Untitled Longing... Chapter 199

[MsDramaQueen913]

tears all over the place :'( amazing... the brother bond that you show in this is really effective

[xoxogg77]

that scared the crap outa me. i thought nick was gonna die! geeez dont do that to me...jk. lol.

[Ron3Hermione]

aww kevin so caring he rather have the pain in him then his bros he sooo sweet see nick pain hurts me so much more

[sarahsmoothie123]

s ogood!!

[sophiebracht]

i loved this chapterrr,please post soon!

[xxDasweetiexx]

Aw! Kevin's so sweet!

Loved it!

[luckiducki321]

ahhhh this is so insanley intense and sad bt still good bt OMGGGGG!!!

[coeyjbfan93]

i definetly wouldn't mind sharing a bed with him!! tehe!

please post more!!!!

[basketballsuperstar6]

awe too cute, Kev's an awesome guy :D he's so carring, I'd love to have a big brother like that, and poor Nick, it must be so hard for him :'( I hope they find Summer soon and if they do anything to Joy I'll be royally pissed!!!

[lydiaxo33]

it soooo goood love it soooooo much

[123quatro5seis]

oh god so good

[poly820]

omg

this is so sad

i want them in love

lol

[madison50364]

This is so sad and so insanely good. I feel so bad for Nick. He's breaking apart without Summer and it's just horrible. I just hope he finds her soon.

And Kevin is such a sweet brother. He offers to take the pain in Joe's place. What a sweetheart. And when he was talking to Molly... so sweet.

I hope nothing horrible happens to the two other girls. That would just be horrifying.

Can't wait for more! So excited!

[SpaceGirl929]

gosh! this is tourture. POST MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

[ngynjonaslover]

oh my god!!! please post more soon!!! this is too good!

[iLoveNickJonas2121]

thats a cute song whats it called?

[Shay081793]

It's at the end of the video ;)

It's called "Pretend" It's a cover, I think, but I have the Bandslam version by Scott Porter and "the glory dogs" lol

[singergirl33609]

Poor Nick. I really know how he feels...

:((( post soon!

[misslyss96]

PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! :D

[njerryjonas14]

you just made my day by posting. but i want more!! lol. i'm selfish :P

[iloveconnor14]

aww :(

i love your writing! its soo good :)

[happygirl4527]

awe how sad :(

[Live4Jesus08]

WOW! I guess it just seemed kinda short, IDK. Anyway, it was AMAZING as always.

[Live4Jesus08]

WOW! it was kinda short but it was really good. Poor Nick!

[Shay081793]

Haha, it was actually long ;) I was almost at the limit :)

[iLoveNickJonas2121]

what is the limit? i need to know cuz i write a series too

[taylapearl]

Well, the waiting paid off! I loved it even more xD

[xxcaliheartsxx]

aww this is sad, next one please!!

[makemesmiley125]

so good. as usual. :o) moreeeee!

[bobbillybert]

MORE MORE MORE it was so intense

[Scarziii]

aww poor nick!! i want everything to be back to normal :'( awesome chapter tho x :)

[musicismylife500]

This is so sad...I cried again :'( I want Nick to feel better and I want Joe to feel better and I just want everyone to feel better! :'(

[Tambasco511]

i'm sad that i was semi rite about Nick. :(

[xXMsLittleSunshineXx]

I'll comment better later but for right now one word amazing

[lrx001]

This is soooo sad...plz post soon! i REALLY hope it gets better! =[

[ramansidhu007]

awesome chapter : D

[23jellyfingers]

wow, intense chapter. i might need a moment to recover...

i'm ok now.

Man, i'm really worried for Nick right now.

xx

PS You're a great writer!!

[charmedangel95]

Man i really hope Nick is going to be okay, i think Joe needs to start being stronger for his brother!

[luuntjuh123456789]

Aww... I love this season so much... You really make me feel the pain the characters feel, that´s how good you are.

[OMFGitscatherine13]

i LOVE this season. PLEASEEE post more soon[:

[rinthyilove]

oh-em-gee poor Nick... i feel so bad for him... great chapter :D

[sambethpilon]

awee poor guys !!! poor nick!!!!

this is off hte begessers!!

[iLynnerd16]

This is torturing me.

[LoopyNatalie]

amazin chapterrr! :)

[alohaxahola]

you sure know how to write some pretty intense chapters =)

that was amazing x

im more worried about nick atm than summer =S i hope nick will be ok =/

loved it x

[ajT15JoBros]

imagining them all like this is literally heart breaking i want to cry!

you are one amazing writer!

more please?!

[x0MrsNickJonas11010x]

ok this chap just hurts :(

i love it, but it hurts to read how much they all hurt. is it weird that out of all the chapters in this entire story, this one made me cry the hardest??

[nbvzyt]

awesome=)

loving season 2!

[xoBxJoBroLovrxo]

omg poor nick! i hope they find them soon. its killing me not knowing if theyre ok ... more soon please (:

[MakeItLovely]

awhh..

i love this season too [:

you have such amazing writing skills!!

it hurts to see nick in so much painn :[

awesomee chapter..

[kookoobb]

Woww... this is so sad. :( I really hope they find them. Ah! It's killing me not knowing!!! :) Hope you post soon. Please please do.  :)

[VictoriaMarieAllen]

I love this season.

Great chapter, you're such a talented writer

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