I was just listening to some top40 songs on youtube and then I remembered this song that i've heard like more than a year ago, but i've forgotten the name and the name of your account. And suddenly 'oh yeah!'
This number is full of emotion, gives me a lotta goosebumps when I hear it, great respect for it. Keep going.
haha I made up an account to upload my own videos, but also to respond at yours.. I once saw and heard you at YouTube and I wanted to let you know how amazing you are :| I really think you've got some skills, and I love to hear you playing piano and singing! Good luck with it, I bet it'll take you really far.. you got a gift!
I love the music to this song! You did better at controlling your voice, too, compared to the iTunes version. By the way, is this song about committing suicide? Just wondering from the lyrics...
"still we throw our bodies all away, looking for something that will give us what we need" - we look to sex to fulfill us, giving ourselves over to every type of degradation in order to satiate our appetites.
"and you sow the seeds of discontent when you say there's something better waiting down the road" - don't rock the boat; even though it's painfully obvious that no amount of sexual indulgence can truly satisfy the human heart, don't suggest that anything else, anything more, is needed.
I keep coming back in here to listen to this song...I woke up the other day with it running through a dream hehe. I suppose I better go and buy it... just love it!!
Wow, I came across you by accident and have just about listened to all your songs now... I really love this song... hope you get picked up by a big recording company and make a fortune.
I'll be buying your album today. I mean, your talent was the main factor, the fact that you're hot definitely contributed, the fact that you're crazy is endearing- but it was the Sobe's bottle that clinched it for me. Keep going, keep going, keep going.
Wow, again, great job! You put your whole heart into this one it seems. Do your lyrics just come right to you, or do you seem to have to think about them for a while?
it varies. I wrote this song from beginning to end, starting with nothing, and wrote all the music and lyrics in three hours. That's pretty extreme, though. I usually spend a few days working out the lyrics for a song. In extreme cases on the other end - like with "Power in My Fingers" - it can take up to a year to write a complete song.
go to myspace(DOT)com(SLASH)steveplaysmusic or go to purevolume(DOT)com(SLASH)stevedalton to hear much better versions of a lot of my original songs.
Dude, I wouldn't post too many originals on here ( especially ones this good) unless they are already copyrighted. Someone is bound to lift it from you.
This is gorgeous. I'd really like to see you break out of the traditional verse - chorus - verse format, but I think in a lot of cases, such as this one, it really doesn't matter.
I was just listening to some top40 songs on youtube and then I remembered this song that i've heard like more than a year ago, but i've forgotten the name and the name of your account. And suddenly 'oh yeah!'
This number is full of emotion, gives me a lotta goosebumps when I hear it, great respect for it. Keep going.
Just like everybody says; you've got some skills.
Soofunk 2 years ago
Holy shit.
I've had this favorited for ages as a video "I don't have time to watch it now, but one day...."
Now I'm going through my favorites and finally checked this out. Simply Amazing. :)
Reppije 2 years ago
"things Mel addicts me to..." >;P~~~~~~
miseriavolare 2 years ago
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TomRatos 3 years ago
haha I made up an account to upload my own videos, but also to respond at yours.. I once saw and heard you at YouTube and I wanted to let you know how amazing you are :| I really think you've got some skills, and I love to hear you playing piano and singing! Good luck with it, I bet it'll take you really far.. you got a gift!
Soofunk 3 years ago
I love the music to this song! You did better at controlling your voice, too, compared to the iTunes version. By the way, is this song about committing suicide? Just wondering from the lyrics...
49and38x 3 years ago
"still we throw our bodies all away, looking for something that will give us what we need" - we look to sex to fulfill us, giving ourselves over to every type of degradation in order to satiate our appetites.
"and you sow the seeds of discontent when you say there's something better waiting down the road" - don't rock the boat; even though it's painfully obvious that no amount of sexual indulgence can truly satisfy the human heart, don't suggest that anything else, anything more, is needed.
orderandnumber 3 years ago
you have an amazing voice
thesliffinator 3 years ago
I keep coming back in here to listen to this song...I woke up the other day with it running through a dream hehe. I suppose I better go and buy it... just love it!!
jaggity 3 years ago
Wow, I came across you by accident and have just about listened to all your songs now... I really love this song... hope you get picked up by a big recording company and make a fortune.
jaggity 3 years ago 3
thank you. I also hope that happens. :)
orderandnumber 3 years ago
the SOBE bottle is so awesome fabulous job!!! loved the lyrics
mambogirl66 3 years ago 2
you sound kinda squeaky and high pitched but it was still fabulous
mambogirl66 3 years ago
I'll be buying your album today. I mean, your talent was the main factor, the fact that you're hot definitely contributed, the fact that you're crazy is endearing- but it was the Sobe's bottle that clinched it for me. Keep going, keep going, keep going.
jonvermunt 3 years ago
this is beautiful
kait10790 3 years ago
SOBE for the win. That is all.
Meluvsgold 3 years ago 2
hey, ive been dying to learn how to play this song. is there anyway i can get the chords for it or if you have any sheet music for it?
jgwx2 4 years ago
Do you have an Artists profile on Myspace??
if you dont
get one
please!
and if you do can i have the url? lol
your awesome...
truly
<3 Mel xx
Melj999 4 years ago
check my profile page. it has a link to my myspace.
orderandnumber 4 years ago
this is flat out amazing. great job.
jgwx2 4 years ago
This ROCKS!!!
I'll hav this stuck in my head all week =P
beatboy08 4 years ago
this has such a chiodos feel Maybe even a little circa survive Great Job buddy
punksurferdude9 4 years ago
i have this song stuck in my head for the past two weeks! really quite amazing
InsertBandNameHere 4 years ago
You can purchase and download it on my myspace....... =)
orderandnumber 4 years ago
Wow, again, great job! You put your whole heart into this one it seems. Do your lyrics just come right to you, or do you seem to have to think about them for a while?
guitarmthomas 4 years ago
it varies. I wrote this song from beginning to end, starting with nothing, and wrote all the music and lyrics in three hours. That's pretty extreme, though. I usually spend a few days working out the lyrics for a song. In extreme cases on the other end - like with "Power in My Fingers" - it can take up to a year to write a complete song.
orderandnumber 4 years ago
I can barely hear your voice over the piano.. T_T But oh well. :)
Ghostgurl0894 4 years ago 2
go to myspace(DOT)com(SLASH)steveplaysmusic or go to purevolume(DOT)com(SLASH)stevedalton to hear much better versions of a lot of my original songs.
orderandnumber 4 years ago
WHOO! Alright! Thanks! *typing in address*
Ghostgurl0894 4 years ago
Wow! Love the piano playing. Great song! Skills man, you've got skills!!!
TheOnlyKingArthur 4 years ago
this is the best song ive ever heard
InsertBandNameHere 4 years ago
wow man! that's great, the lyrics are really deep. its awsome man, keep it up!
hawkdude93 4 years ago 2
WOW excellent
UpDownMostly 4 years ago
wow...erm...you're great, beautiful lyrics
deniiwilliams15 4 years ago
this was truley amazing.
wow.
bravo.
:D
SofaKingRad11 4 years ago
Dude, I wouldn't post too many originals on here ( especially ones this good) unless they are already copyrighted. Someone is bound to lift it from you.
I really like the piano lick
bucjason 4 years ago
sorry for the staggered singing/timing in the beginning. the breathing is pretty tough; the singing is almost constant, with no time to breathe.
orderandnumber 4 years ago
You're Awesome!
Chesquared92 4 years ago
awesome dude.
MasterEnglisher 4 years ago
This is gorgeous. I'd really like to see you break out of the traditional verse - chorus - verse format, but I think in a lot of cases, such as this one, it really doesn't matter.
xtremenessosity 4 years ago
all your originals are wicked good. i really like cry for help too.
lokn45 4 years ago
i think this is one of your best performed songs yet (next to fix you). keep it up and keep us posted!
:)
shallwetalk12345 4 years ago
holy shit man. this is nice! we should jam sometime.
haslguitar 4 years ago
That was incredible, bro. Your voice in the chorus is just mind-blowing.
h0merg0mez 4 years ago
wow so gud!!! love it
emmz5 4 years ago
It's pretty good.
alternateuniverse88 4 years ago
this is really good.
lukahkovac 4 years ago