the music is stunning...... but you REALLY need to work on your vocals, dude! get some voice training, maybe? this could be great song if the vocals improved. :)
This is real good, your American English is good; better than what I can do especially with a soft rock music. You have good potential, not judging too hard=) The only thing I hear is in some parts your breathing spots need to improve a bit. I look forward to hearing more... good job, keep rocking!
@mousagenrepromotions Thnx...! I'll be working on my breathing and get better(It's actually because i'm very nervous when i hit the record button...but i'll get used to it and improve my technique too...Thnx for the constructive critiscism,keep in touch,many more to come! ( :
@lostdreamer50 Ahhh! I was thinking that, because it was few spots the vocal and air was out of tune (cut short). Yes, I use to do that; hit the record button and freeze almost. You will get use to it. Are you planning to make your singing/songwriting a career?
@mousagenrepromotions no,i don't think too big,i'll just play along and express my worlds but if it happens(in my country is very unlikely)maybe then i'll take the chance...we'll see.
@lostdreamer50 I just read fully your profile; you from Greece; Greece is so beautiful I love the nightlife.I like music of Greece. True, if it happens...then...
Actually,we've got some nice music,but most of it is in the underground scene...Most mainstream songs are a silly and repetitive form of pop/folk or boring hip hop with bad lyrics...But the underground scene blooms even if 85% of the general population has no clue they exist...
And almost noone in mainstream sings in english because most people don't really understand the language...LOL don't get me started on my country,i'll never stop...!
@lostdreamer50 HAHA! Same with me, don't get me started on America and it's music scene. That is top reason why most countries don't like to distribute in other countries ASAP; America can not understand the language and simply don't want to or know how to understand it.
I am trying to study the Greek language, I am only very semi fluent now but want to learn more.
I really go for underground, or unknown/lesser known music. Among some of good artists in Greece I like C Real.
@mousagenrepromotions yeah lol i know how things are in america...justin bieber,!but at least u have a nice rock mainstream scene...c-real is a nice band i used to listen t them too when i was younger but nowadays i rarely listen to greek songs...and i stopped writing songs in greek too,as i found out that i express lyrics better in english,i actually wanted t be an english teacher,but got into history university instead,lol.
@lostdreamer50 Never listened to Justin Bieber, I used to listen to Bon Jovi, Goo Goo Dolls a while back in younger days. Now I listen to imports of America; Russell Stafford (from Australia - now lives in Oregon) The Birthday Massacre they're from Canada. Not much America music I listen to. I write/sing in English and Lakota; sometimes in Japanese. I wanted to be a musician or Fashion designer; that's what I do now, best of two worlds --V;)
@mousagenrepromotions yeah, i was joking about bieber lol,i listened to those two bands as well,bon jovi and goo goo dolls.But now i'm more into j-rock(without forgetting my roots),but i'm always open to listen to other countries' musicians as well.germany and finland have a preety nice music scene.i can speak a bit of french but not enough at all to write lyrics,lol. Btw,have u noticed too?the song's views have been stuck at 309 for hours...why is that now...?sorry i changed subject...) :
@lostdreamer50 Okay, didn't know; many Americans are into Justin not sure why, he's not bad but... I like more odd taste can't explain. I always been in J-Rock; I'm Native Indian(American) and Japanese I try to put that into my music. I'm open to other countries (sending you a list in your inbox). I noticed that earlier then it slipped my mind but yes it is still at 309 and I've listened to it 7 times today. 309+7=316 no need for apologies; it's odd very.
@mousagenrepromotions yeah,that's very strange...I have heard before that sometimes youtube videos get stuck at around 300 but that never happened to me....
Hmm...I guess i'll have to wait and see and try to advertise a bit...And thanks for wathcing that many times!!
Great lyrics...
lovewinseverytime7 6 months ago
Yeahh yeahhh music everywhere!!<3 Good job man i'm with you;D
Keep it up!!
Toutounela94 6 months ago
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Toutounela94 6 months ago
the music is stunning...... but you REALLY need to work on your vocals, dude! get some voice training, maybe? this could be great song if the vocals improved. :)
good luck with everything!
junkijunkie 1 year ago
@junkijunkie Thnx!!!
Yeah,i know my vocals sound a bit off but i was preety nervous when i recorded it.You know 1st song and everything ( :
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
This is real good, your American English is good; better than what I can do especially with a soft rock music. You have good potential, not judging too hard=) The only thing I hear is in some parts your breathing spots need to improve a bit. I look forward to hearing more... good job, keep rocking!
-Hawk
mousagenrepromotions 1 year ago
@mousagenrepromotions Thnx...! I'll be working on my breathing and get better(It's actually because i'm very nervous when i hit the record button...but i'll get used to it and improve my technique too...Thnx for the constructive critiscism,keep in touch,many more to come! ( :
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
@lostdreamer50 Ahhh! I was thinking that, because it was few spots the vocal and air was out of tune (cut short). Yes, I use to do that; hit the record button and freeze almost. You will get use to it. Are you planning to make your singing/songwriting a career?
mousagenrepromotions 1 year ago
@mousagenrepromotions no,i don't think too big,i'll just play along and express my worlds but if it happens(in my country is very unlikely)maybe then i'll take the chance...we'll see.
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
@lostdreamer50 I just read fully your profile; you from Greece; Greece is so beautiful I love the nightlife.I like music of Greece. True, if it happens...then...
mousagenrepromotions 1 year ago
@mousagenrepromotions
Actually,we've got some nice music,but most of it is in the underground scene...Most mainstream songs are a silly and repetitive form of pop/folk or boring hip hop with bad lyrics...But the underground scene blooms even if 85% of the general population has no clue they exist...
And almost noone in mainstream sings in english because most people don't really understand the language...LOL don't get me started on my country,i'll never stop...!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
@lostdreamer50 HAHA! Same with me, don't get me started on America and it's music scene. That is top reason why most countries don't like to distribute in other countries ASAP; America can not understand the language and simply don't want to or know how to understand it.
I am trying to study the Greek language, I am only very semi fluent now but want to learn more.
I really go for underground, or unknown/lesser known music. Among some of good artists in Greece I like C Real.
mousagenrepromotions 1 year ago
@mousagenrepromotions yeah lol i know how things are in america...justin bieber,!but at least u have a nice rock mainstream scene...c-real is a nice band i used to listen t them too when i was younger but nowadays i rarely listen to greek songs...and i stopped writing songs in greek too,as i found out that i express lyrics better in english,i actually wanted t be an english teacher,but got into history university instead,lol.
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
@lostdreamer50 Never listened to Justin Bieber, I used to listen to Bon Jovi, Goo Goo Dolls a while back in younger days. Now I listen to imports of America; Russell Stafford (from Australia - now lives in Oregon) The Birthday Massacre they're from Canada. Not much America music I listen to. I write/sing in English and Lakota; sometimes in Japanese. I wanted to be a musician or Fashion designer; that's what I do now, best of two worlds --V;)
mousagenrepromotions 1 year ago
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@mousagenrepromotions yeah, i was joking about bieber lol,i listened to those two bands as well,bon jovi and goo goo dolls.But now i'm more into j-rock(without forgetting my roots),but i'm always open to listen to other countries' musicians as well.germany and finland have a preety nice music scene.i can speak a bit of french but not enough at all to write lyrics,lol. Btw,have u noticed too?the song's views have been stuck at 309 for hours...why is that now...?sorry i changed subject...) :
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
@lostdreamer50 Okay, didn't know; many Americans are into Justin not sure why, he's not bad but... I like more odd taste can't explain. I always been in J-Rock; I'm Native Indian(American) and Japanese I try to put that into my music. I'm open to other countries (sending you a list in your inbox). I noticed that earlier then it slipped my mind but yes it is still at 309 and I've listened to it 7 times today. 309+7=316 no need for apologies; it's odd very.
mousagenrepromotions 1 year ago
@mousagenrepromotions yeah,that's very strange...I have heard before that sometimes youtube videos get stuck at around 300 but that never happened to me....
Hmm...I guess i'll have to wait and see and try to advertise a bit...And thanks for wathcing that many times!!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
It's really good....I liked it a lot! Keep working hard! ^__^
shinkumi18 1 year ago
@shinkumi18 Thnx!!I'll keep working and get better!!Many more songs to come...keep in touch! ( :
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
nice work
KavkiMono 1 year ago
@KavkiMono Thnx!!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
so cool... :)
Allesya05 1 year ago
@Allesya05 thnx a lot...!!!! ( :
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
go on
hynee2000 1 year ago
@hynee2000 Thnx!!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
It's really nice,I love it!
luveprincesora 1 year ago
@luveprincesora
Thnx!!!
I'll do the best i can...!
Many more to come,hopefully!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
@lostdreamer50 You're welcome.
luveprincesora 1 year ago
woooooow!!!amazing!!
TerraAquaLove 1 year ago
@TerraAquaLove Oh,thank you so much...!!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
You did a nice job !! Lostdreamer50^_^. Keep up the good work , Cheer !!
Ivyissy 1 year ago
@Ivyissy thnx...!I'll do the best I can!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
i like it its good keep it up
darkwitch218 1 year ago
@darkwitch218 thnx!!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago
@lostdreamer50 your welcome
darkwitch218 1 year ago
awesome song:)!
greenday3840 1 year ago
@greenday3840 wow,thnx a lot...That means so much coming from you man...!!
lostdreamer50 1 year ago