are the shit (and don't get me started on male sopranos!) Thats really interesting though, I've never heard of a female vocalist singing baritone
It doesn't sound like you "feel" the music at all. And isn't that music is about? You have a nice voice, but just try to incorporate your voice and your heart in your singing next time. Also your left hand is very distracting. But over all very nice. Keep singing :)
I am learning this song too for a college audition Jan.10th. Be careful of the way u pronounce the words because it sounds extremely lazy and you are breathing bt words that their is suppose to be no breathe but you do have a good voice.
You're extremely detached from the meaning of this song and it shows. Overall, you have a very nice voice. No discouragement there. However, connection with the song will not only enhance your experience, but ours as well. It allows you to properly phrase this piece, which is about courtly love, and must thus be an almost croonish sound. You did this, but in the wrong places.
Also, your diction needs work. "La tu-ah fee-eh rehtz ah" is proper for "La tua fiereza". =D Good voice. Keep singing!^^
Your left hand is extremely distracting! If you put it down you might free up some of the tension in your shoulders and kneck, which would give you a freer sound. Also, I feel you have no connection to the words you're singing.
Lack of support on " ti volgio, amar", you could breathe before " amar" but good job! I´m actually learning that song...for how long have you been singing?
i too am singing this for nysma,try pronouncing the words a little more distinctly, and like my music teacher always asks me "What does it mean" when u no the translation(not the english underneath) then u will be able to sing it better than before
Hm... It souds good, but watch the text, watch the interpretation of the music. And you cannot breath in the middle of the word! It´s "FEDELE", not "FEDE,LE"
Watch your vowels. Sometimes you add diphthongs at the end. Tip: Look at the translation. It looks like you have no idea what this text means....also, you're counting/conducting while singing, and hence the phrases are disjunct and disconnected. But seriously...WATCH THE CONDUCTING....you do it only a little in the others, but this one is really bad.
I can't tell if it's your operatic voice or your normal voice. Are you working on your vibrato yet? The timbre of the voice is quite nice though... just catch yourself when your notes drop.
you have a really amazing voice, and your enunciation is flawless... but if seems when your breathing that you always take a quick breath right before you sing. try and make it smooth so its not like a catch breath! cause your breathing with your shoulders and not your stomach! but other than that. very nice! im doing this for my voice lessons right now.
You have an angelic voice piu leggere. Your enunciation is decent, however, as an Italian I must say that we sing on the vowels and NOT the consonants. The reason is that the breath must have the freedom to follow through the register. Those nasty consonants keep getting in the way. Try singing only on the vowels it will help you! In bocc'al lupo!
Your Italian shames me. It's flawless! Are you a Pisan? You know what would make this slightly better? Vocal color though elongating the consonant. Try singing "Mi fai languir" with a really hard "g" and make it long. It adds the scorn in the line through the words. Good luck!
hmm....haven't heard this arrangement before....but you have a beautiful voice....it's like a piiece of coal that with work could become a diamond....but it needs more work....I suggest less neck tension...your jutting out your jaw which will create a tight sound that could go flat rather easily if your not careful...don't need the hand motions quite yet...it's distracting you from singing....proffession accompanist though! congrats! you did a good job! I hope to see more of your work....
Slow....asi o mas agudos dificiles para un ligero..XD
magiciandarkblack 2 months ago
supposed to be longer legato lines! Not much support and raising of the velum is used and it can definitely be heard in the vocal nasality. Keep trying!
marcorinaldi123 11 months ago
which key are you singing in?
GreenEyedTabby 1 year ago
god damn it, its people like you who make me wish I were a tenor. I am a baritone who smokes...so a bass...
all in all good job man
Wally773MTG 1 year ago
@Wally773MTG Lol. I know how you feel. Baritone here as well. :(
Franz4939 1 year ago
@Franz4939 I have been searching all over for the clearness in the words and have such a hard time understanding what the singers is singing. Thank you so much for singing so clearly. I have to preform this song live, in front of my class room on Tuesday. Thank you. Your the greatest. I am a gospel singer, singing songs like Cece Winan and Marvin Sapp types of songs. I have never sang songs I couldn’t understand. This is different but I can do. You made it possible pronouncing the words2me.
COG777777 1 year ago
@Wally773MTG
If I were you quit smoking and you can do anything with your voice. I have been in voice and ear training for the last 7 years.
I'm classified as Bartione/Tenor in male vocal range, but Contralto/Mezzo soprano in female range.
And I am a female :)
love4musicnart 1 year ago
@love4musicnart I quit a couple of months ago and my range is really starting to open up on top...somedays I can hit a Bb full voice!
and ok I'm sorry but what is that like a 5 octave range? haha, there are somethings that are impossible for me, I'm content with my 3 octaves haha. I am mildly obsessed with falsetto singing now though, male alto's are the shit (and don't get me started on male sopranos!) Thats really interesting though, I've never heard of a female vocalist singing baritone
Wally773MTG 1 year ago
@Wally773MTG
Congrats to quitting smoking :) (welcome to the good side)
I am also content my voice range started as a E flat to F
Now I'm E flat to an A I think I'm 2.5 octaves? lol Anything from Luther Vandross to Billy Joel to Sarah Mclachlan to Josh Groban.
I love the range. I would sing on youtube. Gotta get past the fear first. lol
I did the baritone/tenor for a christmas concert, it turned out good which I was surprised.
love4musicnart 1 year ago
This is the only version on YouTube I can practise with you have a phenominal Tenor voice :D.
paulwilsonmusician 1 year ago
Nice voice - keep working, you have something excellent to use.
neelsdp1 2 years ago
the singer's hook!!!! there's plenty of good voice to work with though
rcorbinnnn 2 years ago
a lot of criticism of your technique, but you have great natural sound
griffcats 2 years ago 2
don't breathe in between pronunciations, look back at your sheet music and look where there isnt a dash between the words
ionatorthegreat 2 years ago
Nice tenor voice.
Should work more on your pronunciation before anything.
I find out the native english singers to have a great dificulty to pronunciate correctly the italian R, such as in SEMPRE, CRUDELLE...
Mahasiah666 2 years ago
It doesn't sound like you "feel" the music at all. And isn't that music is about? You have a nice voice, but just try to incorporate your voice and your heart in your singing next time. Also your left hand is very distracting. But over all very nice. Keep singing :)
peacefor2011 2 years ago
@peacefor2011 You're joking, look at his expression
Actorguy0330 1 year ago
I am learning this song too for a college audition Jan.10th. Be careful of the way u pronounce the words because it sounds extremely lazy and you are breathing bt words that their is suppose to be no breathe but you do have a good voice.
JeChFoLi09 3 years ago
good job, but try puting more enphasis on dynamic contrast.
openmind44 3 years ago
si aplicaras una gola y matizaras más sería genial!!!
wizardcesarbv 3 years ago
good vowel shapes with the mouth, wonderful tone. it would be better if you didn't move as much.
teledestiny 3 years ago
You're extremely detached from the meaning of this song and it shows. Overall, you have a very nice voice. No discouragement there. However, connection with the song will not only enhance your experience, but ours as well. It allows you to properly phrase this piece, which is about courtly love, and must thus be an almost croonish sound. You did this, but in the wrong places.
Also, your diction needs work. "La tu-ah fee-eh rehtz ah" is proper for "La tua fiereza". =D Good voice. Keep singing!^^
JadebuddhatheRPer 3 years ago
Your left hand is extremely distracting! If you put it down you might free up some of the tension in your shoulders and kneck, which would give you a freer sound. Also, I feel you have no connection to the words you're singing.
magick06 3 years ago
Lack of support on " ti volgio, amar", you could breathe before " amar" but good job! I´m actually learning that song...for how long have you been singing?
rplas1965 3 years ago
jaja la tonada yanki no se la despega
es italiano jaja
famgianno 3 years ago
i too am singing this for nysma,try pronouncing the words a little more distinctly, and like my music teacher always asks me "What does it mean" when u no the translation(not the english underneath) then u will be able to sing it better than before
chesst05 3 years ago
Hm... It souds good, but watch the text, watch the interpretation of the music. And you cannot breath in the middle of the word! It´s "FEDELE", not "FEDE,LE"
haileysama 3 years ago
Watch your vowels. Sometimes you add diphthongs at the end. Tip: Look at the translation. It looks like you have no idea what this text means....also, you're counting/conducting while singing, and hence the phrases are disjunct and disconnected. But seriously...WATCH THE CONDUCTING....you do it only a little in the others, but this one is really bad.
typicalsoprano 3 years ago
I can't tell if it's your operatic voice or your normal voice. Are you working on your vibrato yet? The timbre of the voice is quite nice though... just catch yourself when your notes drop.
forallyouknow 3 years ago
i am singing this for NYSMA that is new york state music association its a compitition
joesavamp 3 years ago
We have to sing this song for my chior.
wannabe808 3 years ago
you have a really amazing voice, and your enunciation is flawless... but if seems when your breathing that you always take a quick breath right before you sing. try and make it smooth so its not like a catch breath! cause your breathing with your shoulders and not your stomach! but other than that. very nice! im doing this for my voice lessons right now.
imescited 3 years ago 2
you sound like my choir teacher she says exactly what you say
wannabe808 3 years ago
You have an angelic voice piu leggere. Your enunciation is decent, however, as an Italian I must say that we sing on the vowels and NOT the consonants. The reason is that the breath must have the freedom to follow through the register. Those nasty consonants keep getting in the way. Try singing only on the vowels it will help you! In bocc'al lupo!
Nello7 4 years ago
Your Italian shames me. It's flawless! Are you a Pisan? You know what would make this slightly better? Vocal color though elongating the consonant. Try singing "Mi fai languir" with a really hard "g" and make it long. It adds the scorn in the line through the words. Good luck!
arkibet 4 years ago
Pisan? Not hardly! The kid's Cuban and Polish! Thanks for the "hard g" suggestion -- I'll make sure he sees your message.
pikamom11 4 years ago
hmm....haven't heard this arrangement before....but you have a beautiful voice....it's like a piiece of coal that with work could become a diamond....but it needs more work....I suggest less neck tension...your jutting out your jaw which will create a tight sound that could go flat rather easily if your not careful...don't need the hand motions quite yet...it's distracting you from singing....proffession accompanist though! congrats! you did a good job! I hope to see more of your work....
Vocalist4ever12 4 years ago
Great Job! Beautiful voice too!
jamidei 4 years ago