I'll be your Edward Cullen

[emmagabc123]

Wow ur sooooo good lol jk

[kags36]

Cute song, but the singing's not the best. :S

[waffleconeatethealpa]

Awesome music. :) I wish I could of heard it live.

[ebrpattz33057]

this is so sweet

[ninagirl119]

u bad singer haha

[ninagirl119]

@ninagirl119 LOL!! XD

[CookiesAllTheTime]

Oh boy.. Are you high?

[XKakashiXloverX]

its sweet... :D:D:D

[L0VEyouL0NGtime]

Naw cute. The lyrics are awesome!

[kdsuzy]

wow fun song the guitar was great the singing less

xxx

[freakynight123]

i like it i like the guitar playing =D

so i am guessing your an edward fan =)

[EmoMCR1fan]

the vocals need a little work, but the guitar was awesome. :3

[memexox77]

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA. WOW. Just WOW.

[clove340]

ur class at guitar ;)

[GreenDayRocks1111]

dang, u can be my Edward Cullen

[KlRSTEN]

i love your hair ;) your good with the guitar

[charlylienchenpuff13]

soooo sweet! ♥

[KristieMamie06]

You can be my Edward Cullen =]

[angelikaee]

hahah great:D

[23HappyApples]

OMG!!

I hope after you take singing lessons you'll do a retake and do a before and after !  ! Please!

[Klorenemagic]

cute.

[Glowmay]

You can't sing, but since neither can I... I won't be so harsh...

Love the lyrics!!

[ashtonh96]

ok ur hot and ur singing is so bad its god

[sballgirl13]

bahaha,how is it so bad its good?

[xWeLoveTheJonasBrosx]

lol...like rob pattinsons singing i guess :)

[alyssamaia826]

ok i don't really like your singing at all but you play great guitar

[ClodieAsh]

your singing is so bad that's it's brilliant XD

love the lyrics XD

[OptimistismIsHard]

fantastic :D

[loloice27]

if you were tj kessler and could sing i would definetly be you vampire girl!!!!!!!!!!! ^,..,^ just to let you know tj kessler does look like edward before he was transformedXD green eyes and all i love him

[KGCSHS96]

NO COMMENT

[tayhale]

i'll be your vampire girl

[vampyrechica101]

i love the song...i love the guitar but singing isnt your forte

heart the song!

and yes I will be your vampire girl...haha

[VictoriaAtTheDisco]

Ill totally be your vampire girl if youll be my edward cullen!

I love the song too.

[tinkerbelljyt101]

it doesnt matter you cant sing a lick, but i shouldnt b judging cuz i cant either, but im already in love with u for WRITING this. thats a real talent.

[biggirlevie]

FOR REAL bgsvideos !!!! I'd TOTALLY be ur vampire girll ... ur hot ! LoL and good at guitarr ! SWEET !

[BORNAWESOME101]

your good at the gitar but never sing agen also your relly sgary

[Symeria15]

Very sweet sentiment =)

[Atena95]

awful!

[LoveStoryWithABite]

omg thats awsome

i am surprised that ur a twifan

the songs cool

[twilightgirly]

i hoope who ever you that wrote for attacked you after that

( but i got the real thing)

[salliekat93]

kindaa weird nice lyrics but yeah no

[ryanhighfive]

You're scary

[blancalovesedward]

lol

as if you do that

u cant beat edward, sorry man, but no one can beat him.

I am his vampire girl :)

[bgsvideos]

I'd SO be your vampire girl. The song's awesome, and you're cute.

[SternchenElisa]

Hey Guy, you are hot.

You are very very cool.

I love TWILIGHT too, and I had written a lot of songs about it...they aren´t so great(I'm from germany) but okay.

Thx for this song!

[dcclizard]

Hey man can i get the cords to this?

This is a great song, kinda wanna play it for my friend.

[kyla122]

loves it !

lol

[IAintNoSCENEKidd]

I really love:

1. You're a twilight fan.

2. You're cute.

3. You write a great twilight song.

4. You play guitar.

But.. You should put the mic closer so you don't have to stress yur voice. :]

[mnmmorley]

good gutairing but you can not sing at all sorry dude

[gumsucker]

i know a dude who looks like you dude..

weird.

[allybird12]

aw thats real cutee(: ;keeep singingg!

[maggiemcrlover]

not such a great song but everything a girl wants to listen ^^

[simplythebest110]

I'll be your vampire girl =]

Most might think I'm crazy - but I enjoyed the way you sang. It basically melted my heart ^^

<3

Great job.

[vampireXkitty]

its really good lyrics and guitar, just your singing =/ if you got someone else to sing it, it would be really good =D xo.

[rilessmiles]

if you weren't screeching the lyrics, you'd have a hit on your hands, haha. but you'd be fine at singing if you brought it down a notch.

[loseurmind14]

Dude, I think I am going to use your lyrics and make a video reply of me singing the song, I'll give you lots of credit =) Dude, can you like record the song for me? So I can use it in the back ground?

[playmealulluby]

Thats awesome. The lyrics are great, and you are really good at guitar.

[loveerockmusic]

i love u

[DUPLICITYx3]

uh o.o

get someone else to sing this please.

lmao.

lyrics were great, but i had to read them, i couldn't understand you xD

[gumsucker]

your amazing dude!

[vampbitch69]

I'll be your vampire gire!

your so cute!

i loved the song, great job on it!

especially the 'I want to bite your neck and make you scream' part! ;)

[georginarrr]

Get someone else to sing this, mate

[Randomgrl47]

....O_O

[mulamoney]

<33333333

[singingal17]

great job on the lyrics!!! I will so be ur bella, since u made up this song. I love you so much. AWESOME JOB!!!

[musicislove1125]

will you marry me?

ahh i love this

and you!

[cheeselova01]

Marry Me?

lolxz

great job!!

Very Creative!

Absolutely Awesome

KOODOS!

[TwiLoverr]

love the lyrics :)

[drtyXXemolishusXXgrl]

...um...nice singing...lol

anyway. loved the song. i'll be your bella...if you got a hair cut. lol

<3 jk jk

[SkylerAnne2012]

Love the lyrics!

[daddysgurl72394]

My God i Love This Song. Your Awesome

[tryingtoentertain]

I LOVE YOUR VOICE

[AVeryMeanGirl]

amazing-ness! xD

[kyra716]

Yeah, i love the lyrics too!

[HagiNGaarasChevalier]

lol i loved it! ^.^ the singing was ok, i think, but the lyrics were awesome!!!

[trenee06]

Nice lyrics.

The singing sounded forced into your chest voice, but I'm pretty sure you could sing VERY well otherwise.

Thanks for the amusement. It really is a nice song. And a marvelous way to get the girls to notice you.

I have to give you props. By best friend is going insane right now. It's quite humorous.

[crazymaie12]

the singing was............a bit, well NOT good. but the lyrics are great and so is music.

[Lolipopgumdrops]

wow!

i loved it!!

i don't care about singing

it's about the meaning behind the song and everything.

if you song that to me,

i'd probably blush like crazy, laugh at some points [not at you, with you] and probably shed a tear.

i almost did now and it wasn't even to me!

[xxbillyspleenxx]

You can't sind but I LOVE the lyrics :)

You'd be a good Edward:)

[vietnamdude1968]

Your Off Tune Buddy :]

[ElizabethLCRandom]

your hot no im not afraid to say and i like the song its a bit funny and sweeet

@ the same time

[disneyprincess1994]

Omg! That is so sweet! You know how many girlfriends you'd have if others knew about this?

it's every girls dream to date edward..if he was real

[QueenAlix]

I like the polar bear. He has very big teeth...

[italygirl202]

ahhh, this is such a cute song and the lyrics r awesome. u write this anyone? if not come check out my channel ;)

[addictionxxisxxlove]

Are you a vampire because u dazzle me

[SoccerStrikermmxii]

OMG! Amazing song! You can be my Edward =]

[ifairyu]

its good!!

[ktaylor2630]

ohhh wow i love this :]

mmm yes you can be my edward cullen

[DeathlySerenity]

I just fell for this song :]

Lovette!

Edward is awesome x

[taintedlover2007]

This is really good!! :) I love the lyrics! and I'd totally be your Bella :)

[TrueGuitarGod]

THANK YOU!!!! -im ur fanpiregirl- haha UR AWSOME

[aBrightMidnight]

hahah sweet! i've never had a fanpiregirl before :]

[aBrightMidnight]

haha sure, why not ;] thanx a lot for the support

[ilovecullenboys]

O_O

[mel2thethird]

WOW, its awesome! If she wont be you vampire girl I WILL! JK! Nice job :)

[aBrightMidnight]

haha sweet, sounds good :]

[LoveShiaGDSN]

this is really cool:)

Screeching Weasel AND Twilight-awesome:)

(You DO read Twilight right???)

[aBrightMidnight]

aw thanks and yes i do read them. ive read them all and i love them and i cant wait for breaking dawn to come out!

[gabylovesnick]

wow, really sweat song, :)

[dcclizard]

sick song bro. got tabs for it? =D. Did you say this is in the movie?!

[aBrightMidnight]

no its not in the movie but if you want, the chords are a minor, f, c, g. and the chorus is c, a minor, g. thats pretty much it. thanx a lot for checkin it out!

[amyleecrazedfan]

The lyrics are actually sweet.

Lol. "I'll bite your neck and make you scream". That on'es kind of funny. ^_^;;

[aBrightMidnight]

hahah thank you!

[syncsta13]

Aww this is so sweet.

[xDeadxVampirex]

Aww that's really really cute! =]

Well done. It was sweet.

[spidah53]

AHHH wow u totally could be my edward! lol!

cuute song it's adorable!

[aBrightMidnight]

aww thanks :]

[123JENN666]

This is really cute! Thanks for posting it, It so made my day!

[freekygirly]

it made me laugh! its realy scary! but i really liked it! its realy good! it realy is! :)

[aBrightMidnight]

lol thanx, but im still confused by what part of it is scary....

[freekygirly]

nevermind! ;) but its really sweet

[whaaatnow]

uhmm a little scaryy...=D

[aBrightMidnight]

what do you mean?

[tanzie009]

this is seriously goood !

*blush*

[aBrightMidnight]

wow, thanx!!!!!!!! im glad you liked it :]

you just put a large smile on my face

[tanzie009]

your welcome =D

geez, im so jealous.

[aBrightMidnight]

jealous? jealous of what?

[tanzie009]

well i cant play guitar. at all

amd well sing. and write songs,

i have lyrics but when i sing it or even read it, it doesnt sound well. . .

[CourtandSpark1]

nnnnnnnyyaahah hahahaha

[emoprettygirl]

-tear- This is so beautiful, I really hope that girl sees you. You rock....

[ifreakingloveyou4]

i think that this is probably the most cutest thing ive seen all day :P

thx for posting this!

[aBrightMidnight]

hah sure thing. thanx for the support! Im glad you enjoyed it :]

[LabelloSulle]

np, d: - thank you! :D

[LabelloSulle]

hahahha. so much fun

[aBrightMidnight]

gracias XD

[KaraLikesZombies]

aw. this was adorable.

[aBrightMidnight]

:] thanks

[SnatchedMudblood]

Hey, your Myspace message inspired me to actually make a comment on YouTube, so now you can have an even better day! I sent this video to my friend, because she loves Edward.

I think the lyrics are great and I happen to like your voice.

Stay happy! :)

[aBrightMidnight]

omg thanks a ton! ur still the best :]

[hawthornandholly]

That was a cool song! I'm biased though,..I like your Grindylows stuff better,...but it was a good song! Keep wrocking!

[aBrightMidnight]

hey thanks! dont worry, im stickin' with the Grindylows...ill have a cd together soon...hopefully

[slythrn]

Here we go. I'm finally getting the comment here. The song kicks ass, so never stop!

[aBrightMidnight]

thank you!

[aBrightMidnight]

i love you... ur the best i love you so so so so much! im the luckiest man alive to have you as my friend :]

[rlupinmoony7]

graham, you amaze me. best buddies for life. :]

keep on singing. screw the people of the youtube world.

[aBrightMidnight]

thanks a ton :]

[underxground]

Good stuff graham. Thats twilight right ? Havent read them. It doesnt matter if you can sing the best. You write your own music and put yourself out there. Thats more than alot of people can say. Keep on wrocking man.

-Maxx-

[aBrightMidnight]

yeah man its from twilight. you should read them they are pretty rad. even though they are kinda girly lol, but that's ok. thanks for the support man :]

[aBrightMidnight]

aww thanks a lot, everyone else apparently hated it :[

[begonedreamer]

A little rough around the edges, but so cute. :D