wen u say ..and though we'll never understand..we watch our castles sink.............
it would sound cool if u said.. ..we'll never understand ...why we built our castles in the sand.... so understand and sand rhyme. instead of saying ...we watch our castles ...sink........................into the sand.
Mate, for someone that has had only about 1 years experience with singing and guitar you are pretty good!! I reckon you should try out for Australian Idol...I'd definitely vote for you!!!!!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!!
I agrre jarrod, this is the best i have seen from you. I really do like the chorus, it has that singabiltiy, if you know what i mean. and yeh, i know hwat you mean about the band and orchestra etc coming in. I hear the same things when i am mucking around, lead break here, drum beat etc. I just cant play them.
man I can totally hear the producing you're talking about. Maybe get yourself an 8track recorder and a synthesizer keyboard? they can be so much fun. either way though this song really has some pull, it MOVES during the chorus!
5* Jarrod, there's a lot of good stuff going on here. Very nice song...and I like your performing it....keep in mind you start with the bare bones good song and build from there. You are very talented.
Really well written. Great use of metaphor without being melodramatic.
If verse 2 didn't mention it, I wouldn't have thought this was a love song though, and just about life in general. I think I might like that theme a little more actually.
good song!! NO really good song...glad I stopped by...gonna sub and check out your other songs...
Randy
this is good!
randyfromsaturn 2 years ago
Nice job on this. Bravo!
Kikalani 2 years ago
Very, very good. Five stars*****
MaureenKilgore 2 years ago
very nice original! Well done and most importantly keep it up hehe
FabianL2007 2 years ago
Great Song Bro.
>>>Sherif
SherifG1 2 years ago
Great guitar playing, Nice song & you sing very well.Keep at it Fellow Aussie 5*s..Marc Jones-Pop/Jazz Vocalist..Los Angeles,U.S.A.
glennmach 2 years ago
very nice...:)~
dreamcatcher1090 2 years ago
wen u say ..and though we'll never understand..we watch our castles sink.............
it would sound cool if u said.. ..we'll never understand ...why we built our castles in the sand.... so understand and sand rhyme. instead of saying ...we watch our castles ...sink........................into the sand.
i duno just an opinion x
xxlucyxx 2 years ago
Well done Jarrod,
sounds great and love the lyrics too.
keep it up mate!
steveamosamusic 2 years ago
Excellent Jarrod! You wrote a nice song here! Terrific singing and playing too! I enjoyed it... FrAnK (★★★★★)
allshookup77 2 years ago
Hola Jarrod! Good on you getting experience via open mics, they're a great place to explore your sound. A somber piece of writing *****
marywinmusic 2 years ago
Nice job, Jarrod! 5 *'s!
soundslikefrank 2 years ago
great singing !!
keep it up !! ^^
poesiegirl007 2 years ago
A very fine song. Well played and sang. 5 stars --:)Rod
Cliffbrock 2 years ago
Dis is da best 1... Cant get it outta my head!
jjfan17 2 years ago
Awesome voice and guitar !!
viudanegraaa 2 years ago
OMG I love originals more than al!
Great song and lyrics!
Wonderful job!
Very nice to meet you!!
santamara 2 years ago
Nice tune and lyric Jarrod, great vocal as well, I really enjoyed this,..Reg
TeamCannabis 2 years ago
Very good mate.. keep it up ! 5*
ronb15 2 years ago
I love the pretty finger picking! brilliant song and lyrics. excellent!! xxxxx
Beeliiinnda 2 years ago
Uooou!!! I great voice and guitar too.
I love that song!
I also play the guitar (since three years ago) Can you send me the chords please?
How many time have you been practising it? It sounds great ^^ Keep it up
sunny92cat 2 years ago
of course you can
ill send them to you as soon as i can
arcticwolf1985 2 years ago
Beautiful voice and great song !
5*****
Tadek59 2 years ago
Mate, for someone that has had only about 1 years experience with singing and guitar you are pretty good!! I reckon you should try out for Australian Idol...I'd definitely vote for you!!!!!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!!
Ozzyhellsbells 2 years ago
thank you so much!
im thinking about next year for idol
arcticwolf1985 2 years ago
very nice Jarrod, i enjoyed it very much....ty for sharing with me.........take care............Marissa
surgarbabe9 2 years ago
I agrre jarrod, this is the best i have seen from you. I really do like the chorus, it has that singabiltiy, if you know what i mean. and yeh, i know hwat you mean about the band and orchestra etc coming in. I hear the same things when i am mucking around, lead break here, drum beat etc. I just cant play them.
steveelbourn 2 years ago
loved this ! thank you for sharing this with me :)
SolidBlue22 2 years ago
Excellent!
SusanStartv 2 years ago
Very nice my friend!
Nice voice and straight guitar!
Keep it up
Manuel
( *_Y_* )
manulitodos 2 years ago
man I can totally hear the producing you're talking about. Maybe get yourself an 8track recorder and a synthesizer keyboard? they can be so much fun. either way though this song really has some pull, it MOVES during the chorus!
magicalmerk 2 years ago
thanks mate!
ill definitely have to look into a synth
arcticwolf1985 2 years ago
Good melody...Nice. Yes an orchrestra would be nice. Mari Ana.
xyzweit 2 years ago
Very nice song mate. Enjoyed your lyrical reflections of these times. Peace,...Mark
Maysey1 2 years ago
Very lovely song my friend:)
*****
:)
Hilde
Lillemy1 2 years ago
Nice one Mate! keep 'em coming..
mdjude 2 years ago
Great job Jarrod. I like it very much.
Tatiana
LoveMusicForever1234 2 years ago
very catchy!
madstadd13 2 years ago
awesome =-)
thanks for sharing your video with me. i enjoyed your music. *cheers*
littleK 2 years ago
Very strong song!
jmedia1 2 years ago
I like the minimalist guitar accompaniment. I've a feeling this one would grow on me the more I heard it. Good job!
guitmartiman 2 years ago
again.. keep the passion alive..
teymusic 2 years ago
very cool..like the melody, and your voice =)
5
elviradark6 2 years ago
great job man
gally042 2 years ago
awesummmm!!
gersing 2 years ago
well your voice is amaizng dude, just awesome
and so is your playing :)
Joe0728 2 years ago
Awesome...Thanks for share!
groberson2007 2 years ago
pretty cool
celi88 2 years ago
you get more powerful as it goes along.
awesome lyrics too man
really diggin it
burntissueslikewoah 2 years ago
Wow you have got a talent for singing and writing lyrics. Oh and playing the guitar! :) squince
squincegoddess 2 years ago
That's pretty cool J!!!
You wrote that yourself??
You Rock!!!
Keep Smiling!!!
5*
darkamythyst 2 years ago
5* Jarrod, there's a lot of good stuff going on here. Very nice song...and I like your performing it....keep in mind you start with the bare bones good song and build from there. You are very talented.
Very nice indeed!
Joyce
teacherjoyceann 2 years ago
Really well written. Great use of metaphor without being melodramatic.
If verse 2 didn't mention it, I wouldn't have thought this was a love song though, and just about life in general. I think I might like that theme a little more actually.
chucklyfun 2 years ago
i think i like that idea
i dont think it had much of a theme
but if i change 'love' to 'life' that might work it out
thanks for the input!!
arcticwolf1985 2 years ago
i think either or is applicable
burntissueslikewoah 2 years ago
i love the lyrics, they really reach u, and the guitar playing is beutiful!
AshleyTroxursox 2 years ago
I feel the music compliments the theme of the song, the ballad like lyrics create vivid imagery within my mind.
bester34 2 years ago
YES! finnaly i can listen to this song whenever!
excellent job, my absolute favourite song so far.
dean0090 2 years ago
Jarrod, my brotha! This may be your best song yet dude!! Great job! :-)
chaz23j 2 years ago
maravilloso !!! 1000*excelentge interpretacion..1000*
gracias chaz por compartir!!
kisse
LaLi1561 2 years ago
Great one mate! Peace.
Paolo250376 2 years ago
nice work jarrod
Sad song
Belyeomans 2 years ago