Slow down man. u got some real potential. I record around my hood for all these kids that think they can rap. got my own equipment and stuff. No videos on my channel tho. Would like to see more from you.
Yea you got nice lyrics they just off beat and then this song is such a strong song lyrically it kinda throws your version off.....you a good artist though
@KonClueZhen Anyway it's like freakin 2-5am depending on where you are so it's time for some sleep, sides i got to be awake at a reasonable hour to make it for an investment of mine, which I hopes pays off.
@Eritsasaku Sorry to hear that fam. I have a sure pg87 microphone, cool edit pro, a presonus audiobox USB, and Deci mixes my stuff down using "Record"
@Eritsasaku Can't say I'm against advice. lol. I just use C.E. cuz it's quick/easy. I don't add/do anything. Just send the raw to Deci. He uses Record to make it sound pretty. lol. Who makes it/whats it about, NO idea.
@KonClueZhen alright well if you just want to fuck around and see if you like something....
I'd have to suggest reaper by cockos.
Reaper is like a 20mb or so download, real small, free updates and to Buy it is like $40-60 and it's $150 if you make more then 20k through music. (i think a month or year or perhaps overall)
you can get a 30 day free trial (which never runs out...) to evaluate it and just get the feel for it.
@KonClueZhen But anyway Reaper is a full DAW, it has a lot of hotkeys on it, everything is in one window, mixers right there for you, and if it isn't a hotkey it's a right click away.
sounds like something you might like, especially since it has the nice "30 day" free trial.
sick lyrics great job. obviously it could b perfect if you did all that work to make it like destinction said but when your doing it for fun and your own thrill its not worth it, honestly it would only b like a single quality spec better.
Sick, but i don't think that was the right song for the rap. Lupe has a very varied and elastic rap style, and his beats usually reflect that. I think it's good, just not the right beat at all.
Awesome track and all, but maybe record your voice and video together and use headphones to listen to the track, then lay your voice over the track to get a better mix and higher quality track.
@DestinctionZ People seriously need to stop telling me how/what to do. I make a clearly statement I was throwing it together, seeing if it was even worth the time of doing that.
I'm sorry if I sound like a daft brick now, but I'd rather be honest than acting like I liked it.
The lyrics were good, but it sounded to me like you started to force syllables many times. And I personally hate when rappers do that. I mean, it can be okay to do once or twice, if you turn it into a punch line. Now I don't want to lecture someone who's probably better than me, but I suggest using some more time on the syllables and practicing some more, so you'll realise something is wrong.
@ultimoshakoni Yeah, it's also just me going nuts in my room in one take. I'd actually fit it on beat if I recorded. /Shrug Thank you though. Good looks.
How did you get the instrumental with the hook??
TheCharrette 3 days ago
did ya record a version yet?!?!?! amazing song
KyKyally4life 2 weeks ago
gud lyrics but keep on beat dude.kee tryin*
esbeidyr1 2 weeks ago
Fucking gay dude.
Dantrellis 3 weeks ago
You suck
seromtheg91 3 weeks ago
Sick song u know it is ok if you take a breathe when you rapping? haha kidding keep doing what your doing
KyKyally4life 1 month ago
What was this?
Aznrykerz 1 month ago
how dare yo decimate such a good track yo fool yo name should be garbage no sense
KINGBOYA2011 1 month ago
SHITT CRAPP JUNK RUBBISH YO SHOULD SLAPP YO SELF YO BITCH ASS FOOL
KINGBOYA2011 1 month ago
DICK HAED CRAPP SHITT SLAPP YO SELF YO BITCH ASS FOOL
KINGBOYA2011 1 month ago
Sounds like Mac Lethal.
ecoSWAG1 2 months ago
Slow down man. u got some real potential. I record around my hood for all these kids that think they can rap. got my own equipment and stuff. No videos on my channel tho. Would like to see more from you.
DaGhostlyOne 2 months ago
tp fa lyfe
meethead19 2 months ago
Yea you got nice lyrics they just off beat and then this song is such a strong song lyrically it kinda throws your version off.....you a good artist though
DjPowda251 2 months ago
Ur the definition of white
DriZzdkokpssy 3 months ago
nice
Caveman2745 4 months ago
Lyrics are tight but ur off beat
MrRaydizle 4 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
The best version of this song that I found was on mp3ify.com and you can download the mp3 or import it into itunes.
MimiHare44 5 months ago
I... love... your music. Huge fan of you and Deci since I was given a link to take notice. Keep it up bro. :)
PvPDeci 6 months ago
Where can I download this
mike1234561000 6 months ago
@mike1234561000 Haven't recorded a version worth DLing yet, (in my opinion,) once I do that, I'll hook you up with a link.
KonClueZhen 6 months ago
@KonClueZhen thank you, i liked the lyrics.
mike1234561000 6 months ago
you go off beat a lot bro, you gotta watch that
bizzi2010 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen
And bookmarked.
And THIS is what i'm talking bout.
And YES we'll need a better quality version.
and for future reference do a video introduction then cut off to a finished / finalized version of the song.
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@Eritsasaku Lol, no I know. I just wanted to get a video out. Didn't feel like recording/setting my shit up. My bad crew. lol
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen is kool :P
just good that you actually got a vid out, and it didn't take long after my original comment stating you needed more vids before this one came out.
now as long as we can see more videos after this one that aren't a MONTH later >.>
I mean look at your videos and when their uploaded and scroll on down your uploads lol
3 weeks, 2 months, 3 months, 4 months, and then you got TWO videos from 5 months ago, then it goes to 10 months.
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen Anyway it's like freakin 2-5am depending on where you are so it's time for some sleep, sides i got to be awake at a reasonable hour to make it for an investment of mine, which I hopes pays off.
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@Eritsasaku Word. Wellllll alright, yeah it's 4:46. Night man. Best of luck on said endeavor.
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen thanks but said endeavor failed. Lost around $270.
but hey at least i got my microstation keyboard, and my D.A..W.
speaking of which what are you using for recording / mixing?
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@Eritsasaku Sorry to hear that fam. I have a sure pg87 microphone, cool edit pro, a presonus audiobox USB, and Deci mixes my stuff down using "Record"
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen aye did kinda suck but eh oh well. i'll find a way to turn it around.
can't find anything on that Microphone and i haven't heard of it before since i'm not an avid Googler of random microphones.
nice audiobox though, and as for "record" are you talking about the "record" from Propellerhead?
Also I might be able to point you into some new software if your interested.
it might make it easier for you to mix stuff and add effects etc quicker and easier.
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@Eritsasaku Can't say I'm against advice. lol. I just use C.E. cuz it's quick/easy. I don't add/do anything. Just send the raw to Deci. He uses Record to make it sound pretty. lol. Who makes it/whats it about, NO idea.
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen alright well if you just want to fuck around and see if you like something....
I'd have to suggest reaper by cockos.
Reaper is like a 20mb or so download, real small, free updates and to Buy it is like $40-60 and it's $150 if you make more then 20k through music. (i think a month or year or perhaps overall)
you can get a 30 day free trial (which never runs out...) to evaluate it and just get the feel for it.
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen But anyway Reaper is a full DAW, it has a lot of hotkeys on it, everything is in one window, mixers right there for you, and if it isn't a hotkey it's a right click away.
sounds like something you might like, especially since it has the nice "30 day" free trial.
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@Eritsasaku is the "30 day" in quotes cuz theres leet hacks? lol
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen "if you use it more than 30 days you are required to purchase a license You have been evaluating reaper for approximately 63 days."
*click still evaluating*
...I wouldn't call it leet hacks >.>
still if you like it give em the $40 they definitely deserve it.
but yeah you technically have an unlimited free trial lol
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen *looks at upload date*
*looks at current date*
I see this is going to involve poking you a bit...
Eritsasaku 8 months ago
Awesome Track and awesome shirt. Where'd yah get it?
Joeshmoe79 8 months ago
@Joeshmoe79 Shirts off of teefury.com But I'm sure it can be found on redbubble, or elsewhere.
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
@KonClueZhen Haha Thanks man, keep the words flowing!
Joeshmoe79 8 months ago
sick lyrics great job. obviously it could b perfect if you did all that work to make it like destinction said but when your doing it for fun and your own thrill its not worth it, honestly it would only b like a single quality spec better.
Unholyentity17 8 months ago
Better quality please.
bgatz008 8 months ago
realy nice :)
i would realy like to hear this with better quality ^^
imthewownoob 8 months ago
Sick, but i don't think that was the right song for the rap. Lupe has a very varied and elastic rap style, and his beats usually reflect that. I think it's good, just not the right beat at all.
ThaDoctor17 8 months ago
@Astr0nom1c Stricto vive gladio my friend.
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
@Astr0nom1c Word. Go watch harry potter.
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
fuken decent bro
killuoldstyle 8 months ago
You are a liarrrr I doubt you win dancing contests haha
Nice job bro
cloudstriefer 8 months ago
The second you started - I knew what heaven was - awesome job :)
Basketballandwow 8 months ago
Awesome track and all, but maybe record your voice and video together and use headphones to listen to the track, then lay your voice over the track to get a better mix and higher quality track.
DestinctionZ 8 months ago
@DestinctionZ People seriously need to stop telling me how/what to do. I make a clearly statement I was throwing it together, seeing if it was even worth the time of doing that.
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
KonClue you need to record this, its amazing! Find a perfect beat and do it. I think im not the only one who was blown away from the lyrics you wrote
~Insaaneify
Insaaneify 8 months ago
HAHAHAHAHA
your mom is hilarious
Cloymax 8 months ago
Dopeeee!
Lamoni 8 months ago
You gotta record this, and its already great and will be amazing if you do record it.
Also the freestyle at the end was sick
EbilNinja 8 months ago
Deffiently Record it. Edit the beat slightly, its almost like its trying to take your thunder. Stoked for this Godly track's future.
TheKleinbauer 8 months ago
Chipmunk's on a new car as the thumbnail FTW
DravenIM 8 months ago
recooooord with better quality and new beat. siiick !
makkevafan 8 months ago
I'm sorry if I sound like a daft brick now, but I'd rather be honest than acting like I liked it.
The lyrics were good, but it sounded to me like you started to force syllables many times. And I personally hate when rappers do that. I mean, it can be okay to do once or twice, if you turn it into a punch line. Now I don't want to lecture someone who's probably better than me, but I suggest using some more time on the syllables and practicing some more, so you'll realise something is wrong.
SanityIsForTheWeak0 8 months ago
@SanityIsForTheWeak0 You also went off beat a couple of times. And it was rather hard to hear the actual beat.
But if you adjusted the syllables a bit, found a more suitable beat, and made a good recording, I think it'd turn out somewhat flawless.
SanityIsForTheWeak0 8 months ago
Lyrics are sick bro, but the instrumental doesnt match with it imo, i would say a higher tempo beat
ultimoshakoni 8 months ago
@ultimoshakoni Yeah, it's also just me going nuts in my room in one take. I'd actually fit it on beat if I recorded. /Shrug Thank you though. Good looks.
KonClueZhen 8 months ago
record it... or i kill u xD
finzo396 8 months ago
Fuckin Sick Bro record it and stick it on itunes man !!!!!
SkirrelTheLost 8 months ago
VAGINA
tobba515 8 months ago