A very professional approach with solid, nearly complete coverage of most major points. The newspaper device caught our attention early, and diagrams and graphs throughout helped us understand a complex situation. Clear and well-written voice-over narrative added depth. However, the alternatives needed more attention, plus thoughtful evaluation relative to the proposed decision criteria. Overall, a very good job, despite flaws noted above.
A very professional approach with solid, nearly complete coverage of most major points. The newspaper device caught our attention early, and diagrams and graphs throughout helped us understand a complex situation. Clear and well-written voice-over narrative added depth. However, the alternatives needed more attention, plus thoughtful evaluation relative to the proposed decision criteria. Overall, a very good job, despite flaws noted above.
cellprof 2 years ago
Plenty of comments for you!
i LOVE the newspapers! and the facebook disruption is definitely witty! din know you are so creative, kee ;)
i particularly like your criterion selection of a good project slide, financial analysis, and your expected results.
overall, very neat and professionally done presentaion with good ppt slides. convincing. recommendations are feasible.
stayed on the same recommendation slide for a tad too long though. and that is not implementation!
but well done!-everlyn
freakysaint 2 years ago
5:55 POP! ROFL nice one
nameweemama 2 years ago
haha What The! Facebook?!!
battledome64 2 years ago
The speech bubble conversation was very dynamic and easy to follow!
Great Job, William!
victoroyh1986 2 years ago
Hey! Thanks for the comments =)
battledome64 2 years ago
I like the newspaper style and information communicated to the audience. Ample time to get the gist of the information
haha i find the picture with voice over pretty engaging and quite entertaining.
Great Job Meng Yew!
zhuangminghui 2 years ago