is this a real monologue its not popping up PLEASE HELP I NEED TO DO THIS.. IF ITS FEBRUARY 24 AND YOU SEE THIS DONT BOTHER ANSWERING IT.. THANKS ...
HI! great job! this is an amazing monologue!! and u did a great job, is there anyway you could send me the script for this? my email is bowers.bccrusader2011@gmail.com
@barballetta2010 Thanks for your comment. This was filmed when I first started getting into dramatic acting (I had only ever done comedy), not my best work, but thanks for the criticism.
@jeffdafish Thank you so much. Yes I do have the script for this. You can either inbox me your email or I can send it to you in a message. Thanks again :)
I am in year 12 at High School and for my English Assignment I need a approx. 4 minute Dramatic Monologue. I was wondering could you suggest any poems ??
I don't comment often on monolouges but i did want to say bravo!! That was wonderful!! Just watch out becuase you do this thing with your lips a lot, but it was excellent!! Good luck in all that you do!!
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comment. Yeah at the time I was still getting used to braces... But now they're off and I'm thinking of redoing the monologue :)
But thanks again for your comment, I really do appreciate it!!!
Fantastic job. I love this monologue. It is very strong and you preformed it realy well. My only critique for you would be to play more emotions, it felt one note to me. Very serious and very good, but you could play more. Great job! Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much! Yeah feel free to use it. I wrote most of it, but got the inspiration from something I saw on a tv show once. I'm glad you liked it :)
i think you have a lot of potential but i don't really feel like you believe in the monologue. acting is more than reciting lines, its about literally being someone else. you are very close to having an incredibly amazing piece. great job!
That's so amazing. I really really appreciate that. I hope your kids liked it, and thank you for your kind words. I remember starting out, pace was my biggest problem, and honestly still is lol. But yeah, I'm glad the video was useful :) Again, thanks so much!!!
hey whats this from please. its a great audition peice so i'd need the play, character and writer maybe, thanks!!!! if u dont want to give it to me id understand. just rely-comment me back~
is this a real monologue its not popping up PLEASE HELP I NEED TO DO THIS.. IF ITS FEBRUARY 24 AND YOU SEE THIS DONT BOTHER ANSWERING IT.. THANKS ...
lovemusicforever2697 2 weeks ago
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i need this monoluge for a college auduition and i would be so thankful if you would email it to me, please! :) my email is brettrashad@gmail.com
brett4974 8 months ago
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i need this monoluge for a college auduition and i would be so thankful if you would email it to me, please! :) my email is brettrashad@gmail.com
brett4974 8 months ago
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i need this monoluge for a college auduition and i would be so thankful if you would email it to me, please! :) my email is brettrashad@gmail.com
brett4974 8 months ago
at one part he was crying
76IPODMAN 1 year ago
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HI! great job! this is an amazing monologue!! and u did a great job, is there anyway you could send me the script for this? my email is bowers.bccrusader2011@gmail.com
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IS THERE A WAY I CAN GET A COPY OF THIS SCRIPT!? TZBABY86@GMAIL.COM THANK YOU!! GOOD JOB!!
TZBABY86 1 year ago
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hey guys i just posted up my first video. please watch and feel free to comment. sorry if the audio isnt too great btw. thanks!
TheChunk02 1 year ago
i will be prob the only one but to me it was acting, a good acting or not even that, sorry mate
barballetta2010 1 year ago
@barballetta2010 Thanks for your comment. This was filmed when I first started getting into dramatic acting (I had only ever done comedy), not my best work, but thanks for the criticism.
Heirs1 1 year ago
Dude do you have a script for this? It's really good?
jeffdafish 1 year ago
@jeffdafish Thank you so much. Yes I do have the script for this. You can either inbox me your email or I can send it to you in a message. Thanks again :)
Heirs1 1 year ago
@Heirs1 Just in a message would be sweet
jeffdafish 1 year ago
You are really good :)
Watching this helped me in getting my monologue performance better
thank you :)
convict25 1 year ago
@anja833 Thank you :) Yeah, I have the monologue saved on my computer. Send me a message and I can send it to you :)
Heirs1 1 year ago
im so sorry man you speech was great
twoPIECESofCANDY 1 year ago
Wow, that was amazing. I usually don't comment. But that completely blew me away.
surfcrasy 1 year ago
@surfcrasy Thanks so much, I really appreciate it :)
Heirs1 1 year ago
did u write this? where did u get it?
braxtonioan 2 years ago
this is really good! where did you get this from or did you write it?
evilangeline123 2 years ago
u are wery good.
lisenggg 2 years ago 3
gay means happy ! happy is a good thing ! :)
adamwhittaker1989 2 years ago
brilliant, thats was fantastic you are going to go far friend x ;)
adamwhittaker1989 2 years ago 6
Your good. Great monologue choice.
Crystalom3 2 years ago 2
...WOW.
i'm blown away. thank you for posting this. your performance was amazing~ <3
xxxchocoloco 2 years ago 3
did you write this or was it based on a poem ?
I am in year 12 at High School and for my English Assignment I need a approx. 4 minute Dramatic Monologue. I was wondering could you suggest any poems ??
By the way your video is awesome. =]
xo.
convict25 2 years ago
WOW! this was a very good performance...i am going to do a version.
daonlymaine 2 years ago
woow! havent words!
very nice job!
patriksten 3 years ago
I don't comment often on monolouges but i did want to say bravo!! That was wonderful!! Just watch out becuase you do this thing with your lips a lot, but it was excellent!! Good luck in all that you do!!
nyc2laactress 3 years ago
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comment. Yeah at the time I was still getting used to braces... But now they're off and I'm thinking of redoing the monologue :)
But thanks again for your comment, I really do appreciate it!!!
Heirs1 3 years ago
np!!! yeah braces aren't very fun!!
nyc2laactress 3 years ago
AMAZING JOB! I was all involved and actually started to think it was real! You mind if I post my version of this on here
actingdakid1206 3 years ago
great job dude where did you get that monologue from!
themanjayy 3 years ago
Thanks! I got the idea from something I saw on a television show, but I wrote it myself.
Thanks again!
Heirs1 3 years ago
Fantastic job. I love this monologue. It is very strong and you preformed it realy well. My only critique for you would be to play more emotions, it felt one note to me. Very serious and very good, but you could play more. Great job! Keep up the great work!
DearingActingStudio 3 years ago
Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback!
Heirs1 3 years ago
Well done! Do some more monologues! What a great idea.
SajoieDeVie 3 years ago
Thanks so much! I'm getting a new camera soon as my old one is broken. So I should have some more stuff up soon. I LOVE your videos though!
Heirs1 3 years ago
Wow,
The monolouge was awesome
and you were great.
Really really good.
8dollarWeave 3 years ago
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
Heirs1 3 years ago
Glad this helped. Break a leg!
Heirs1 3 years ago
Thanks :) Can't wait to see yours!
Heirs1 3 years ago
This was good. Can you send me it?
or like tell me where you got it?
Teeareohwhy89 3 years ago
i really liked this. check out my video.
&& if u dont mind, can i take this monologue from u (change it 2 a girls prospective) i'll give u credit. lol
youngactress09 3 years ago
Thank you so much! Yeah feel free to use it. I wrote most of it, but got the inspiration from something I saw on a tv show once. I'm glad you liked it :)
Heirs1 3 years ago
i have a video now! if anyone would like to check it out. it's called "hey all you youtubers!" please comment!
PrettyMuch13 3 years ago
i think you have a lot of potential but i don't really feel like you believe in the monologue. acting is more than reciting lines, its about literally being someone else. you are very close to having an incredibly amazing piece. great job!
PrettyMuch13 3 years ago
Thanks for your constructive criticism. Acting is a continuing journey of growth and realization, and I appreciate your words :)
I'd love to see some of your work sometime!
Heirs1 3 years ago
what play is this from?
spenc24 3 years ago
this is an amazing performance! :] i love the monolouge! bravooo! Cx
stackyisme 3 years ago
That's so amazing. I really really appreciate that. I hope your kids liked it, and thank you for your kind words. I remember starting out, pace was my biggest problem, and honestly still is lol. But yeah, I'm glad the video was useful :) Again, thanks so much!!!
Heirs1 4 years ago
Wow, thank you so much, I really appreciate that :) Btw... What's your "year 8", so sorry, but I'm not sure what that is.
Heirs1 4 years ago
very good
GreenGrass1243 4 years ago
Solid, dramatic piece--good job!
jrussellslack 4 years ago
Hey Jordan, I remember wen I saw you perform this for our beginning class, you made me cry and you still do! Promise you will come back and visit us!
-Dani H.
1amaznmom 4 years ago
Aww you're such a cutie, and you did so well.
Sad monologue :[
But.....
great job :]]]]
jinxerbarbie 4 years ago
oops i feel like a douche i just noticed its not from anything, sorry haha
Iamtheice 4 years ago
hey whats this from please. its a great audition peice so i'd need the play, character and writer maybe, thanks!!!! if u dont want to give it to me id understand. just rely-comment me back~
Iamtheice 4 years ago
wow jordan you amaze me.
:)
♥ Tatiana Valdez
Musiclover4lyfe 4 years ago
Very powerful. Well done.
warg29 4 years ago
You're very talented!
Great-ness. :)
KristieDepp 4 years ago
That was a pretty good job. Where did you take this monologue from? You did it justice, but the material itself seems very out of date.
ElmosLively 4 years ago
Good job!
JamesMorlan 4 years ago