Make Me Beautiful - "On The Lot" submission

[HopAlong23]

oh god.

[MelloxMattxForever]

Love it in a sad way...

[filmmack]

You kind of look like Katherine Isabella (look her up)

[Vfilms618]

thats really good i like it, although there's some room for improvement. the sound is what bugs me the most. but the story's great.

[Popepro]

facebook . com

Sorry.

[Popepro]

milly.

[killingyousoftly2519]

please make the character commit suicide

[Chriskare2]

I have a movie that i submitted to "On the lot" that is on here called "The mystery of the stolen horse".

[randomfrosh]

You need to work on pacing.

[quietlymocking]

Could you tell me what you mean specifically? I'd love to hear suggestions!

[krotbmx]

pretty good, acting needs work though.

[Nezie45654]

I love it! Maybe you could make a part two?

[blueberry3]

Hey, Its a really powerful film, I'm a high school filmmaker as well! Its nice to know that others share my passion

[cooperstimson]

Nicely done! Kinda understatedly tragic. I like the music you composed, it has a sort of darkly welcoming sound to it (good chord progression). :)

[quietlymocking]

I actually didn't compose the music - it came with garageband and I mixed it to be the length etc. that I wanted. I felt bad because I stated in my intro that I composed it; I actually had composed a piece and then trashed it to use this loop later.

Thanks for watching my vids!

[spruce213]

Pretty good film. I could see where it was headed if only u had more time. From an aspiring writer to an aspiring director. Good luck.

[DKaidian]

It was neat vid, but I dunno.. seems like it ends a bit abruptly. I mean, we never really find out how far she's going to go with her obession (although we can assume it's not end well.) Dunno, guess I was expecting more of a wrapup. but still, great job! :)

[LostJerich]

Nice framing, great video.

[SassyJessica]

I heard about this film from your friend Diana. I think you are very talented Amelia and you should definitely look into film school. Great Job!

[quietlymocking]

Thanks mucho! Oh, Dianna, my little walking advertisement. XD

~Amelia

[chocoberries]

i agree very good.

[keionna]

Aww very good. I loved your video. :D

[quietlymocking]

Thanks for watching!

[bamswithme]

wow, you're really good!

[quietlymocking]

Thank you!!

[virtualwenrog]

This was very well done! I hope you win! The camera shots and acting was really well done! ;)

[quietlymocking]

Thank you very much!

~Amelia

[zizipuk]

You sure can make people smile =) That "size increasing with toilet paper" reminded me of a funny situation...

[quietlymocking]

lmao, I'm just imagining.

~Amelia

[mimimarquez25171]

your very talented Amelia, good luck! :)

[quietlymocking]

Thanks very much!

~Amelia

[jyojo]

Kudos! I like the music choice... good transitions very watchable. As far as the subject matter... oh! please just be vegan, and everything else will fall in to place. Jodi

[quietlymocking]

Thanks, I had a lot of difficulty with the music, so I'm glad it turned out alright.

I could never give up orange chicken and burgers, but on the other hand I found this really great vegan split pea soup at Trader Joe's yesterday...

~Amelia

[jyojo]

Your adorable Amelia... I'm still so amazed at this internet thing, peeking into other people's worlds. Trader Joe's is cool... try to find some co-ops they are cooler.

[quietlymocking]

Thanks for watching, Dazzer! The expression on her face was meant to be ironic: she is happy because she lost weight, and she doesn't care what method she used to lose it. We, on the other hand, are flinching, because we know where this is leading. Interestingly enough, I thought the music conveyed a sense of a beginning of something terrible...to each their own, I suppose.

Thanks so much for watching!!

~Amelia

[hnnguyen]

now i actually have to watch this show to see if you win? what have you done? i'm a one show Lost man.

[quietlymocking]

I'm a Lost lady myself (could Josh Holloway BE any hotter??) Although not exactly a one-show person. I guess I'm multi-faceted. Anyway, the show starts in the Spring, but I will find out by the end of February if they want an interview. I'll be sure to keep you all posted with a video blog!

Thanks SO much for watching, Mr. Lost-Man.

~Amelia

[cherrera7]

Very nice! I wish you the best of luck with it, Amelia.

[quietlymocking]

Thank you very much!

~Amelia

[OzzyOsbourne]

Job well done

[quietlymocking]

Thanks, man. Glad you liked it.

[mike35front]

5 starts from me I think its an awsome pitch for a short

[quietlymocking]

Thanks sooo much, I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for the subscription, too! XD

~Amelia

[lunawolf7777]

oh yes quite rare...did hell freeze over? Have you noticed a crap load of the West High bathrooms DON'T have locks?

[quietlymocking]

I did a comic in Design Graphics about it.

[lunawolf7777]

coolness! I loved the intro...and that's an awfully clean west high bathroom XD!

[quietlymocking]

Yeah, quite rare, eh?

[JEFFYjackass]

cool intro :) awsome vid too bad i wasnt in the skit

:( take care A.

[quietlymocking]

heehee I'll ask next time Jeff.