The Last Night S1 E2 [Cookie]

[NileyStories0894]

WOahhh!!! im like reading this story now!! O_O, lets see how far i can get heheh =P

[jougat7]

OMG! They need each other!!!

[princessadelmar93]

omg..david go to hell!!!

[didimoments]

So that's why Demi wore a jacket!

She got cuts!

[nicolieoliepoop]

woah. second episode and already I am amazed. you're such a gooood writer!

[dimondXOXO]

omg david is her BROTHER for crying out load !!! AWESOME KEEP IT UP lol !!

[michelleluvblue28]

OUCH!! this is really painful i think....

[NickJJsmyStudMuffin]

how sad! i feel bad for jemi :'c

[leutemileigh00]

OMG this is good.

[xoPeaceLuvBffxo]

OMG!I jut read your firt epi today and im already addicted.You r an amazing writer.please write more epi

[XoXo2222xo]

can somone say drama first demi get raped then joe get beat it just horriable

[SelenaDemiAlysonJenn]

WTH DAVID?!

I'm addicted to this and it's only the second ep! Totaly subbing!

[metrojonas116]

o_O

[JAMYLOVESDEMILOVATO]

omg i didn't expect that at all

like demis getting raped by her brother and Joe's getting beat up by his Dad. CREEPY.

Great story though

[lollypop2143]

this is creepy

but awesome

[DemiStories]

Wow... i just read your first episode... and i'm now subbing!

please read my stories too!

and tell me if it passes u... :)

wow that rhyms

[mellkaine]

...hi!! i"m a new reader can somebody tell where could i find the  episode 3 of the last night S1???

[Vontavia09]

Guess what Joe's dad and Demi'sBrother is on Crack..Just saying lmao

[KoolGaal]

wow...

[JemiNemiLoverGirl]

aww dats so sad butt love da series ugh i love so good drama

[sohotimfirey]

why is her brother raping her wtf

[iCookieesXx]

wait is david her brother and btw i love your series so far! ill subscribe! teehee!uyaya!

[katiebug730]

this series is so cool

and sad

[ELM0xT0XiC]

they have so much in commment(:

[snowflakecutie101]

wow plz make next one like asap

[aznxsweetiex3]

lol. thanks.

[musicgirls16]

did her bro just fuck her?

if so,was there protection?

and wheres their parents?

BTW this is an awesome story so far and i loved the trailor!!♥

[aznxsweetiex3]

thanks.

later on, in the

story it will say where her parents are.

[PopStarAndSisters]

so david does that to demi who is her sis?

[aznxsweetiex3]

yes, he does.

[iluvraposo15]

oommjjjjj this is such a great series love it

[aznxsweetiex3]

thanks :)

[Marlene9408]

please write more that is so sad

Please write more

[jemiandnelenalovers]

omg! loved it!! that was good! hurry with the next one please :D haha.

[jonasbrothers700]

LOVE IT MORE PLZ

[jcjayjc]

OMG i love it post the next one FAST!

[jemiandnelenastorys]

luv it

whens the next one?

[DemiSelenaSisterhood]

wow brothers are sick lol great eppy :)

[spaceofme15]

wow

[SoftballGirl1515]

LOVE IT ( :

[aznxsweetiex3]

thanks :)

[JBluv3r]

wheres the 3rd??

[aznxsweetiex3]

working on it.

[MELANELA]

MORE PLZZZ

[naturegirl680]

omg sooo good! pleaseee post next one sooon!!

[aznxsweetiex3]

thanks :)

[Michie7695]

omj!

love it!

really good!

[aznxsweetiex3]

thanks :)

[chrissykool888]

love it!

[aznxsweetiex3]

thanks :)

[jen17hilary]

omg so good :)

[aznxsweetiex3]

thanks :)