good acting, good use of cinematography (nice depth of field (good use of adobe after effects haha)), excellent make-up, good editing and sound synchronization. however, this short film lacked story. good for a no budget, but could've been better. needs story (substance) in which you could support the zombie premise. other wise, good job. 7/10
great so far. i think the guy with the gun needs to show more emotions and maybe his acting a bit. other than that it was great to me. i love your camera work. all the actors looks great. special effects was good too.
everything is very good and to my liking (such as filming/effects ect.), but some of the zombies were moving a little too human like, no worries, over time i'm sure you can fix that. hopefully my critique was helpful! Oh and ARMED CITIZENS FTW!!!!11
The visuals were excellent as usual and so was the cinematography. Great job on the colorization. Super great film...but the sound editing needs some serious work...I use VST plugins and audacity to help with the sound...but great, great effort by everyone, would love for this to be a webseries. Can't wait for Angel's Ashes...how's the trailer? - Tee
Seth, you are a beautiful Zombie. <3 And nice camera, acting wasn't too bad. Little bit of disjunction of the voices in the beginning might want to work on but yeah, it's pretty dec for a no-budget film. ^_^
This is quite well done but you should try to improve on your sound editing. Especially in the car the difference between the dialog of the guy and girl is obvious, so maybe try adding a noisegate to cancel out the background humming
Very good , check our zombie flick at sheffieldzombies youtube channel , see if u like , the girl is this is very good at acting too , love the location , i think that makes a good zombie flick
very well done.. I know what it is to work with nothing but your creativity & ingenuity.. there are always things that can be made better.. but getting up and doing anything is the hard part.. i congratulate you!
Not bad, I feel there still needs to be more; the camera you used is either a 7D which makes it look good and the color correction is perfect, the zombies needed a bit variety to them like more than just two or three I would love to work more on this if giving the opportunity and if it's true you made it with Zero budget I think there's a lot more you can do with this.
i like the editing, the color correction was nice, your charters seemed like the fit the part, the make up was very nice, and i like the cutting on action, the pacing in the cuts were strange to me and seems to jump cut around. id work on using some more in and out of frame shots to keep cutting seem more natural, also i didn't like the focus rolls there great if shot right but have to be done just right, also the dialog could flow better, however i enjoyed this good work.
Very nice! I like it! You should continue making more of these, they're really good. The only thing that was a little off was the audio and video in the very beginning when the two were talking. Other than that, nice job!
im kinda getting a Night of the living Dead vibe from this. Were you going for this? im guessing you got inspiration from The Crazies
92bagder 4 months ago 3
this honestly was amazing. i certainly hope you're going to school for film. ^_^
xRawrxMandy 4 months ago
Considering how scared shitless I am of zombies and the fact that I watched the whole thing I would say this deserves a Like :)
ConquistadorErnesto 5 months ago
Hey good stuff bro but one thing you could do is eliminate more of the background noises..other than that good work
mrkumai 5 months ago
RUNS BITCH RUNS
DeadManXD182 5 months ago
Good color grading.
slapshot1x 7 months ago
Nice Work! What kind of Steadicam did you use? For all those fast motion shoots.
lwill85 7 months ago
You should get more views(: subscribe.
Boogie343 7 months ago
well done 7/10
krishang3 7 months ago
If you want to make a better zombie movie you should add some music and get more wide lense shots. Good video.
jackpaintball 7 months ago
good acting, good use of cinematography (nice depth of field (good use of adobe after effects haha)), excellent make-up, good editing and sound synchronization. however, this short film lacked story. good for a no budget, but could've been better. needs story (substance) in which you could support the zombie premise. other wise, good job. 7/10
SuperAndrenaline 7 months ago
Well done!
ManuSmashBros 7 months ago
this is pretty deadly =] =] litterly lolol
22andy223 7 months ago
wow nice acting :D
i think faster zombies are to much better than slow ones^^
caroliiine15 7 months ago
Why'd you change the name? It's harder to find!
sable3001 7 months ago
that girl tripped 1 to many times ^.^
pokmonmaster222 7 months ago
To be zombies, they were running so fast.
But congrats is a great short film!!! ;)
PEKEZTAR 7 months ago
I think it would make a pretty good web series for no budget. Hell if it got popular you may get a budget.
daxflame44 7 months ago
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daxflame44 7 months ago
why in every horror flick there just got to be that woman that like crawling and faling instead of run the fuck away :P
sweenkingandwow2 8 months ago
love l4d2
GREATESTANIMEFREAK 8 months ago
Great short film Lucky!! Looking to see more stuff from ya.
shawnxian73 8 months ago
this was amazing... how can this only have 1.073 when my minecraft video have 22.596
sej15152 8 months ago
great so far. i think the guy with the gun needs to show more emotions and maybe his acting a bit. other than that it was great to me. i love your camera work. all the actors looks great. special effects was good too.
mengthor 8 months ago
Very good short-movie!!! :)))
Keep the spirit inflamed!!!
Solitudinis 8 months ago
Nice work with the Zombies we need to talk I have a Zombie and Superhero Comic out now leave your number I'll call u this is serious no bS>>
rarereed 8 months ago
chen they left u man...and btw who was the little kid. was it sky ?
MultiSasuke88 8 months ago
hey luckie.. i wanna be in a movie too. haha
kongoxiong85 8 months ago
Hoping to see this film at the Hmong New Year.
tenglee2 8 months ago
DONT STARTLE THE WITCH!!
TwoTone98Z71 8 months ago
wow, i actually enjoyed this! GreatJob!
Vajboi08 8 months ago
Loves it! Sam you are great at playing the victem!:)
jadegial 9 months ago
aww... i wish there was a part 2... T.T
mrxiong8 9 months ago
wow! this is really cool and terrifying
pakaymoua94 9 months ago
everything is very good and to my liking (such as filming/effects ect.), but some of the zombies were moving a little too human like, no worries, over time i'm sure you can fix that. hopefully my critique was helpful! Oh and ARMED CITIZENS FTW!!!!11
MangiomoSammiches 9 months ago
hey you should make this a series lol
lilaznshorty711 9 months ago
I'm feeling so good.
but i think This ending is not impressive.
kokawa2003 9 months ago
The visuals were excellent as usual and so was the cinematography. Great job on the colorization. Super great film...but the sound editing needs some serious work...I use VST plugins and audacity to help with the sound...but great, great effort by everyone, would love for this to be a webseries. Can't wait for Angel's Ashes...how's the trailer? - Tee
leztuesday 10 months ago
Seth, you are a beautiful Zombie. <3 And nice camera, acting wasn't too bad. Little bit of disjunction of the voices in the beginning might want to work on but yeah, it's pretty dec for a no-budget film. ^_^
okamisamaEGOgirl 10 months ago 28
Awesome!!!Great job!
ostapmusic 10 months ago
This is quite well done but you should try to improve on your sound editing. Especially in the car the difference between the dialog of the guy and girl is obvious, so maybe try adding a noisegate to cancel out the background humming
taschentiger 10 months ago
Pretty damn good for a fan made project ! do more zombie stuff like this because its awesome and I just subbed :)
BensBluRaysHD 10 months ago
fakeeeee
888hjt 10 months ago
Very good , check our zombie flick at sheffieldzombies youtube channel , see if u like , the girl is this is very good at acting too , love the location , i think that makes a good zombie flick
savini1979 10 months ago
very well done.. I know what it is to work with nothing but your creativity & ingenuity.. there are always things that can be made better.. but getting up and doing anything is the hard part.. i congratulate you!
aJJONphotoplay 10 months ago
whats an indie film?
Hrko1992 10 months ago
Not bad, I feel there still needs to be more; the camera you used is either a 7D which makes it look good and the color correction is perfect, the zombies needed a bit variety to them like more than just two or three I would love to work more on this if giving the opportunity and if it's true you made it with Zero budget I think there's a lot more you can do with this.
Nolus20 10 months ago
1:29
i heard a witch!!
switch off the light!
Harimakum 10 months ago 35
@Harimakum thts in L4D2 and L4D and ur right and its a boy!
ninjakaiho 8 months ago
I would have loved it if the acting wasn't so terrible.
indy9girl99 10 months ago
Loving the camerawork- nice control! The effects also! The acting was mediocre for the first part but when the she's running for help - cringey!
asyarihahaha 10 months ago
i like the editing, the color correction was nice, your charters seemed like the fit the part, the make up was very nice, and i like the cutting on action, the pacing in the cuts were strange to me and seems to jump cut around. id work on using some more in and out of frame shots to keep cutting seem more natural, also i didn't like the focus rolls there great if shot right but have to be done just right, also the dialog could flow better, however i enjoyed this good work.
jimmycrispy 10 months ago
that tunnle part was scary , and was that onision as a zombie? but i have to admit that i laughed in a few scenes but the video is good
ALEZTHEGREAT 10 months ago
Very nice! I like it! You should continue making more of these, they're really good. The only thing that was a little off was the audio and video in the very beginning when the two were talking. Other than that, nice job!
Ramenlver 10 months ago
nice! well done
JonathanHoleton 10 months ago
great vid...i have always wanted to make a film like this:)...btw check my channel, very interesting videos with vfx just like this:D
batatacreew 10 months ago
Nice guys! Especially the camera work was verry good, keep it up!
TheBardonator 10 months ago