people make words of poem on streets with their bodies

[dagie100]

very beautiful! Especially the fire brigade guys!

[Kupotek]

That's pretty cool. Good poem too.

[mabjan]

Hello Captain!

Give me a ring. Haven't got your number.

Dave C (Hartlepool) (Wiltshire)

[AmourChante]

I really enjoyed this.

Was it for a Library?

[khayav]

Very nice.

[johnswburg]

cool idea but it went too fast for me to read

[treehamallama]

wow, thats cool

[monkeymatt100]

Times essentiality in the production of such brilliance has been proven.

[Cherrycherrypie]

Hahahaha didn't think this would be put for the world to see! This is one of the daftest things i ever took part in - i well don't look like the letters i'm supposed to!!!

[lozkillerpenguin]

Good,

but you should outline the letters or something.

Hard to read unless you pause.

[LiamFly]

LOL

[antnhec]

you do have to watch this full screen, unless you have very good eyes..

[AnamaLe]

You should have some professional dancers dance out each word in a flow, that could be very creative, I'm a dancer and we do stuff like that.

[antnhec]

I did consider this, and all in one long pan shot, but for this film it's all about the community getting involved, if you get a chance check out blinking ballet, I might mail it to ya anyhows..

[gilliannicol]

if you loose the beat it can be hard, I watched it a couple of times, and it's a suprise as you see them..the first few I saw are ghost at the foundary saxon estate at foxs cafe memories..you're on your own after that..

[amerrickan]

Thank you, that is a great video.

[zonalcarlo]

very poetic... and impresive all that people... you know them?... thanx for tha coment

[BergVisionStudios]

The VO could be much better. The editing was a little too fast on some cuts. Work on cleaning up the editing making it tighter and flow. There were some really nicely composed shots. And some of the FX were good.

Keep it up!

[AsertyDances]

I like that you have done what you have done, but one suggestion, get rid of the vioce. It really distroys the beauty of the piece.

[gilliannicol]

I'm not sure about the voice over, it's not great, but there is more of the poem than we see, and I also feel it helps to make sense of the word that the posing people are making, wihtout it, I think it would be hard to define what the word is..I like it allot though.

[AsertyDances]

But... do we need to know what the word is?  I think seeing all the people making shapes is really neat within itself. Or, if you keep going with the poem, perhaps not sooo dramatic.

[gilliannicol]

I just want to also say, you have to watch this full screen, small it is hard to make out, but full it's much better, and watch it twice..I got them all then.

[DrDanknugz]

Creative!

[psychoworm86]

Very well, now thats quite artistic! I like your video, it`s really impressive... Keep it up! =^_^=

[Tbaconx]

very intersting welcome to sILENT rESONANCE - you tube group.

[down2infinity]

wow, thats awesome