@StephanieLisaTara Thank you very much Stephanie Lisa Tara. I thoroughly enjoyed your multimodal text, "I'll follow the moon." As a Primary School student teacher I have just shared it with my fellow third year student teacher friends. I will be showing it to my students in the future :) I wish you much success - and the turtle folk.
Alas, that Spring should vanish with the Rose! That Youth's sweet-scented Manuscript should close! The Nightingale that in the Branches sang, Ah, whence, and whither flown again, who knows!
Whose translation is it? I taught Rumi this term in my World Literature course, and we found about a dozen translators to compare for many poems. Very different possible effect, depending on whose work it is.
@Rehv86 thank you Rehv. I really enjoy Rumi's poetry. I also love Kahil Gibran. These two mystics really speak to me on a deep level and I feel so connected when I recite them. Have a beautiful day. I will be making some more over the Christmas holidays :)
I think that in this poem Rumi talks about internal relationship with himself and God, I think what he means is if one doesn't have love in his heart he is not really alive because he doesn't live in spirit. I think to fully understand one should read the whole poem. Just some thoughts.
When_The_Rose_Is_Gone and the garden faded
you will no longer hear the nightingale's song.
The Beloved is all; the lover just a veil.
The Beloved is living; the lover a dead thing.
If love withholds its strengthening care,
the lover is left like a bird without care,
the lover is left like a bird without wings.
How will I be awake and aware
if the light of the Beloved is absent?
Love wills that this Word be brought forth.
omarut2007 3 months ago
breathtaking!
StephanieLisaTara 5 months ago
@StephanieLisaTara Thank you very much Stephanie Lisa Tara. I thoroughly enjoyed your multimodal text, "I'll follow the moon." As a Primary School student teacher I have just shared it with my fellow third year student teacher friends. I will be showing it to my students in the future :) I wish you much success - and the turtle folk.
bluemoon85aus 5 months ago
Your recitation is beautiful, and the poem is brilliant aswell... Thanks for uploading it, maybe you will recite some more Rami poems.
All the best.
Peace / Selam alaykum
ImanSaad88 6 months ago
@ImanSaad88 Thank you very much Iman Saad.
I really enjoy the beautiful thoughts of Rumi.
Peace
Dwayne
bluemoon85aus 6 months ago
Alas, that Spring should vanish with the Rose! That Youth's sweet-scented Manuscript should close! The Nightingale that in the Branches sang, Ah, whence, and whither flown again, who knows!
OMAR KHAYYAM
SonOfAlanbar 6 months ago
beautiful.
SuperBluehaze 7 months ago
What is the background music? I know it's from LOR; however, I can't remember the name.
Ahavati1 8 months ago
@Ahavati1 the song is called, "Evenstar (Featuring Isabel Bayrakdarian)"
bluemoon85aus 8 months ago
Beautiful! So silkenly spoken as to entrance one.
deverssouthard 1 year ago 2
Whose translation is it? I taught Rumi this term in my World Literature course, and we found about a dozen translators to compare for many poems. Very different possible effect, depending on whose work it is.
manthasagittarius 1 year ago
@manthasagittarius Yup! Its more beautiful in original text, than all of the translations!
artistdigital 1 year ago
beautiful voice..it kinda speaks to the soul. ^__^ recite more Rumi poems.
Rehv86 1 year ago 2
@Rehv86 thank you Rehv. I really enjoy Rumi's poetry. I also love Kahil Gibran. These two mystics really speak to me on a deep level and I feel so connected when I recite them. Have a beautiful day. I will be making some more over the Christmas holidays :)
bluemoon85aus 1 year ago
Do you know who is reciting this poem?
val2323 1 year ago
@val2323 yes val. I am reading the poem. The poem was written by Rumi however. I hope you enjoyed it.
bluemoon85aus 1 year ago
@bluemoon85aus
Wow you have a very nice voice :)
val2323 1 year ago 2
omg u changed my mind on poems. really amazing. its like i can feel the words from your voice.
p.s accurately i found u from your shaping eye brow vid )
ogogo11 1 year ago 2
@ogogo11 thanks for letting me know ogogo. I really enjoy making clips like this. I am glad you enjoyed it :) Kind Regards,
Dwayne
bluemoon85aus 1 year ago
Love it. Nice voice.
goodagofilms 2 years ago
thank you very much.
bluemoon85aus 2 years ago
Its the ending of a poem , Song of the Reed,
I think that in this poem Rumi talks about internal relationship with himself and God, I think what he means is if one doesn't have love in his heart he is not really alive because he doesn't live in spirit. I think to fully understand one should read the whole poem. Just some thoughts.
chafut 2 years ago
thank you for sharing. this was my favourite part of the original full length poem. I appreciate your opinion and your feedback. Dwayne
bluemoon85aus 2 years ago
You welcome. you made a beautiful video.
chafut 2 years ago
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zoey0456 2 years ago