Well done Rosebud. I remain on the outside looking in. Or is it inside looking out? Either way fear binds the boy I am to his illusion of control. Or is it fear of taking control of this life & destiny. I have seen the path but my will has failed me. Thank you for the taste of it.
Beautiful
I smiled
yes
sakutajuju 2 years ago
This video gave me chills, i love the way you express yourself here, well done.
furiousjade 3 years ago
Perhaps my favorite poem I've ever written or performed...
Strange now to remember first writing it. I was driving at night and the words rolled through me.
rhosebard 3 years ago
Beautiful and brilliant! Thank you!
moondogs4u 3 years ago
Always pleased to get the lovely comments for this poem.
I hope that I may be doing some more work of this sort soon.
Blessings!
rhosebard 3 years ago
what a blessed spirit you are ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Not sure I deserve it but thank-you for your lovely comment.
I enjoy your work a lot, too.
rhosebard 3 years ago
you DO deserve it! ^_^
& thank you too!
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
very well told! I enjoy your poems immesnsly. I loved the emotion and the way you told it. I find it truly inspiring.
ImbasPhoenix 3 years ago
Bright Blessings to you.
Thanks so!:)
RhoseBard
rhosebard 3 years ago
ok?
monkey72819 3 years ago
Hi, Rosebud :)
Excellent work here!
xsteveuk 3 years ago
Rosebud...Ahhhh...
Yes I am!:)
& yes - thanks so!
Blessings,
RhoseBard
rhosebard 3 years ago
BRAVO!!!
UnificationNow 4 years ago
Thank-you so.
Always so pleased when people enjoy my work!
It has always been my personal favorite work.
RhoseBard
rhosebard 4 years ago
Well conveyed - thank you :o)
reVerse2bfree 4 years ago
Many thanks for your comment.
Bright Blessings,
RhoseBard
rhosebard 4 years ago
Three words; double barreled shotgun.
Sluggo1971 4 years ago
Not sure I understand your comment...?
rhosebard 4 years ago
He's a troll who sows misery. This was a very well said poem, Rhose. Don't let haters get to you.
capnquack 3 years ago
No worries...
& thanks!
RhoseBard
rhosebard 3 years ago
Well done Rosebud. I remain on the outside looking in. Or is it inside looking out? Either way fear binds the boy I am to his illusion of control. Or is it fear of taking control of this life & destiny. I have seen the path but my will has failed me. Thank you for the taste of it.
odunlin 4 years ago 2
Yes, absolutely.
Sorry I didn't comment before.
I may have been unsure what to say.
Be mindful that your path will take you where it will.
RhoseBard
rhosebard 3 years ago
Thank-you very much.
I am truly pleased that this poem is being enjoyed as it is.
Blessings,
RhoseBard
rhosebard 4 years ago
This is a really great poem I give it a 5 out of 5 star rating!
jamesesitton2nd 4 years ago 2
Thank-you so!
Long ago - I used to recite poetry now and then at Gatherings.
& I wrote this poem many years ago...
But it has remained one of my personal favorites because it remains true for me.
Bright Blessings,
Rhosebard
rhosebard 5 years ago
So much passion put into the poem. Great job!
YoungWitch 5 years ago 2