Holdin' On: A Nick Jonas Story Chapter 2

[CatherineMiaCullen]

love this story

your an amazing writer!

i know im reading it about a year too late but oh well!!! :]

[thriller13532]

????

[JoeJonaslover1123]

These are the shizz!!

[RQOCJD]

nice moves nick...LMAO hahah u n red bull..lol..i know how it feels ive seen my best frind after she has drank one..lol...but amazing :)

[JoeJonaslover1123]

hehe actually it should be " Rice moves Nick" lollzz me and my friends say that

[RQOCJD]

hahaha true true lol

[JoeJonaslover1123]

hehe, yeppers

[dallas1kid]

Nick - so smooth! :D:D

[ohmyjonas5000]

DUDE!!! HAHA! You used my comment! ILOVEIT!

Haha.

Dude. Idthink I can beat that, haha.

It's cool though, I can try again, ha.

[tam709]

ooooh me likey :D yesh yesh. I would have picked Dr. Pepper tho.. I LOVE Dr. Pepper. or maybe Vanilla Coke. Do you like Vanilla Coke? I think it's awesome haha and i love the instant crush Nick's got on Ellie haha he tries to hide it... kinda... not really... haha :D LOVE IT darlinggg!!

[LittleMizzGawjuz]

haha

oh nick, always smooth with the ladies ;]

you know.ive never tried dr. pepper.

it isnt sold alot here...

but anyway. loved the story :]

[ewizzle06]

woot woot!

[xoxoJBluverxoxox]

He's l8 4 sumting right?

haha love at 1st sight!!

[Erinnhey]

i love that its in nick's pov

[iforgotmyusernamex]

redbull is awsome..

& so is the story :D

[coeyjbfan93]

can't wait till the next chapter!!!

[musicismylife500]

OK I can just guess what's going to happen next...those guy are going to hold up the store and they are going to be stuck....:P

[sugarplum650941]

Love it

[jonesbrosrocknum1]

POST MOREE PLZZZ IT'S REALLY GOOD

[Fuzzy2230]

Lol.she reli isnt doing her job!lol...now...the real cmnt...im not lyking those guys!they btr not hurt nick!

[Fuzzy2230]

Lol.she reli isnt doing her job!lol...now...the real cmnt...im not lyking those guys!

[kookoobb]

I really like this story. Can't wait to see what happens

[iheartjonas23]

loved it!

[oneloveejbs]

i love this!!!

[kellylynn11xo]

I really like this so farrrrrrrrrrr

please post soon!

[xoDayDreamerxox3]

i am loving this story! and the 2 big guys seem creepy, id move closer to nick too. =)

And yeaaa....

So post more, PLEASE! (when you can)

[GeorgiiaMae]

Love love love the story! Post moreeee!

[JonasBroluver156]

I love the story...and Red Bull.

your friend gave you some pretty funny/awesome feedback lol!

[purplepunk92]

this is awesome still .... i know what my cousin is doig now shes like damn you ellie

:'(

[x0MrsNickJonas11010x]

ok he needs to get out of there before those two creepy guys cause trouble. which they will. crap. well, that's gonna stink for them haha cuz when they mess with nick, i kick their asses, no matter how much bigger than me they are, cuz i don't really give a shit, im just that awesome :)

[jonesbrosrocknum1]

LOL U AND ME BOTH

[JBAndTwilightLover55]

LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!

[dontmakefunofartards]

wooohooo it was great

post soon

wow creepy stalker fans always asking for autographs

i like to ramble its fun

I LOVE YOU ....B-A-R-N-E-Y

[JonasFanFic16]

.... barney?

[dontmakefunofartards]

what who doesnt love barney

besides my friend she hates purple monsters

-nay nay-

[stephanijp94]

love it! the best one yet... probably cuz it's about nick jonas;) but anyways

[bianca960903]

haha i like the chapter :D

red bull tastes pretty good but i dont like what it does to me...hahaha

[randomuser098]

:D If they only knew what was coming... *sigh* this series is just going to own. Just saying. LOVE IT.