Spyke's Poetry Corner Part Three: The Moon

[lolitakairi]

lol I think that you should be a song writer

[GoodbyeHorsesLover]

I liked it.

And I like the way you say it.

;)

Like at the end you really got into it,

and I think started to kind of rap it?

Anyways, yeah main point is that I liked it.

[theoreo88]

cool! a bit creepy at the end only cuz u got into that mofo hahahaha good tho!

[chlofish1o]

i totally loved it! our speech/writing/styles r a bit the same 2...... it was beautiful. u r a very good poet

[justjuggalo]

thats was just plain fuckin FRESH!

[XDarkxReflectionsX]

I loved the before ending it wuz like all rythamatic coolish.Still dark and I like it ^_^.

Keep making poetry and posting it on youtube you rock!

[Awesomeosaurus91]

I liked it :)

you spoke a little fast though so I didnt get the last part but apart from that it sounded pretty awesome :D

[Spykopathic]

sorry about that

i was getting really into it.

im glad you liked it

[AbSoluTc]

Would make a great movie.  Dark, disturbing.. very cool.

[Spykopathic]

most of m stuff is a bit dark

[budbudbud91]

bit dark ini