Laid Back Hip Hop Beat

[LOV32W4TCH]

Sorry dawg, you had a simple but easy listening baseline and you jacked it up. sounds like you just started throwin stuff in there. That's cool though because that's what I do as a beat maker. However, you have to refine it and put stuff where they belong properly and take out the dumb shit that dont belong. This has the potential to be a tight beat if you feel me. When i start off with a beat,

[psycho841000]

hey.what tah fuck is this????

[amyz360z]

Sorry, but this is bad. =/

[superKhos]

hell na dat hoe nice ill reck dat shit

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[CJL21497]

did u use fl studio

[mmarousek1]

this is pretty shitty..... make it faster and with more melody. and no guns.. its kinda dumb

[cheekkzzz]

damn, this is terrible

[MrTwosharks2206]

this is a piece of crap ^^

[neosouljazz]

wtf its not laid

[SJayMusic]

@neosouljazz

this is my new channel...check my shit out here

[tenseman08]

just listen to J Dilla

[MMuunncchhiieess]

dude you need more structure to your beats if you get what I mean, this is all over the place. I mean it's interesting but you probably could have used less than half the sounds and made a much better track if you had just thought it through. Listen to real hip hop tracks and you'll see what I mean by structure...

[SJayMusic]

@MMuunncchhiieess

Yo, this is my new channel, this beat was made awhile ago when i just started producing again....and this is channel it uploaded is like completely unactive now...

so just peep the shit on my page now :D

i think youll find i improved...

[jagg001airsoft]

the beats good as shit,you just need to lose the sound effects like the breaking glass and gunshots.the beat itself is dope.keep it up

[debobeats]

beats wack yo!

[ItsRexBoyaay]

yo this my new channel,

lol yea i know was my 3rd beat gettin back into producing,

check my new shit out though, i dunno im trying my hardest but i would't call myself good yet

peace

[100PercentGOLD]

ran out of characters. 5* for efforts.

[100PercentGOLD]

FIrst thing that comes to mind when we talk about hip hop is it's drums. You need better drums. Some better drums or better drums patterns. Either way, make sure there's at least a snare or a clap in your drum pattern. No the snare rolls don't count... I will be frank, this isn't the best beat I heard, a little lacking on the melody part, but if you make better drums it will sound 10 times better. It's a good start and you are getting there. Don't abuse guns too much. If you need more help, MSN

[myifebelike]

thanks and thank you for taking the time out to type that advice =),

i get the what you mean by the drums, btw do you know the best place i can get hard rap/hip hop drums?

[YouNeekBeatz]

@myifebelike try warbeats.com. You have to create an account but the downloads are free. I really recommend it.

[g4ngst4m4n]

@100PercentGOLD

wow you right man

i never thought of it that way but damn it sounds weird without any claps

[JupiterSoulStar]

Check my page for BEATS if ya need something to inspire you...but keep building. Peace

[HipHopBigM]

I really like the style of this man good work

[myifebelike]

Thanks =)

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