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From: Heirs1
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  • is this a real monologue its not popping up PLEASE HELP I NEED TO DO THIS.. IF ITS FEBRUARY 24 AND YOU SEE THIS DONT BOTHER ANSWERING IT.. THANKS ... 

  • at one part he was crying

  • i will be prob the only one but to me it was acting, a good acting or not even that, sorry mate

  • @barballetta2010 Thanks for your comment. This was filmed when I first started getting into dramatic acting (I had only ever done comedy), not my best work, but thanks for the criticism.

  • Dude do you have a script for this? It's really good?

  • @jeffdafish Thank you so much. Yes I do have the script for this. You can either inbox me your email or I can send it to you in a message. Thanks again :)

  • @Heirs1 Just in a message would be sweet

  • You are really good :)

    Watching this helped me in getting my monologue performance better

    thank you :)

  • @anja833 Thank you :) Yeah, I have the monologue saved on my computer. Send me a message and I can send it to you :)

  • im so sorry man you speech was great 

  • Wow, that was amazing. I usually don't comment. But that completely blew me away.

  • @surfcrasy Thanks so much, I really appreciate it :)

  • did u write this? where did u get it?

  • this is really good! where did you get this from or did you write it?

  • u are wery good.

  • gay means happy ! happy is a good thing ! :)

  • brilliant, thats was fantastic you are going to go far friend x ;)

  • Your good. Great monologue choice.

  • ...WOW.

    i'm blown away. thank you for posting this. your performance was amazing~ <3

  • did you write this or was it based on a poem ?

    I am in year 12 at High School and for my English Assignment I need a approx. 4 minute Dramatic Monologue. I was wondering could you suggest any poems ??

    By the way your video is awesome. =]

    xo.

  • WOW! this was a very good performance...i am going to do a version.

  • woow! havent words!

    very nice job!

  • I don't comment often on monolouges but i did want to say bravo!! That was wonderful!! Just watch out becuase you do this thing with your lips a lot, but it was excellent!! Good luck in all that you do!!

  • Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comment. Yeah at the time I was still getting used to braces... But now they're off and I'm thinking of redoing the monologue :)

    But thanks again for your comment, I really do appreciate it!!!

  • np!!! yeah braces aren't very fun!!

  • AMAZING JOB! I was all involved and actually started to think it was real! You mind if I post my version of this on here

  • great job dude where did you get that monologue from!

  • Thanks! I got the idea from something I saw on a television show, but I wrote it myself.

    Thanks again!

  • Fantastic job. I love this monologue. It is very strong and you preformed it realy well. My only critique for you would be to play more emotions, it felt one note to me. Very serious and very good, but you could play more. Great job! Keep up the great work!

  • Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback!

  • Well done! Do some more monologues! What a great idea.

  • Thanks so much! I'm getting a new camera soon as my old one is broken. So I should have some more stuff up soon. I LOVE your videos though!

  • Wow,

    The monolouge was awesome

    and you were great.

    Really really good.

  • Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

  • Glad this helped. Break a leg!

  • Thanks :) Can't wait to see yours!

  • This was good. Can you send me it?

    or like tell me where you got it?

  • i really liked this. check out my video.

    && if u dont mind, can i take this monologue from u (change it 2 a girls prospective) i'll give u credit. lol

  • Thank you so much! Yeah feel free to use it. I wrote most of it, but got the inspiration from something I saw on a tv show once. I'm glad you liked it :)

  • i have a video now! if anyone would like to check it out. it's called "hey all you youtubers!" please comment!

  • i think you have a lot of potential but i don't really feel like you believe in the monologue. acting is more than reciting lines, its about literally being someone else. you are very close to having an incredibly amazing piece. great job!

  • Thanks for your constructive criticism. Acting is a continuing journey of growth and realization, and I appreciate your words :)

    I'd love to see some of your work sometime!

  • what play is this from?

  • this is an amazing performance! :] i love the monolouge! bravooo! Cx

  • That's so amazing. I really really appreciate that. I hope your kids liked it, and thank you for your kind words. I remember starting out, pace was my biggest problem, and honestly still is lol. But yeah, I'm glad the video was useful :) Again, thanks so much!!!

  • Wow, thank you so much, I really appreciate that :) Btw... What's your "year 8", so sorry, but I'm not sure what that is.

  • very good

  • Solid, dramatic piece--good job!

  • Hey Jordan, I remember wen I saw you perform this for our beginning class, you made me cry and you still do! Promise you will come back and visit us!

    -Dani H.

  • Aww you're such a cutie, and you did so well.

    Sad monologue :[

    But.....

    great job :]]]]

  • oops i feel like a douche i just noticed its not from anything, sorry haha

  • hey whats this from please. its a great audition peice so i'd need the play, character and writer maybe, thanks!!!! if u dont want to give it to me id understand. just rely-comment me back~

  • wow jordan you amaze me.

    :)

    &hearts; Tatiana Valdez

  • Very powerful. Well done.

  • You're very talented!

    Great-ness. :)

  • That was a pretty good job. Where did you take this monologue from? You did it justice, but the material itself seems very out of date.

  • Good job!

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