dude, i can't picture anyone singing along with this on the radio.. the chorus is ok but the lyrics are too frank and negative for anyone tho fall in lovve with this song... you have got a talent tho..
wow good job dude! find a, I don't know how you say that in english, but a station that make your song at a CD, you know what I meanxD:P Btw beautiful;)
Thanks Dani, that means so much :-) haha I do the best I can, I'm glad you liked it so much :-) Yes Vlog about a CD is coming soon, so stay tuned, and thanks for subbing! :-)
WOW!!!!! Chaz, that was great. Loved the hold you did on the "me" on the CH. Like the moroccan sounding that is there yet not. I am not a fan of the bridge, sounded flat. Over all I buy it. Thanks for posting, Marty
Thanks Marty! Yeh that bridge has always given me fits vocally, I can't get the pitches I want, def. will work it out for the album I'm planning! Will be a Vlog shortly, about it! :-) Stay tuned
Well besides the fact that your verse riff sounds like a rip off of John Mayer' Neon...this song isn't too bad. Singing is pretty good. But honestly, I would re-do that verse riff cause I think you're gonna hear that from a lot of people. Good luck with that new interface. Peace.
Yes, I got the picking idea from John's neon. You're right, I might hear that a lot, but I liked the sound of it, so I used it. People use ideas from other artists all the time - I do know what you mean though, and I'll think about changing it, but I really like it, haha. Thanks for commenting, I can't wait to start using the new interface! :-)
haha if the copyright police come after me, I'll deny any knowing of who John is, hahah :-p At least my chords are different :-p I checked out your stuff, you got some bluesy stuff there, nice! :-)
well theres only six of those string on the guitar your playing there chaz, your boud to hit some of the same ones mayer does! I wrote a song that sounds exactly like Mraz's sleep all day....just becouse alot of the chords are the same didnt stop me from writing the song! Great job and good message in the song Chaz. loved it!
hahah! thanks Rob, no doubt only 6 strings! Awesome, must be a sweet song, is it on YT? The only thing similar in my song here is the picking idea/pattern none of the chords are the same as John's Neon, haha. Glad you liked the message and the song, thanks so much buddy! :-)
dude, i can't picture anyone singing along with this on the radio.. the chorus is ok but the lyrics are too frank and negative for anyone tho fall in lovve with this song... you have got a talent tho..
McBrideAidy 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment. Can't please everyone, but thanks for the input :-)
chaz23j 2 years ago
super duper song!
:D
lexykp 2 years ago
Thanks so much Alex! :-)
chaz23j 2 years ago
wow good job dude! find a, I don't know how you say that in english, but a station that make your song at a CD, you know what I meanxD:P Btw beautiful;)
drumstokjes 3 years ago
thanks a ton, man! Yeh I know what you mean, haha! thanks for commenting! I'm sending you a message too, check your inbox! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
Wow! your awesome my friend!
LaiYouttitham 3 years ago
haha, not as good as your guitar playing, but thanks so much, i subbed to you! :-) and thanks for ur sub! Keep rockin'!
chaz23j 3 years ago
Holy Talent!!! This is your song? You wrote it!?? Better than most of the music out there I'd say!
YoanaRae 3 years ago
yuppers this is my song! :-) It's actually my favorite to play right now! Thanks so much Yoana, you're so kind! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
Inspired by Neon (by John Mayer), huh? It sounds a bit like it and your right hand technique (AKA the "claw") looks very similar as well...
Anyway, good job considering it's your second song...
holuc08 3 years ago
Thanks!!! Yes the guitar technique was definitely inspired by JM's "Neon", haha the 'CLAW'. Thanks for the comment! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
haha, thanks! Yeh my real name is charles, but I go by chaz on this thing, kind of a 'stage' name i guess, haha idk. take care!
chaz23j 3 years ago
Your finger picking is very impressive Chaz. Nice job. Great lyrics too.
EleventhHourAngel 3 years ago
thanks very much Lance!! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
That was beautiful Charles, you've got great songwriting skills, a relaxing voice and you're a skilled guitarist too! Very well done, my friend =)
matthewlombartmusic 3 years ago
Matthew my friend! Thanks so much, your thoughts mean a lot to me! :-) Glad you liked it!
chaz23j 3 years ago
The excellent performance !
Great voice and beautiful song and excellent sound !
Bravo !
5*****
Tadek59 3 years ago
Thank you so much! woo hoo! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
excellent!!! 10*
thanks!!!
kisses
LaLi1561 3 years ago
yay! thanks so much! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
I love this Chaz! =D you re so talenteddd
i loveeeee how u play guitar like rlly amazing haha love yer voice too !
keep this up and goooood luck on the cd i really wanna try to make a demo one too =]
great job!
DanielaLima07 3 years ago
Thanks Dani, that means so much :-) haha I do the best I can, I'm glad you liked it so much :-) Yes Vlog about a CD is coming soon, so stay tuned, and thanks for subbing! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
WOW!!!!! Chaz, that was great. Loved the hold you did on the "me" on the CH. Like the moroccan sounding that is there yet not. I am not a fan of the bridge, sounded flat. Over all I buy it. Thanks for posting, Marty
mscgood 3 years ago
Thanks Marty! Yeh that bridge has always given me fits vocally, I can't get the pitches I want, def. will work it out for the album I'm planning! Will be a Vlog shortly, about it! :-) Stay tuned
chaz23j 3 years ago
Fantastic performance and great lyrics !
Beautiful voice and excellent sound !
Great job !
5*****
Tadek59 3 years ago
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
Very nice ^_^ postive lyrics too.. i like
peace bfam
Joshh
blackjackal04 3 years ago
thanks Bro!!!! peace out! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
Well besides the fact that your verse riff sounds like a rip off of John Mayer' Neon...this song isn't too bad. Singing is pretty good. But honestly, I would re-do that verse riff cause I think you're gonna hear that from a lot of people. Good luck with that new interface. Peace.
Kristopher1129 3 years ago
Yes, I got the picking idea from John's neon. You're right, I might hear that a lot, but I liked the sound of it, so I used it. People use ideas from other artists all the time - I do know what you mean though, and I'll think about changing it, but I really like it, haha. Thanks for commenting, I can't wait to start using the new interface! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
Word, ha. Screw John!
Kristopher1129 3 years ago
haha if the copyright police come after me, I'll deny any knowing of who John is, hahah :-p At least my chords are different :-p I checked out your stuff, you got some bluesy stuff there, nice! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
well theres only six of those string on the guitar your playing there chaz, your boud to hit some of the same ones mayer does! I wrote a song that sounds exactly like Mraz's sleep all day....just becouse alot of the chords are the same didnt stop me from writing the song! Great job and good message in the song Chaz. loved it!
ShipRock04 3 years ago
hahah! thanks Rob, no doubt only 6 strings! Awesome, must be a sweet song, is it on YT? The only thing similar in my song here is the picking idea/pattern none of the chords are the same as John's Neon, haha. Glad you liked the message and the song, thanks so much buddy! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago
hey cool guitar work chaz!!! awesome original song man!!
malfattimusic 3 years ago
thanks Gary, glad you liked it! :-)
chaz23j 3 years ago