@bluntside420 I quite like it stripped of the volume and tone changes into its rawest form. You can really connect with the words this way. He writes in a way such that the intent is still intense in the absense of frills.
this has been my favorite poem for years, you can tell it comes from a different place than most of this other stuff, there are less complex metaphors and references. perhaps he loved someone that was a victim of incest?- he puts everything so perfectly, its just so startlingly dead on and heartfelt
this has been my favorite poem for years, you can tell it comes from a different place than most of this other stuff, there are less complex metaphors and references. perhaps he loved someone that was a victim of incest?- he puts everything so perfectly, its just so startlingly dead on and heartfelt
about how a lot of women's movement into sexual awareness is not of the moment of their dreams....but more so a random moment in the night at the hands of a trusted person. Often coupled with the blame game towards the female by family members as well as inability of the mother to fathom that such an incident could occur. Familial rape....incest.
he halfassed this poem, i have heard it several times, this is not the best version of it
bluntside420 4 months ago
@bluntside420 I quite like it stripped of the volume and tone changes into its rawest form. You can really connect with the words this way. He writes in a way such that the intent is still intense in the absense of frills.
Famalamadan 2 weeks ago
The poetry community is blessed..
RendezvouDoo 1 year ago
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this has been my favorite poem for years, you can tell it comes from a different place than most of this other stuff, there are less complex metaphors and references. perhaps he loved someone that was a victim of incest?- he puts everything so perfectly, its just so startlingly dead on and heartfelt
normaj62 1 year ago
this has been my favorite poem for years, you can tell it comes from a different place than most of this other stuff, there are less complex metaphors and references. perhaps he loved someone that was a victim of incest?- he puts everything so perfectly, its just so startlingly dead on and heartfelt
normaj62 1 year ago
lucky kids!!! come to morocco!!!
sulmagnificent 1 year ago
how come no one rates? 5\5
ajaf2005 3 years ago 3
rape? wat is this poem about
kingmomo010 3 years ago
about how a lot of women's movement into sexual awareness is not of the moment of their dreams....but more so a random moment in the night at the hands of a trusted person. Often coupled with the blame game towards the female by family members as well as inability of the mother to fathom that such an incident could occur. Familial rape....incest.
MysticMoonGoddess67 2 years ago
GENIUS
kingmomo010 2 years ago 3
mind-gasm.
<3
hottbloodead 3 years ago 7
ill.
trirachel86 3 years ago 5
Saul is amazing !
ALEXXX518 3 years ago 5
this is sad :/
bluntzr4kids 3 years ago 3
Hey Saul,
Its me The Rromani Woman you met in Seattle Washington, Piece introduced us. Sending you love
Sumakuni 4 years ago 3
amazing.
tokenblackguy3032 4 years ago 4
Amazing guy.
RenegadeHelix 4 years ago 8
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goofyvsregular 4 years ago