Hey guys cool it! If you want to criticise then please do it in a constructive and polite way. She doesn't seem to be a professional, so you can't expect a breath taking performance. I think you did quite well, although lotus3 has got a point...try to finish the moves nicely, use ur tummy musles a bit more to make the moves more clear. But as far as expression goes I think it's good, it comes over naturally and ur moves are quite good, just the transitions need a little working on =3
@MissManiacTheMad thank you for your comment. I know it´s not good and I need to work hard but I really try. This is my own choreography and it´s part improvisation and I thing it´s not bad choreography but it´s not well done. This video is really old and I don´t have been dancing this choreo for long and I was really nervous.
So I´m glad for your advices and aware of my faults.
I don't know how long you've been doing bellydance. But I think this choreography is far to difficult for you. The basics and main body isolation parts are well done, but try easier moves and do them with more love and precision therefore.
You moves are very disjointed and there is no flow as you go through the song. Work on listening to the music, not anticipating it, and completing a move before moving on to the next one.
malisimaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
milestone125 1 month ago
I think you did a great job!! I don't know why anyone would criticize!?!
valoo4 9 months ago
well dont on the choreography, but i do suggest a little more isolation and to keep your arms more postured.
but practice makes perfect. ^^
ReyuRabbidRabbit 1 year ago
Hey guys cool it! If you want to criticise then please do it in a constructive and polite way. She doesn't seem to be a professional, so you can't expect a breath taking performance. I think you did quite well, although lotus3 has got a point...try to finish the moves nicely, use ur tummy musles a bit more to make the moves more clear. But as far as expression goes I think it's good, it comes over naturally and ur moves are quite good, just the transitions need a little working on =3
MissManiacTheMad 1 year ago
@MissManiacTheMad thank you for your comment. I know it´s not good and I need to work hard but I really try. This is my own choreography and it´s part improvisation and I thing it´s not bad choreography but it´s not well done. This video is really old and I don´t have been dancing this choreo for long and I was really nervous.
So I´m glad for your advices and aware of my faults.
KatkaMeine 1 year ago
@KatkaMeine Good for u ^^ keep going and u'll be great
MissManiacTheMad 1 year ago
donde oyes tu el folclor que empiezas a saltar??
Majogomez11 1 year ago
I don't know how long you've been doing bellydance. But I think this choreography is far to difficult for you. The basics and main body isolation parts are well done, but try easier moves and do them with more love and precision therefore.
absinthfee13 1 year ago
Falta darle un poco de alegría y expresión, cambiaría mucho auqne hay cosas que mejorar
laurafue 1 year ago
oh my god its really bad
mrsimano2801 2 years ago
называется танцевать в четверть ноги. не старалась
persokon 2 years ago
uhmmm,le falta,parece una improvisacion,la musica va por un lado y la bailarina por otro
liliten83 2 years ago
normal :/
Rnigga1 2 years ago
hay ke tomar sol. querida
divina2mil9 2 years ago
You moves are very disjointed and there is no flow as you go through the song. Work on listening to the music, not anticipating it, and completing a move before moving on to the next one.
lotus3 2 years ago
thats terrible!!
charmoutta007 2 years ago