I think a lot of this has been shot really well. I like the moments of shallow focus and a lot of it is framed well. To be constructively critical I think the post production lets it down a bit. The soundtrack on the intro seems too active to me, some of the cuts are a bit mistimed and I think above all you need to look into colour grading. Apologies if you take that offensively, I assure that it wasn't meant in such a way. Oh and FYI, I stumbled upon it because it was linked on IMDB forum.
@smcSINema No offense taken. We didn't color grade it much, just enough to get it in the ballpark. And the bombastic music in the beginning was intentionally a counterpoint to him just walking; we though it would be funny. Thanks for the comment!
haha this was actually pretty good. Better than I expected. =)
RedDragonProductions 1 year ago
I think a lot of this has been shot really well. I like the moments of shallow focus and a lot of it is framed well. To be constructively critical I think the post production lets it down a bit. The soundtrack on the intro seems too active to me, some of the cuts are a bit mistimed and I think above all you need to look into colour grading. Apologies if you take that offensively, I assure that it wasn't meant in such a way. Oh and FYI, I stumbled upon it because it was linked on IMDB forum.
smcSINema 1 year ago
@smcSINema No offense taken. We didn't color grade it much, just enough to get it in the ballpark. And the bombastic music in the beginning was intentionally a counterpoint to him just walking; we though it would be funny. Thanks for the comment!
TangledWebProduction 1 year ago
I just wanted to say that I was chewing blue gum and popped it, right at the time the guy did it at the beginning.
And it was actually pretty good, nice job.
PunkFictionProdction 1 year ago