i have been vid responsin the holy bejezus out of you .. so i listened to this pome.. i thought it was only fitting .. and you know what?.. mesmerizing .. i liked it .. so i will listen to some more .. thanks!
I love your works. It's always a big pleasure to actually SEE you speaking the poem. It's a much more capturing experience compared to reading only especially when the poet and his voice have such an intense presence. To see you on video/film is a pure audiovisual feast. You really should get casted for a movie, I cannot mention that often enough.
@Amiduffer I look forward to it. Also, feel free to post any new or old videos on any of mine--if you have some older videos you just want to dust off and maybe get a few more views--go for it--my settings are to auto approve. peace.
I just spent the better part of the night with a hamster, squeezing puss out of an abscess on its cheek the size of a lumberjack's thumb. THAT'S the definition of eternity (and love).
Very nice Counselor! Just a quick heads up - the fine folks at Heinz Ketchup called. Something about the "anticipation" copyright... I told them to go away - we're in Catsup Country. Besides, I thought that issue was covered in the Rocky Horror Litigation years ago. But you would know that anyway... 5 star - what?
A comment earlier-seems to tie in with this, like love, marriage and misery and that is "eternity rhymes with paternity" and I'll add "maternity x paternity = happiness/misery/eternity"
Love is not written on paper, for paper can be erased. Nor is it etched on stone, for stone can be broken. But it is inscribed on a heart and there it shall remain forever.
i have been vid responsin the holy bejezus out of you .. so i listened to this pome.. i thought it was only fitting .. and you know what?.. mesmerizing .. i liked it .. so i will listen to some more .. thanks!
kthomasbrown 10 months ago
Wow, so creative, fun, but especially creative!! Love it!
Grtz! Dennis
BounceBananaCS 1 year ago
love is hot coals shoved down the throat and burning the intestines before the victim dies a slow, prolonged, painful death.
clayLavl 1 year ago
I love your works. It's always a big pleasure to actually SEE you speaking the poem. It's a much more capturing experience compared to reading only especially when the poet and his voice have such an intense presence. To see you on video/film is a pure audiovisual feast. You really should get casted for a movie, I cannot mention that often enough.
Dorfkanal 1 year ago
scary!
clayLavl 1 year ago
thanks David...this one gave us such a good belly-laugh! Love your razor-sharp humour...you are definitely having fun with this!
HatshepsutSheba 1 year ago
woohoo...you made me feel scared!
NewBrazdolph 1 year ago
Love this recite David ♥ hello?.
You totally got the Jack Nicholson thing going here. Is it me?
JoSieLove2Sing4u 1 year ago
Where?
JoSieLove2Sing4u 1 year ago
Oh David, you still crack me up. 5 stars :D
Wait... did they take away stars?
*mumbles* "Like"....
blackcat355 1 year ago
MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
janeczka 1 year ago
What is this man and his strange preaching?
NetofDisquiet 1 year ago
Lol..... you said it buddy....its a long long time.
kel2corkeyOriginal 1 year ago
Super! Superb title!
PoetLina 1 year ago
Hmmmm. Response poem coming up.
Amiduffer 1 year ago
@Amiduffer I look forward to it. Also, feel free to post any new or old videos on any of mine--if you have some older videos you just want to dust off and maybe get a few more views--go for it--my settings are to auto approve. peace.
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago
@Amiduffer Thanks David. I'll stick to responses that are related. It's more fun that way. Hilarious title.
Amiduffer 1 year ago
hahahahaaha...i actually have the beginnings of little tearlets in the corners of my eyes.
TheFallibleFiend 1 year ago
nice work, as always, DRC :) -jessie
charlottepoet 1 year ago
I miss that falling feeling! I have become too old and sure-footed.
skinnyjohnsen 1 year ago
I just spent the better part of the night with a hamster, squeezing puss out of an abscess on its cheek the size of a lumberjack's thumb. THAT'S the definition of eternity (and love).
Excellent poem. (love the title)
tinySpectacle 1 year ago
yikes
UntamedBlueLight 1 year ago
*covers ears*
omg shut up. i am young and idealistic and i believe in love. :/
healthyaddixion 1 year ago
@healthyaddixion Ah healthy, I'm just having fun going over the top. I've heard there are happily married couples, out there, somewhere... :p
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago
Such a cynical poet but a realist. The more romantic amoungst us just kid themselves that next time it will be perfect.
Regards, Peter
nordicsky 1 year ago
scary stuff this chute, isn't it? :P
ridingboy 1 year ago
Brilliant! 5*'s...oh wait thats gone. 5 thumbs up! :D
Nigelcf 1 year ago
Very nice Counselor! Just a quick heads up - the fine folks at Heinz Ketchup called. Something about the "anticipation" copyright... I told them to go away - we're in Catsup Country. Besides, I thought that issue was covered in the Rocky Horror Litigation years ago. But you would know that anyway... 5 star - what?
PlayboyHerbie 1 year ago
Are you the bartender in hell?
IamNotTheMoon 1 year ago
@IamNotTheMoon Actually, I'm the barfly in hell. :P
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago
This has to be one of my favourite of yours so far!
VisionGhostPoet 1 year ago
at your dark and cynical worst
...or do i mean realist.
Drastam 1 year ago
Nice!
A comment earlier-seems to tie in with this, like love, marriage and misery and that is "eternity rhymes with paternity" and I'll add "maternity x paternity = happiness/misery/eternity"
benzone50 1 year ago
like it!!
KraisinsGhost 1 year ago
hm. Should I be scared? Your cynicism glistens! hehe
Molto bene, senor! :)
KappyLaLaShow 1 year ago
Funny how eternity rhymes with paternity.
JesusSavesAtCitibank 1 year ago
Super David
I like it
All the best
Kean
keanghiero 1 year ago
ahahah! David, you might have a calling in prenuptial counselling.
liz1060 1 year ago
♥
JoSieLove2Sing4u 1 year ago
Love is not written on paper, for paper can be erased. Nor is it etched on stone, for stone can be broken. But it is inscribed on a heart and there it shall remain forever.
JoSieLove2Sing4u 1 year ago
Time and love. My two favourite subjects. I'm damned :/
Jadabh3 1 year ago
I think your delivery in this poem is one of your best. 5*fav'd
andrewnorris1 1 year ago
I love it :D
fellowtuber123 1 year ago
:D Love it and it's true too!
xxxild 1 year ago
David my son...What you need to do is get out there and find a woman you can really look up to..y'know..the one that's actually better than you?
All that aside, this is a great video.
It inspires.
- Ciau.
Hellishcrusade 1 year ago
True.
Idlinfarm 1 year ago
I get the impression you are in a relationship before; funny how downy has such long talons. :P
RichardRoy2 1 year ago
she reaches a diamond studded hand to lift the noodles off the shelf as he pushes the cart and drags that very stone shackled to his ankle
Barklord 1 year ago
shweet potatoes!
billymisfits 1 year ago