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  • i have been vid responsin the holy bejezus out of you .. so i listened to this pome.. i thought it was only fitting .. and you know what?.. mesmerizing .. i liked it .. so i will listen to some more .. thanks!

  • Wow, so creative, fun, but especially creative!! Love it!

    Grtz! Dennis

  • love is hot coals shoved down the throat and burning the intestines before the victim dies a slow, prolonged, painful death.

  • I love your works. It's always a big pleasure to actually SEE you speaking the poem. It's a much more capturing experience compared to reading only especially when the poet and his voice have such an intense presence. To see you on video/film is a pure audiovisual feast. You really should get casted for a movie, I cannot mention that often enough.

  • scary!

  • thanks David...this one gave us such a good belly-laugh! Love your razor-sharp humour...you are definitely having fun with this!

  • woohoo...you made me feel scared!

  • Love this recite David ♥ hello?.

    You totally got the Jack Nicholson thing going here. Is it me?

  • Where?

  • Oh David, you still crack me up. 5 stars :D

    Wait... did they take away stars?

    *mumbles* "Like"....

  • MWAHAHAHAHA!!!

  • What is this man and his strange preaching?

  • Lol..... you said it buddy....its a long long time.

  • Super! Superb title!

  • Hmmmm. Response poem coming up.

  • @Amiduffer I look forward to it. Also, feel free to post any new or old videos on any of mine--if you have some older videos you just want to dust off and maybe get a few more views--go for it--my settings are to auto approve. peace.

  • @Amiduffer Thanks David. I'll stick to responses that are related. It's more fun that way. Hilarious title.

  • hahahahaaha...i actually have the beginnings of little tearlets in the corners of my eyes.

  • nice work, as always, DRC :) -jessie

  • I miss that falling feeling! I have become too old and sure-footed.

  • I just spent the better part of the night with a hamster, squeezing puss out of an abscess on its cheek the size of a lumberjack's thumb. THAT'S the definition of eternity (and love).

    Excellent poem. (love the title)

  • yikes

  • *covers ears*

    omg shut up. i am young and idealistic and i believe in love. :/

  • @healthyaddixion Ah healthy, I'm just having fun going over the top. I've heard there are happily married couples, out there, somewhere... :p

  • Such a cynical poet but a realist. The more romantic amoungst us just kid themselves that next time it will be perfect.

    Regards, Peter

  • scary stuff this chute, isn't it? :P

  • Brilliant! 5*'s...oh wait thats gone. 5 thumbs up! :D

  • Very nice Counselor! Just a quick heads up - the fine folks at Heinz Ketchup called. Something about the "anticipation" copyright... I told them to go away - we're in Catsup Country. Besides, I thought that issue was covered in the Rocky Horror Litigation years ago. But you would know that anyway... 5 star - what?

  • Are you the bartender in hell?

  • @IamNotTheMoon Actually, I'm the barfly in hell. :P

  • This has to be one of my favourite of yours so far!

  • at your dark and cynical worst

    ...or do i mean realist.

  • Nice!

    A comment earlier-seems to tie in with this, like love, marriage and misery and that is "eternity rhymes with paternity" and I'll add "maternity x paternity = happiness/misery/eternity"

  • like it!!

  • hm. Should I be scared? Your cynicism glistens! hehe

    Molto bene, senor! :)

  • Funny how eternity rhymes with paternity.

  • Super David

    I like it

    All the best

    Kean

  • ahahah! David, you might have a calling in prenuptial counselling.

  • ♥

  • Love is not written on paper, for paper can be erased. Nor is it etched on stone, for stone can be broken. But it is inscribed on a heart and there it shall remain forever.

  • Time and love. My two favourite subjects. I'm damned :/

  • I think your delivery in this poem is one of your best. 5*fav'd

  • I love it :D

  • :D Love it and it's true too!

  • David my son...What you need to do is get out there and find a woman you can really look up to..y'know..the one that's actually better than you?

    All that aside, this is a great video.

    It inspires.

    - Ciau.

  • True.

  • I get the impression you are in a relationship before; funny how downy has such long talons. :P

  • she reaches a diamond studded hand to lift the noodles off the shelf as he pushes the cart and drags that very stone shackled to his ankle

  • shweet potatoes!

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