Jemi & Nelena Love Story * Season 1* [ Episode 1 - Start of School ]

[MandyLynn101]

Where does Aly fit into this. Does she date Kevin or sometin

[ezrasmooth13]

why do you have mix miley hate it

[MissPerfectEsp]

Hey I have a esp coming out called: Miss Perfect

It has Selena, Justin, Joe, Demi, Kevin, Nick, Miley,, Hillary and Taylor....!

It is coming out tommorow watch the tralier now!!!

[breluvsnickjonas10]

DIDNT MEAN 2 PUT THA 1 THERE SORRY !!!!

[breluvsnickjonas10]

its kinda boring sorry , dont kill me1 :)

[MissCoralBabes]

this is reALLY RUBBISH

[AllyCosain]

please make the font white! or black! its so hard to read!

[SuzieAngel97]

Its so hard to read with the weird font and all.... but its nice.... :))

[jeffhardyzgirl009]

can u plz make the font a little darker.?

[guzel9]

can u write in it in the description bx

[Jobros449]

I was just reading this to get some ideas for my story.I have NO good ideas!!! LOL.

[aquajonas1915]

stupid aj shes gonna ruin everything and btw i can't understand a thing so plz make it darker

[joejonasluverM17]

Joe makes my heart melt.....

[Jonasfan4eva1]

can u plz make the font brighter plz other than that love it

[HJTL101]

i meant the text is a bit dim, srry

[HJTL101]

dont youthink the text is a little bit too small?

[ashleelovesjobros]

cool but kinda hard to read.

[tomasjammie82]

my gosh joe is dam cute!

[iLoVeJoSePjOnAs3866]

hey idk why theese people are complaining i culd read it fine so dont worry

[iLoVeJoSePjOnAs3866]

nice

[jonaslvr11]

heyy umm i think you should put thwe story in the description box. Pleas make jemi kiss. and then also nelena!!!

[nickandselenalovers]

I HATE MILEY

[BigJonasFan52]

awesome job!!! i dont really like your style of writing im not saying its bad but im into more detailed writing but i love it though!!!xD i am a writer myself maybe we can compair notes

[laurenwebb16]

Wow that is great! but can yo please make the writing/words a darker colour so i can see it please cos it is like white, no affence.

[lekeli2]

I AGREE..oops..sorry i accidentally press caps lock.

[annaabesa]

nice one...

[palasingsingan]

can't read it. got to pause every now and then to be able to. you can use another font and probably typewriter style? i'm demanding, am i?

[MissMills007]

i couldnt even read it, but from what i saw...

joe and demi were flirting like crazy!!!

nick was trying to tell selena that he was into her, and then, surprise, surprise! miley got in the way! tell me if im wrong.

But, I loved your story!

[RileyKatlem]

Hi erika,nice job,btw u probably noe who i am,if u dun nvm.Continue postin!

[realworld67]

i love it and thank god u mADE miley mean way 2 go

[realworld67]

yay mileys mean thanx cuz i hate her

[gurlhuluvzjb]

wooow gr8 jobb !!! awesome ! JB SEL DEMZ 4 EVAAAAAAA

[iluvjonasbros9]

nice one!! i have seen many of these but i still love it!!

[poweradefan6]

AWESOME

[piratecutie23]

MILEY.

i knew she would get in the way!

ok, i love these stories, but i think its too much of a coincidence that ALL the celebrities go to this school.

[EmmaGilbert1]

i cant really see it!

[livzrox89]

yea it is hard read isnt it but stil loved it :)

xxx

[xoCookieDoughxo]

Love it! It's great! :)