I really like your writing. Your direction is clearly good, and I like your choice of actors as well as their performances. Overall, your editing is good and gets the point across, but I disagree with many of the dissolves. The power of the simple cut is unimaginable.
I respect you as a filmmaker and I like your work. If you want an editor for your next flick, let me know. I'm also an AAU student. Nice work, take care.
Searching Youtube for any videos about Metal Detectors, discovered this great Short Film. At first I thought "What the ...?". As I'm watching, I'm realizing that it's pretty deep. Maybe there is hope for Youtube being used as everyones Broadcast Channel with some insight; instead of a bunch of cowards pissing on peoples videos because they have nothing worth sharing from their own lives. Thanks for a great film / video. =^.^=
An amazing work of art. I loved how the setting came together. The location of the beach is great, and to have the weather gloomy really made an impact. Steering away from the typical sunny summer weather. It's a little bit of foreshadowing part of the plat. Great job all of you!
Collin, your writing is profound, smart and sophisticated - your best yet! Dan did a fabulous job of interpreting the story on film. I am so proud of you, son. Congratulations to you both! Your number one fan,
Collin, your writing is profound, smart and sophisticated - your best yet! Dan did a fabulous job of interpreting the story on film. I am so proud of you, son. Congratulations to you both!
Great work Mr. Lahr! The story and dialogue was clear and I like the spin at the end with him researching the truth. Great job. Your finest work yet sir.
being a metal detectorist myself, that guy won't find anything swinging the detector 2 feet off the ground lol
Dirtbarber 1 month ago
What a wonderful message!
royalott 1 year ago
@royalott Thanks a lot. This movie means a lot to me!
dlahr29 11 months ago
I like this BUT the metal Detector man should be swinging the coil just for realism's sake... I enjoyed watching it ALOT!!
ryannlag 2 years ago
I really like your writing. Your direction is clearly good, and I like your choice of actors as well as their performances. Overall, your editing is good and gets the point across, but I disagree with many of the dissolves. The power of the simple cut is unimaginable.
I respect you as a filmmaker and I like your work. If you want an editor for your next flick, let me know. I'm also an AAU student. Nice work, take care.
TheSalawag 2 years ago
God this is EXACTLY what its like at a local regional paper. holy crap.
arcadiandelsol 3 years ago
Searching Youtube for any videos about Metal Detectors, discovered this great Short Film. At first I thought "What the ...?". As I'm watching, I'm realizing that it's pretty deep. Maybe there is hope for Youtube being used as everyones Broadcast Channel with some insight; instead of a bunch of cowards pissing on peoples videos because they have nothing worth sharing from their own lives. Thanks for a great film / video. =^.^=
alectricfoxx 3 years ago 3
@alectricfoxx Go to vimeo, its art, not v-logging dbags
thecakeisbake 1 year ago
An amazing work of art. I loved how the setting came together. The location of the beach is great, and to have the weather gloomy really made an impact. Steering away from the typical sunny summer weather. It's a little bit of foreshadowing part of the plat. Great job all of you!
amberlyfawn 3 years ago 2
This comment has received too many negative votes show
This is all kinds of boring
kingston554 3 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
agree
PiCkUrGeaR 3 years ago
Great video
OuterBanksSeaweed 4 years ago 3
You're amazing!
carrieallie 4 years ago 2
Collin, your writing is profound, smart and sophisticated - your best yet! Dan did a fabulous job of interpreting the story on film. I am so proud of you, son. Congratulations to you both! Your number one fan,
Mom
doninsley 4 years ago 3
Collin, your writing is profound, smart and sophisticated - your best yet! Dan did a fabulous job of interpreting the story on film. I am so proud of you, son. Congratulations to you both!
Your number one fan,
Mom
doninsley 4 years ago 3
Wow D!!
leecey238 4 years ago 2
Your best work yet. Looking foward to the DVD.
kurtheidepriem 4 years ago 2
Great work Mr. Lahr! The story and dialogue was clear and I like the spin at the end with him researching the truth. Great job. Your finest work yet sir.
DCManigault 4 years ago 2