Power of Three: Warriors: The Sight PART 1

[TheFeefeefoofoogirl]

u discust me

[cjwoodcock]

hollykit eyes are green and jaykit has no pupels

[sunheartofdeputy]

old as shit elders? XD

[MarshmallowLuv627]

ummmm.......hollykit has green eyes and jaykit has blue eyes. In the beginning their eye colors are switched. Great vid tho :3

[jayfeathersmine]

I am, hence the username

[Pistolsniped]

Is anyone else here a HUGE warriors fan?

[TheShipdeck]

the animation was good, but you really should re-do the audio. you should get people to do the voices. I'd do a voice.

BBS

[GabbyLovesLabradors]

You got their pelts and eyes the wrong way round, HollyLeaf has black fur and green eyes, and JayFeather has grey fur and blue eyes

[UmbreonsWolf]

what are they saying?

[Warriorcatlovers]

I'm sorry to say but to belive Brambleclaws voice was the best there.......

[BubblesTheKittyCat]

@samsam1155 he was born blind so before

[samsam1155]

someone plz tell me, was Jayfeather blind before or after he fell over the gorge????

[Zoevengeance]

@samsam1155 he was born blind

[leopardlover1655]

no comment

[Madi5b]

uhhhh

[mistasquishy]

By the way,Jayfeather is a gray tabby tom with feathery blue eyes.And Hollyleaf is the black kit,shes black with green eyes.please,for your viewers sake,stop mixing them up,its making some of us confused i'm sure.i am confused...but i think what you have colored might be for the opposite kit. -Mistasquishy ^^

[lilyandotis]

this is......... bad

[noobbutnotnoob]

dump



[empoleongirl1]

How do you animate? I really wanna know how

[Animalloverz1]

what do you use?

[Mrkingesac]

what is that ?

[cloudlestorm]

nice, but it's hard to understand what you are saying- it sound's like you are whispering.

[Bluestarwarrior1]

pretty good but the voices need some work.

[vulcanstriker]

they're not kids but kits

[werewolf9613]

why are you whispering in this?

[masterofbugs123]

Thank you, please put me out of my misery GET THE EYE AND PELT COLORS RIGHT

[Lolsmileyfaes]

Jay- GREY tabby with BLUE eyes

Holly- BLACK with GREEN eyes

Lion- GOLDEN tabby with AMBER eyes.

Fyi. ^^

[bulothedragon98]

more practice and you'll do even better!!! XD

[MUDDIGGERS104]

you really shouldn't criticize her. she tried for your enjoyment.

[DoodleDudeRemix]

Like a lot of people said, the animation is great, but the voices sound the same and kinda raspy

[kyziken]

Oh, by the way, if you want some inspiration, watch the SSS warrior cats series by Yuji. It's actually fanmade, belive it or not, but Yuji is like 20. Still, I'm workin on somthing now

[kyziken]

Alright, but jaykit is the grey stripey one and holly kit is black as coal.

[SuperHalogirl]

hollyleaf has green eyes

[dog22322]

i read this one! i love jaypaw X3

[bashavzsify]

all you need is a little practice you got all the basics down but you need voice actors and study up a bit on the book (people tend to be picky)

[TheSonicLoverz]

Hollyleaf has Green eyes. I'm sorry but you skiped alot and it was a bit hard to understand.

[RosenAnn09]

dude, all wrong. jayfeather has BLUE eyes, and holly has GREEN

[Hawkfire360]

So? it's still good

[GingaJeketsuTei]

@RosenAnn09

STFU

[SilverThePuppy]

I bet it did.

[piplup848]

shut the fuck up mother fucker! go suck a dick! No on elikes you! THIS IS A GREAT SERIES! IF ITS SO BAD WHY DO YOU WASTE TIME COMMENTING?

[yomanama12345]

Im trying to think of my warrior name and suggestions?

[PokemonGirlDawn]

Um..IN THE BOOK JAYPAW/JAYKIT IS THE MAIN CHARACTER!And my favorite is FireStar,Leafpool,and Jaypaw.

[Squirrelflightbest]

Uh... Jayfeather is Grey and Hollyleaf is black! Srry... I don't know why i posted that... Really sorry...

[solrock3]

hollyleaf has green eyes... and jayfeather is a gray tabby...

[MsAngel9000]

your cats look more like dogs

[Jackster17214]

pretty good. not the best,but i liked it

[indigofire1o9]

the voices are really low and fuzzy like but iluved it

[julesfordale3]

i miss hollyleaf

[CocoaTheWolf]

O MAH GAWD JAYKIT LIONKIT TOOK TEH MOUSE XDD

I think Hollykit is so cute~! gray or black how you make her is adorable!

[Tigerleaf9]

lol jaykit she took it!

[Impurfectionn]

jaypaw is my favorite cat in the power of three

[9Twilight9]

The voices are...whispers. Otherwise great job, for a beginner especially.

[omgakitty83]

why are hollyleaf`s eyes blue and jayfeather`s are green?

[TophTennison]

I couldn't hear anything, and you need to get better at the sound effects and the colors are wrong. But you have potential and I'm sure it will become amazing if you changed a few things! =^_^=

~Francis

[Ebz441]

like the intro.

P.S;I am getting this book for my B-day!

[brandymydog]

I think this is very good! I'm trying to make an animated series, but my micraphone's messed up...

Anyway, good job!

[SpecialKitteh]

SilverThePuppy did make Hollykit's eyes green, you must have been looking at Jaykit

and keep ur comments to urself if theyre rude

[PenguinPictures1]

omg the voices are whispering

[SilverFangTheWolf09]

the voices were alittle quiet...but overall the animation was great! :D

[DawnShadowWarrior]

I agree

[sonicpenguin324]

The voices were a little quiet, but you're a really great animator! Good job =)

[SarahSoldatenkov]

its pretty good but the voices are quite and raspy

[SilverThePuppy]

Thanks, but yeah, I know the voices need work xD

[9Twilight9]

o.O dont like the voices at all. Animations are bad. Sorry.

[SilverThePuppy]

I know it needs work...I'm too lazy to redo it though x3 But yeah, this isn't my best project yet. THanks for commenting ;3

[kedez2012]

okay i have to admit that i cracked up at firestar's delayed reaction....but all and all the animation was really good!

[SilverThePuppy]

x3 Yeah...I got the timing really screwed up in this 0_. but well, all my animations from last year pretty much sucked x3 But thanks =3

[breyer2003]

@SilverThePuppy I did not watch it yet-my mom took out ma speakers~

[crystalfur15]

very nice :) but u mixed up Hollypaw and Jaypaws eye colors :) You are good at Animation :)

[SilverThePuppy]

0_. no i didn't....Jaypaw has blue eyes and Hollypaw has green eyes, thats how i put it on here :O I mixed up their pelt colors x3 i made jaypaw black and hollypaw gray

[crystalfur15]

oh i see, Lol i assumed that The black one was hollykit and Jaykit was the gray one... SO yeah

[chihuahuamoxie]

i didn't read this book yet so i don't now what happened!

[ihavenousernamejk]

wait....this was for school?

=S

[SilverThePuppy]

yes

[CelesteStorywriter]

I can't hear the voices at all, even if it's turned all the way up. Good animation skills, still.

And Firestar has green eyes.

[Rainstarhasastick]

In regards to the video: pretty good animation skillz, very nice backgrounds. Though you recorded the sound at 3AM, it does diminish the clip a little, might have been better if you'd waited till you could have done it with more emotion? But that's not too bad, minor flaw. I could hear you just fine, though some people said they couldn't. Besides, it was a school project, so expecations for frame-by-frame animation probably weren't too high. =3

[SilverThePuppy]

yeah, i just did this to get the grade and get it over with. i had fun making it, but the voice acting and audio sound wasn't a huge priority to me since the school sound system is beast XD

[Rainstarhasastick]

Lolz, you had access to a sound system? My school would never trust us with theirs, the only person who can touch it is our senior class president, the tech wizard who makes the world go round. =P I have no idea what we're gonna do when he graduates next year.

[SilverThePuppy]

i mean the speakers on the comp X3 they're really good, so the whole movie was really loud XD

[Rainstarhasastick]

Oh good, when you said sound system I thought you meant something far more professional. =P

[BaybeeGirlJenny]

Why is it so quiet i couldnt hear anything other than that good job

[ForeverBluestar]

Y were you whispering?

[hollyheartsden]

lol i just thought of this... it's sorta ironic that it's called "the sight" and jaypaw is blind.. XD

[SilverThePuppy]

yeah i know X3

[hollyheartsden]

rotflol X3

[autumn124]

who is the father of sqeuirrlflights kits?

[lucky333123]

I think it was brambleclaw mothflight's brother.

[SilverThePuppy]

Brambleclaw isn't Mothwing's brother 0_. that's Hawkfrost. Brambleclaw has a sister, Tawnypelt.

[sangomiroku4ever222]

Brambleclaw and Mothwing are half-siblings.

[nakia1323]

yea cause Mothwing and Hawkfrost are siblings which makes Brambleclaw and Mothwing siblings -_-'

[SilverThePuppy]

They are HALF siblings. I'm not stupid, I read the books -_-

[nakia1323]

Did I say you were? no.

[SilverThePuppy]

well than stop correcting me, i know what i'm talking about. jeez, you're starting to piss me off. Just buzz off, would ya?

[nakia1323]

Don't get pissy with me!! i read the comment wrong mmkay? i twas like really late at night, I really don't care if I'm pising you off, acctually it brings me joy to bring others paina and annoyance. and You could be les srude like wtf? jeeze. spazz much?

[SilverThePuppy]

i am a spazz, i've been having a bad week. and you're just making it worse, you heartless freak. you shouldn't take pride in hurting others, especially when you don't know anything about them. one of my friend's parents just died and its not the best time for you to be picking a fight over this, and again you shouldn't be causing others pain. some people might not take it the same way i do, it may hurt them rather than piss them off. do realize that next time.

[nakia1323]

everyone has bad weeks, and as for your parent, Im sorry, but you can't expect me to know that, and I don't care if I shouldn't but I do take pride in it, and I'm not hurting you, I WAS Giing helpfull advice until you flipped out. the world is full of asholes. get used to it. I realise that people take it wron ways and it hurts them, like I said before, I enjoy it.

[SilverThePuppy]

what a heartless, cruel person you are. i was going to apologize for causing trouble, but i dont think you'd appritiate it at all. i pitty you, i really do. i hope one day you see what you're doing is wrong. until then, i just hope anyone you hurt is strong enough to get over it. and how do you know your not hurting me? its not like you know me, you cant tell.

[nakia1323]

I don't give a shit if I hurt you, 'cuse you are annoying and can't get your story straight. I don't care if you were going to Apologize, and i don't need your pity, I'm happy with my life, so fuck off.

[Rainstarhasastick]

Oy, will you two knock it off? One little mistake over the technicality of someone's comment, and we start a page-long argument. SilverThePuppy, nakia1323, there was absolutely no need to drag anything personal into this. Why heat it up when there's nothing to get aggressive over?

[RedflameTwilight]

^^ your so awesome no need to listen to heartless jerks

[lucky333123]

sorry it was hawkfrost thanks silverwing...I wrote down the wrong cat sorry

[SilverThePuppy]

X3 wait...who's Silverwing? 0_. i'm confused XDD

[SilverThePuppy]

Brambleclaw.

[Kawaiipaw111]

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Type this is for HD

[GingaWolfFan11]

awesome work here silver,i honestly couldnt care less about the voices,theres no way i could do better,and thats the truth

[SilverThePuppy]

thanks bud ^^

[0okamigirl]

Voices....Could do better

[SilverThePuppy]

i know, i know.

[outrayjess]

lovely, except the sound

[SilverThePuppy]

yes, i know it sucks. i've been told just that about 29 times before.

[outrayjess]

no i love the movie no joke. it does NOT suck. if any1 sez that i will take the liberty to yell at them. i could hear it, i jsut turned my volume up super loud!

[SilverThePuppy]

thanks. i think i'm going to remake it though, so it'll be better. just change the sound effects and edit the voices and all.

[ilikrandomness]

i rely like it too but you might want them to be a bit longer if you want to upload fewer vids

[greyhoundlovergirl3]

no offense but the sound SUCKS CRAP.

[SilverThePuppy]

-_- do you really needd to be about the 30th person to tell me that? I KNOW IT SUCKS!

[evelynmarie1995]

hahaha tell em!

[ravenpaw42]

whats wrong with the voices? i couldnt even hear what they were saying...

[SilverThePuppy]

omfg i know the frickin audio SUCKS! it was frickin 3 AM! i couldn't talk normally, i was tired, didn't want to get caught, and i only had about 3 and a half weeks to make a 22 minute long movie. i rushed. it was for school, i don't even think i'm leaving it on youtube.

[Mistystripe]

Yeah, what are they saying? I nearly had it top volume and still couldn't hear it.

[SilverThePuppy]

read the other comments and you'll find out that answer. i've been asked the same thing over and over again -_-

[Mistystripe]

Because your so quiet.

[CandyandBrandy]

what are they saying?

[rainstar999]

i like it but i cant even hear you....

[toytown72]

i know

[SilverThePuppy]

ok, look, it was a project for skool, thats why its crappy and i didn't bother to do good sound, and i'm not going to change it. this movie was a nightmare to make, and its not even good.

[mewmewberre]

yes it is the sound is the only thing wrong with it

[feathertail35]

CHAIN MAIL!!!!

[RainPuss]

I had to crank my speakers just to hear you whispering O_O

[SilverThePuppy]

yeah, i was going to do a better sound version of this, but i got to lazy. when i played it on the permethean board at skool (it was a project for school, thats why its crappy) it sounded fine. so long i got a good grade its fine with meh XD

[Gamefreak36]

says the books!! and Jaypaws gray with blue eyes and Hollypaws black with green eyes! You abviously haven't read the books Power of Three!!! X(

[SilverThePuppy]

*rolls eyes* i have, now, please, dont make me go through the trouble of explaining all this again. oh well. yes, i read ONE of the books, which is this one, and this was a project for school, so it was rushed, and i started animating after i read the first two pages, so i got the colors mixed.

[WolfsCatsDogs]

Its not your video! Let he/her do this! I guess

he/she worked hard on this video/project

[fighterlegend]

This is a great animation! I like your animating skills!

[SilverThePuppy]

thanks ;) i didn't think it would come out that good since it was a project 4 skool...(which is something i usually won't put much effort into lol)

[fighterlegend]

Lol, I think it is better compared to mine (I never posted my video cus it sucked balls.)

[SilverThePuppy]

im sure it cant be THAT bad. post it i wanna see it!

[SilverThePuppy]

i like laughing. put it up! PUT IT UUUPPP!

[xJayfeatherx]

reaalllyyy good!

[SilverThePuppy]

thanks!

[Applemelonz]

Firestar is orange, not yellow.

[SilverThePuppy]

says who?

[Rainstarhasastick]

Says the whole series, incidentally. =P Not a big deal though.

[tribbleofdoom]

YOU ARE SO GOOD AT ANIMATING IM JELOUS!

[SilverThePuppy]

XD i like your into the wild series! its really cool =3

[Guilmonxx]

This is awesome! I think you should stick with the colors. xD I'm so used to them now.

[SilverThePuppy]

yeah me too. so i did XD i really don't care if i mixed them up, cause now it would look wierd if Jaypaw and Hollypaw suddenly changed colors at one point XD

[Guilmonxx]

-nodnod- Yeah. It would be weird. o.o Besides. If people keep saying it they'll have to live with it. xD

[SilverThePuppy]

yeah. i'm not easy to budge, when i make a mistake in something like this, i get over it. it ain't changin, no matter wut ppl say XD

[xJayfeatherx]

jesus crist ok just saying

[xJayfeatherx]

You got Jaykit and Hollykit mixed up. Hollykit is black Jaykit is gray

[SilverThePuppy]

*sighs* its a shame that i've had to explain this so many times. I KNOW. i was just looking at the wrong cats on the cover T-T

[GingadensetsuWeed3]

try working on the voices othr than that its awsome

[SilverThePuppy]

yeah i know. please, ppl, stop telling me how crappy the voices are! cause i know! how many times do i have to say it, it was 3 AM when i did this and i had to whisper!!!

but anyway, thank you.

[gingaparachi]

neat but you should make the voices louder:)

but still 5/5

[SilverThePuppy]

thanks ;) but yeah it was 3 AM and i was whispering lol

[WolfOfDusk]

Holy frigin crpa how long did the whole movie take you? It's sooo coool!!!

[SilverThePuppy]

only two or three days...but this is only the beginning of it -_- im not even finished with the book XD but i decided i would just start the movie early.

[moonheart00]

cool :3

[SilverThePuppy]

thanks!