I think your real problem is your location, if you used a room with more soft furniture and carpet, and fewer hard walls you would get better sound. You might dub it, but my own experiments with dubbing have never turned out well,,,, ever.
Bravo on being the first to complete a video in the "Free Script" experiment! I am very pleased with the work you've done with what I wrote. You did a good job of walking the line of creepy and sincere, as the characters are sincere and the premise is mostly not.
I'm helping Ian (male role in this piece) put together a film/drama workshop over the summer. If you have any scripts laying around, we'd love to be able to work with you again :)
It's great. I mean, at first I was kinda, er, but then I kept on watching and GReAT!
RunningWolfProductin 2 years ago 2
I found the script intriguing. Bravo, Ryan! And good job, actors and director. :)
qwertydeluxe 2 years ago
The guy was good but she cnt act!!
Rosemoon98 2 years ago 5
Good overall. I'd say it's a little draggy. Slightly more emotional response from the characters might have helped. Just some advice.
agwellin 2 years ago 3
It's very Ryan-y... and very good, but it's just not the same.. No offense at all.
iluvdommonaghan13 2 years ago 2
That was definitely strange (and by strange I mean kind of random, and creepy)...but good! nice job! :D
JallieNarz 2 years ago
Surprisingly my nappyness adds to the caracter.
"Antithesis".....that took a couple takes. heheh
Glad I got the opprotunity to work with you! = )
~Ian
EccentricIanigma 2 years ago 4
Great job on this.I am glad to see someone finally finished a script for us to watch
mattydog67 2 years ago 9
Haha this is awesome! The guy (Ian) was in my intermediate piano class. Good job editing the reflection out.
AlanMorningstar 2 years ago 3
Nice!
wish theaudio was a little better though
stefanmckinley 2 years ago
Thank you. I wish it was better too... darn "technical issues!"
cooperstimson 2 years ago
I think your real problem is your location, if you used a room with more soft furniture and carpet, and fewer hard walls you would get better sound. You might dub it, but my own experiments with dubbing have never turned out well,,,, ever.
stefanmckinley 2 years ago
awesome job:) nice work
OliviaGoth 2 years ago 3
Bravo on being the first to complete a video in the "Free Script" experiment! I am very pleased with the work you've done with what I wrote. You did a good job of walking the line of creepy and sincere, as the characters are sincere and the premise is mostly not.
I'd be happy to work with you again
-Ryan
Vicious516 2 years ago 22
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!
I'm helping Ian (male role in this piece) put together a film/drama workshop over the summer. If you have any scripts laying around, we'd love to be able to work with you again :)
Peace,
Cooper Stimson
cooperstimson 2 years ago
I really like the camera angle work for this, bravo
MarchHatterofWoe 2 years ago 3
Nicely done, sir.
MrPietermaritzburgh 2 years ago 2
No little sisters were harmed? But what about stuntmen!
Veelasiren 2 years ago 3
I am always harmed in the making of my films. It makes it more sincere.
cooperstimson 2 years ago
0.0 Now THAT is true dedication!
Veelasiren 2 years ago 2
Bravo Max Pacheco wannabe, bravo.
thefanglessvampire 2 years ago