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  • im just gunna write a par for this i can destroy eminem and t.i. on their own shit

  • i fell asleep on the plane must crashed and died cuz now my life feels like a lie like im to high i mean all i do is smoke weed and i could rehab it but i just couldnt fatthom the fact bein with out green gotta have it just trying to be normal with out bein and addict but oh well i guess i lost the fight I sink into this bowel one more time and light all thats left to say (click) (click) Drug Life!

  • @vinceatkinson ur a wasteman

  • all y'all typing raps fuckin SUCK

  • type in mrminority613 ta peep remix

  • thats all she wrote before she left me i thnk its her not my mind that im misin i shdnt of been dissing her now im doing nothin but missin her what id give just to be able to kis her she made my life worth living now im diein in side she use to be on my side now shes gone she didnt even say goodbye cant even move on cause she took my heart wit her cant even say im done wit her i wish i could run wit her my minds gone now im ganna need a baby sitter she should of killed me thn id alwys be wit her

  • But ya better belive that im an eager beaver quick to disever but i got to much love to ever leaver

  • .

    So i'm kick'n dirt n ya face ,lost without a trace ,never retretting to another space coming out running to win the race,don't trip bitch tie your lace,don't hide ya face from the disgrace just move on to a new place,I understand u didnt know i was the best and any other continder is less cuz i be smoking the sess while your girls gettn undressed ..time to make a mess a story i must confess she said that i was her best. and ya takn shots at me but bitch i dont bleed

  • hell yeah!!! this version alot crisper. when the beat stalls. it throws me off. but i guess ill have to man the fuck up and kill it lol

  • should have known from the beginin that this was a big misstake!!

    something i wrote when i dated a engaged girl...

    Enjoy

  • into the river!//

    I can make your life pretty messed up with the things that i got on you//

    you have no idea or clue about everything i've saved for you//

    i wont sit around with my time anymore since im just wastin it//

    open up our conversation copy the text then im just pastin it//

    send it to your boyfriend to and make him pissed of you'll get off it'll be off//

    call it checkmate cant wait, ye it feels great//

    can you hear my heart rate?//

    cant wait cuz u know i cant take, can make//

  • so look i cant walk away from this its hard to understand the pain//

    tryn to explain, people say fuck broads cuz they're all the same//

    all the same? why would they be all the same? its a shame//

    but who is there to blame since i got myself in to this game//

    that you made the game and i, never lost or wait did i?//

    did i lose or did i win dont even care got to begin *naaah*//

    busybody and you'll see that i got some shit on you to deliver//

    cross that line and i drag your boyfriend with you down-

  • @straattoo my name is lane girls go insane wen they here my name drop my album the game wldnt be the same writeing rhymes in my moms basement i dont even need fame all these rappers are lame youtube is ware i came kill ur self i know ill be the one to blame them bitches diss me they all get flamd cuz lane is my name so all u bitches have a nice day what u gotta say nothing bitch dont say u all gay man thinking he can rhyme bitch dont waste our time ur raps arnt worth a quarter not even one dime

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  • all she ever wrote was a death note/telling me how she gunna slit my throat/throw me off the boat/and watch my dead body float/she told me to leave her alone/she likes fucking guys while drinking patron/the satisfaction of her hearing her moan/makes me wanna take her new mans throne/but i gotta forget about her/because she's just another regret/just reading her letter makes me upset/im disscusted that we ever met/fuck that slut/she needs to learn how to keep her legs shut

  • People always think you need to speak of hate, well guess what, what the fuck, dont give two fucks cause im livin it rough and i have no time for your shit cuz! I'm trying to get rich bruh, thats the name, that's the game, go on and continue to spray but just know there's people who do it for the fame, those are the fakes, but people trying to be saved speakin what they hate and i know i cant even begin to say with this 500 word limit today, later mangs
  • Reading the rhymes in my time and the music just vibes and im feelin fly as i type without hesitation in my mind and the thoughts of lyrical sayings just come to mind its like i talk in rhymes i do it for life to make the cash and to be the biggest badass gotta find where else to land at cause im flying like a kite feelin fuckin high without the green, no pills or even drinks, drugs just arnt for me cause im in recovery and i cant handle those things so i just sing like an addict in need, peace!

  • EVERYONE IF YOU GET A CHANCE PLEASE LOOK UP MY FREESTYLE ON MY BUDDYS PAGE CALLED ---- D Ramsey Murders Ransom And Right Above It.----

    THANKS!

  • what tha this is the second video that is not instrumental

  • this is how u do a free style bitchs this all i wrote this is a pure free style not a ipod note i float like boat sting like a wasp leaving you dazed looking lost i write so many lyrics no matter the cost you can call me cold but i prefer mr jack frost so this the top spot where i punch the line i beat it so bad i got arrested for my lyricall crime i draw 8 bars not a 9 try to diss me thats fine ima transform like optimus prime with words so heavinly devine
  • @88hardygirl Free Style come from the heart its not a skill some on can teach you

  • Somethin wrong with the way that I live It's like I had to swallow my pride, and the pressure's to give. 1000 percent to the game that I envision Cause when you're making real music it's almost like no one listens. Steady bitchin, and focus on heavy interests. Right before I even mention, detention to close the inches. Closer and closer, I'll rip the door off it's hinges. And prove the industry is nothin but some glamorized bitches. Loyalty's a lifestyle, Hustle is motivation. .............
  • Heart is dumb founded

    No more love shit on, by who?

    You can only guess no assignments to fix it with supa glue

    Feeling like a reciever benched because of the injury you gave him by that power you wrote bitch cheating is the worst thing to do.

    Okay you can call me rude but in the mood im in bitch after everything,

    won't be yours only mine and here you go again only being blinded by the fact your a hoe an fuck this bitch i hate you so go die & my life once again mine with the whole nine...

  • listen to ma shit i jus made plz nd thanxxx

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  • yo, i feel a little bit trippy, if you get the chance please dont trip me, i dont wanna eat but like M>J im about to beat it , iv takin so much i anit about to eat shit, only close to getiing lit,, and your so close to getting hit, im so close to getting written, signed offf big deal? yeah thats what you say but all i wanna do it play, forever, no never, skippy'n trippy cause they like a sick beat, i smoke bud an you smoke the leaf, you hate me cause we some how have beaf,_noah northcut

  • That’s all she wrote a broke up letter Slipped it in my coat couldnt bare at all how did I fall didnt know what I did Said goodbye now I wonder why did I ever try I knew She loved another guy I was foolin my self I hope he makes Her cry I be wishing she could die I aint trippin over you theres other hoes in the sea oops i mean fish fuckit Actually I mean bitch I didnt take you for a slut But what would I know Im jus another boy jus another toy in your game insane your fucken with my brain
  • ...download link?

  • and the meanings all gone out the window, too bad its wrong, too sad to move on, its my turn, im movin pawns, loosin feet grow wings like swans, shootin stars just upon, just a star that couldn't hack it, I attack it, no need for practice when your the leader of the pack its a joke to hear you crack it, this flow I toke and gift wrap it, blowin smoke but I ain't rabbit, long way from grabbin this game by the sack, just don't call it a habit

  • I stutter step this rep, white man why fret, pen in my right hand sin in my life man I dont know whats next, only hope whats best, dont hold your breath cold like death, turn it over no rest, no strife no test, burn a thousand bridges with no regret, write a verse light the curse, put me on the set with pain in ya chest, insane with this mess, and I don't get the time to complain, these lyrics fallin like rain, this fears all that im prayin, till i move on to the next phase, a new dawn, new song

  • there they go, passing by. as i sit and wonder why. why are they all walking fast. why cant one just be last. its like a race from finish to start. where every racer has a cart. but this race is backwards. theyve got it wrong. races are start to finish. thats how they belong. thats why im here. im here to stop it. pull the pin and jus watch it. stand so still that no one sees you. now im throwing grenades just to please you.
  • @thePUBERTYtrain i dont get it?

  • ive been dunking ppl like tim dunkin, they think they worth sumthin till they get hurt runnin. That line was wack, i admit it, so im gunna say that a black guy did it. im not a racist,thats a negative image,envision for a minute me tryin to finish a guiness, reachin my limit then throwin up spinach,i guess i jus crossed a scrimmage, im more pissed than a foster kid is.My name is erik, im hysteric all my fights give my fists meritThis is tim and i pinned him, he raps like a kid with down syndrome

  • @TBRacing603 Im a legit spitta, all this rhymin has made my lips thicka, i attack and i hit kissas. Im dirty as barry bonds, i got hairy palms from jackin off to pics of ur married mom. With my songs written in the office, splitten ur noggins, im so deadly im livin in coffins, if he wants to battle, i'll lift em and drop em, i got the key and with it i'll lock the, back entrance to repentance, can u see me through ur fancy lenses, more expensive than ur benz is? lol..im 15 and white,RATE one luv

  • cant even try to remix this eminem killed it way too fuckin bad

  • 1 person doesnt know what she wrote

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  • @88hardygirl write one than so i can hate on it :). only fat kids with no life hate on people who like to write rymes to instrumentals. we do it because were bored fag, you think your the best rapper were you live, but you get on an see peoples music is better .. an that makes you mad :) HATTTTEEEERRRRR!!!

  • @bbClean1234 tell me.how the fuck do u WRITE a FREESTYLE

  • @88hardygirl easy , you write first thing that comes to your head. and you dont revise or tweak it you just finish and hit accept

  • @88hardygirl You raise an interesting point - you can't - a freestyle is supposed to be 'off the top of the head'. anyone that rights lyrics (and i'll admit, i've done it in the past) its basically showcasing your lyrical talent in writing lyrics, not necessary proving who's the better rap artist. if you want to show how good you are at writing raps - record them, make a video and put it on youtube for everyone to see....

    afterall - its the people that make and break an artist!

  • @88hardygirl tell me WHERE the fuck did he say its freestyles, its our decision to write on the comments, and its yours to hate us for it, were both still gonna go through wit our decisions the only difference is we win because we wont stop

  • @88hardygirl Freestyle is a compound word. Free= No rules. Style= Pick your own.

    That's all it means.

  • @88hardygirl it takes alot of skill and only thedopest freestylers can actually write there freestyle

  • @88hardygirl My life specifically, I wouldn't have it differently,

    treasure to success lost the key I need a different key

    I'm gone wigga and I know my homies they be missing me,

    hatas get the hell out cause there's no chance you’ll be dissin me,

    find a way out, so I can figure s**t out

    Martin King flow so we scream and we shout, freedom,

    Needa free them from the beating, let them breathe a free breathing

    bad weather conditions heating leave em leaving from the earth this evening, thats how

  • @88hardygirl you cant innit . :) the fact it's written kills the fact of it being freestyle... too many stupid ppl dont know whats what. ; ez

  • @88hardygirl a FREESTYLE... (done it)

  • @88hardygirl u dnt write it on youtube comment page

  • @bbClean1234 /but bro he means its not a freestyle if its wrote and thats true. and whats also true is we do do this for the fun of it dont we you dont see us getting famous for having fun SUCKAH Emcees

  • @ItzThewizeone Only people who actually write music know that its completely possible to write a freestyle, i believe you can see drake Lookin on his blackberry while he FREESTYLES. thinking of something off the top of your head is a freestyle. so how come thinking off the top of your head than writing it down right away cant be a freestyle? Kids dont know the real meaning of freestyle and thats what makes the 38 people who liked his comment stupid.

  • @bbClean1234 amen homie, as long as you think it and spit it from the top, it doesn't matter weather you write it down or not. if these haters would rather go ask any rapper out there, they'd be told exactly what you just said and be like "OH SHIT I'M DUMB AS FUCK I'MA PRETEND IT'S NOT TRUE ON YOUTUBE CAUSE I'M A HATER."

  • @statureee Hell ya, only people who really write music know whats up man. Haters will hate, Talent is hard to find especially in rapping, kids see a freestyle that's better than something they have wrote, an they right away start dissin it an get mad. that's the way it will always be.

  • @bbClean1234

    The original defintion for FREESTYLE, was preparing a WRITTEN verse on ANYGIVEN topic. believe it or not peeps, but yes rap used to have topics and concepts for each song.

    the term FREEstyle, referred to being able to rap about any topic FREELY, it had nothing to do with wether you wrote it down or not.

    props to you homie for knowing your shit lol.

  • @PleXx3E Exactly, that's how you tell the difference between serious rappers, and wanna be party rappers. Thank you for the support on the topic bro, shut em down haha

  • @PleXx3E thats what big daddy kane said

  • Dude stop rapping on youtube fags

  • Because of this sickness that makes me spit venom YOUTUBE Fake Rappers, I just send em Back to the internet lookin up words that they never even heard The shit that I'm sayin is absolutly absurd I'm Tim Duncan on ya'll right now, ya'll spured Na, I'm the Irish, White Kid, from boston, LARRY BIRD YEAHH.... I'm reppin the eastcoast, and yes i'm a beast Youtube fakers, it's a feast To say the least I just shit on all of you, Lebron James, I bring the HEAT. WHITE KID JUST WORKED YA"LL
  • I know I'm terrible I be spittin like a kid downs Battle me, I'm Mike Tyson, I go for rounds Until I bite off one of ya body parts Grab ya heart Snap it apart Leave ya ass layin in the dark I be spittin that fire, ya'll can't even get a spark I be spittin that Magic, Earl Clark SO.. When it comes to line, I reign king metaphorically Historically I know ya want to but ya just can't be ignorin me To sick I need to be put in Quarentine CONTINUED CONTINUED
  • I rap like I'm chocolate colored haha i nestquick it But No I don't ball, no I dont rap But even when I do it feels like a shark attack I'm the Kraken, ya'll are Captain Jack Only thing different is once I kill ya, you dont come back YEAH..... Well, as i said I can't rhyme But when I do, so much intricate wordplay, ya'll can't fathom with your mind Alien on the beat, I know I show some signs White kid does it big, leavin all ya'll behind CONTINUED
  • WHITE KID DISSING ALL THE YOUTUBE RAPPERS HAHAHAHA Ok... I just felt like spittin Lyrical Magician Yes, I am somethin that you don't wanna be missin But listen I have a Godly flow like I was just Christened I'll make ya insides turn like ya shittin Na I'm just kiddin Everyone on hear thinks there good, YOUR NOT CRITICS Like I said I am a magician I'm very quick with it So quick that ya'll can't stick with it I rap like I'm chocolate colored haha i nestquick it CONTINUED
  • iCame

  • i did a lil rap 2 dis beat

  • 4:55 - 5:18 is so amazing!

    hope to hear more of it in the whole song..

  • GREAATTTTT SONGGG!!!

  • Download link?

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  • @DKSkid142 waaaack

  • its like a Mirror She Two Faced And Cant Admit it

    Instead Of Livin For The Truth They Lies And She Runs Wit It

    She Couldnt Tell Me There Was Another Man She Just Hid It

    Actin Like She Didnt Get It and Denyin She Never Did It

    Call Me Rude, Let It Out, It Aint My Fault I Aint Wanna Fix It

    If It Was Meant To Be Then Our Feelins Wouldnt Feel So Distant

    Would It Only Thinkin For Yourself But For Our Love You Couldnt

    I Had A Feelin This Would Happen But Kept Thinkin That It Wouldnt

  • @thewholeclip12345 you rymed 4 bars all using it man .. work on it

  • were tryin to get our shit together/ but lately cant even sit together/ eyes start to wonder joints end up lit together/ in the moonlight i can see the moonshine as we see every bit it gets better, as we look up at it together. pour another drink, emotions ina blender soon might remember/ why we stick together, good or bad just together let the wind carry us, like a feather i dunn care let who ever gets furious, were just young n curious n whos better for each other, other than surely us..
  • im immensly imersed in murderin this music/

    mastered my style subsequentially im searchin for students/

    claim champion if you challenge ill leave you chained/

    bloody boulders barrage bustin and bashin brains/

    half have but half heartedly hold the whole in/

    dreamin desperatly drowned in drank and gold rims/

    i know that i know nothin/

    thats why im down to learn/

    but who's there left to teach me/

    i guess its best i wait my turn/

  • my life glimmerin in the side of the knife as a i look back screamin in the night wat the fuck where did it go wasted away jus tryin to get to the show big dreams trying to rip instrumentals apart at the seams to get that doe rollin like cloud nine cuz all these hoes i ride wit are mine tryin to get to the the stars so i can shine spittin fire never gonna retire this empire that iv built

  • yo i aint like em u can call me bro, jus dont call my hoe, turn into my foe would b quite loco id suggest u pull a no go, get back to the flow tho, back to my life now, same shit every nite how, come home slang till no1 in sight wow, just never live in fright, trust in this master plan, for now it puts cash in hand, we all need to get by i said exactly man, so i extract this strand , genetically engineered mastamind with a knack for creatin somethin grand, fuck obama but yes we can

  • Shady's staring into a barrel hate, switch the plate,

    now its my turn to do the rap and make a bit of a state, on this fucking track yeah you know who's gonna stay,

    therefore iv got unlimited ammo to push you all outta they way!

    nights over goodbye crowd, why you shouting so loud, don't you wanna see me take this verse right into the ground?

    without making a sound, haha oh no you don't,

    its like im making up an excuse, i cant, i shouldn't or even won't!

    now c'mon that's all she wrote...

  • This shit crazy, bitch you just lazy, all you wanna, is get paid by having babies. Said im the father, nah fuck you, I wish I never did, now I got issues, throwing rocks at my car, you silly ass braud grow the fuck up, you could never be my star, all you wanna do is stay in the crib, sleep on the floor right next to the kids. Get the fuck up then you might get something, bitch get a job, stop car jumping. Stop all that fucking before you catch something. Thats all she wrote and its fo nothing.

  • Yo wanna record we can do some shit toghetherr

  • fucking gay.

  • /watch?v=3uqkRUCWJww

  • a bra u can send me a download link 4 dis

  • a bra u mind sending me a download link 4 dis

  • u can sleep in peace cuz i love u to much to say goodbye wen were away for minutes it seems like hrs o how time flys wen your spending time wit the 1 u love, the passion never dies, instead the flame ignites and flickers through the nite, no wind will blow it out even if it screams and shouts, ill still be there to comfort u and b your shoulder to cry on, wen i look u in the eyeball ill swallow my pride n tell u this was my fault

  • I hope bitch you don't think this is going far, cause in about 5 minutes im bout to leave you at the back of the bar, like I give a fuck if your mad you had to know this wasn't going far, and the hint I gave where the key was in the exnision burning gas in my car. See whore you don't understand, you ain't getting money out of my hand, get the fuck off my sheets you filthy little tramp, after we done with this you need a stamp, to remind myself I already had you I need another ass.

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  • @TheMcRaeBrothers im down, i've been writing some stuff to this beat. hit me back up if the offers still there

  • @TheMcRaeBrothers accept my friend request.

    i have a feeling you will like my lyrics better than all this other stuff..

    ill send you it when you accept.

  • @TheMcRaeBrothers What if u have 2 versus, your own chorus, and are gonna record the song?

  • @Insanesoccerkid well i already have my own version up, but will gladly work around that, just hit me up

  • @TheMcRaeBrothers yo if you want to, you can lay a verse on one of my beats.

  • @TheMcRaeBrothers Nighga i was straight she was a fake

    A hoee coming to me for my money

    woah

    Shit I was used

    She broke my heart

    The next day she saw it on the news

  • @TheMcRaeBrothers

    hey man i like te cover you did on this and id be down i already have a verse for it if your down ill show you mine ill send it to ya and let you decide

  • @TheMcRaeBrothers yesss sir i got my verse dude hit me up

  • @DoctorLyrical lets go are those ur lyrics?

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  • @TMakk44 ya send me your lyrics

  • @chridcrimekcmo lets get it

  • best one yet

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  • who wants to collab i gotta verse for eminems part and its tight in my opinion. dont pay attention to that song on my page that was a long time ago

  • @chridcrimekcmo ayo bro lets go im writing to it now

  • @YoungFlash777 send me your lyrics.

  • @chridcrimekcmo I will with both of you guys if you need hit me up and let me know cause i have a pretty tight verse to this

  • @chridcrimekcmo who wants to collab, this youngin said he got a verse/ but lyrically I got the earth, net worth, get hurt, kick dirt/ on amateurs, if we collabin spit a flow, fuck the hoes, paper is the only bitch I fuck these days/ loose leaf throwin money to a hoe dont help you anyways/ Im movin to the better days, trying to find my better ways/ I gave a chick my dingaling and now she wants a weddin ring/fuck that I know better man/Im living for myself before I care for someone else.

  • bout to lay my own words to this, thanks bruh

  • nice one

  • hey man where can i download an mp3 version of this that sounds better..?

  • ONE WHERE THE LOOP ISNT BAD THANK YOUU

  • @youngtriggzbaby thats part of the song retard

  • @DjVernack U FUCKEN DUMBASS I FUCK COMPLIMENTED THE DUDE U IDIOT jeez... get ur english straight

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