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Really well done :-) The sounds in the start are a bit off, and i think you have to track the bulletholes manually - but besides that, it looks nearly pro :-) (im also making a bit of film my self :-)
Pretty good, are you motion tracking? because some of those shots the bullets are moving :P, I have never seen a shootout between gangsters in the day time ;D
Some of the effects are a little off (like the bullet holes on the car move with the camera near the end) but the sound effects are awesome and really well done, as well as the overall composition.
Nice...but you need to track to bullet holes in the car a little better. The bullet holes are not moving with the car correctly. example at :57 the bullet hole on the door jumps to the edge of the door. It does it really fast but you can notice it.
@roger09doger for christ sake thier blank guns. it gives the real look and sound w/o actually projectiles. WHY IN THE FUCKING WORLD WUD THEY USE BB GUNS?
@iamarcel Its call crossing the line of action or better known as a "line break". This is how DP's create there own technique and push the laws of film to also create there own style. Not ALL film makers play by the book :)
@goFLIKBOX You have a good point against what iamarcel said, but it seems a little harder to follow when you cross the line. Nice video overall, however.
Hey, i dont know if you would want to give it away but if you do can you please tell me what part of action essentials you used for the shotgun shots?
You did a nice job with this, but to apply some constructive criticism: I wouldn't go for the shakey camera look. It's a powerful technique if it's used right, but don't over do it. Also, try blurring some of your muzzle flashes so they blend in a little better. They sort of 'stuck out' at me. Otherwise, great job. Good acting and cutting. Keep it up!
this was great. I loved the camera work nice job One thing I would spend a little more time tracking some of the bullet holes on the car that was one little thing that kept it from being that much better
the flash is to bright better off using smoke and a little bit of flash if you really want it. the sound is off and you have a bit of tracking problems but the filming angles are good and the music in the background adds a good feel to it all.
honestly dude, this is bad ass. but. if you took out the muzzle flashes and just used smoke it would be sooo much tighter. and plus there wouldn't be a flash since they aren't tracer bullets. but yeah dude you should just use smoke and see how it looks like.
next to no bass in alot of the sound effects- i'd pump that up a bit, and maybe some bad-ass camera shake for close up gunfire like in kick-ass where big daddy storms the warehouse
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Please remove this disgusting Anamorphic cropping. It just removes details and is completely unnecessary (you didn't shoot this movie with Cinerama camera) Besides that, great short!
@Rockkk59 if you shoot in 240p, then you cant go any higher than that. however, if yo shoot in something higher that 240p you can make it 240p.....but who wants to do that
@goFLIKBOX no distespict, but there is no way that u did that with only Sony Vegas, u must of used After effects the tracking and some of the effects too, right?
how were you able to get the bullet holes to stay so well on the cars with the camera moving around so violently? did you simply add the camera movements later or can I do a good track using Mocha???
@GentlemenGhost18 to be honest I was able to track some of it threw After effects and some I tracked myself due to lack of points on screen to track. Its not my best work and could have been done better.
All your effects look great, but the camera shakes around too much and it's tough to tell what's going on sometimes. I understand that it was an artistic choice, but next time you should use less shaky cam.
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@m5dusk dude do u know how hard it is to find sounds good like that, if u want an ak sound, it is hard to find one that is actually good quality, handguns are really easy sounds to find but aks arent...........
Everything seems golden, seriously. Just make the shots louder (like a real gun), like a lot louder, and it would probably be the most realistic battle scene I've ever seen in a low budget youtube short film.
i agree with ar15 for the most part. I actually like the shorter scenes it gives the clip more action in my opinion. I would improve the tracking howerever, the bullet holes were moving a lot. Awesome though, Im definately considering getting action essentials for an upcoming movie im filming.
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goFLIKBOX 2 weeks ago
that was soo dope.you neeeeeeeed to continue
ThaaatsEnough 1 month ago
Hey man that was niceeee! What camera did you use?
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simoneaug 2 months ago
Really well done :-) The sounds in the start are a bit off, and i think you have to track the bulletholes manually - but besides that, it looks nearly pro :-) (im also making a bit of film my self :-)
tth0313 3 months ago
came here to hate on something, changed mind this is dope. Killa Bee's on a swarm, like that ADR sfx u did
stickytoes2 3 months ago
im not living on this street...
wierdbunnyproduction 5 months ago
Very good work. You can really step up your game with some tighter sound design. The L/R pans were a little odd.
guveneurmedia 6 months ago
not my kind of camera work, but definitely good enough to be in a movie
jcsmtih900 6 months ago
@NappiCinema Actually we do, thanks for your comment :)
goFLIKBOX 7 months ago
its awesome but the camera shakes too much
UsmanAndTheOthers 7 months ago
WOW!
JAMESHARTDRUMS 7 months ago
micheal bays kids
ShowmenTv 8 months ago
Nice video, but way to overboard with the muzzle flashes.
subasurf 8 months ago
@subasurf we like overboard :P
goFLIKBOX 8 months ago 8
@subasurf I wouldn't say overboard. They looked realistic for the most part.
StormbringerStudios 7 months ago
@subasurf Lol if you have ever seen a gun that does not have a flash hider fire it is about right! becide it needs to go out more a few feet.
Caleb12top 5 months ago
nice montage ;o
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pipoparisien4 8 months ago
wow u guys are pro's!!!
Maxamillion72 8 months ago
what is the Progrom that u use ? please
pipoparisien4 8 months ago
@pipoparisien4 After effects for the special effects and sony vegas pro 9.0 for the edit. (I'm now editing on adobe premiere cs5.5)
goFLIKBOX 8 months ago
@goFLIKBOX What Camera did you use?
worrmiesroo 5 months ago
awesome
thodorisgiannakopoul 8 months ago
Pretty good, are you motion tracking? because some of those shots the bullets are moving :P, I have never seen a shootout between gangsters in the day time ;D
srekcornaivaf 8 months ago
this is good but theres just too much action like i dont even know whats happening when the camera angle is switching all the time
aleksi50snt 8 months ago
Some of the effects are a little off (like the bullet holes on the car move with the camera near the end) but the sound effects are awesome and really well done, as well as the overall composition.
TehRealCanadarocker 8 months ago
That was well done. Kept my attention and the f/x are tight.
godstomper 8 months ago
where did you get the sound fx
shootfirst77 9 months ago
Acting was great and not cheesy like so many others and I loved the gun shot sounds.
TraneDisorder 9 months ago
sooooo sick
yougotit96 9 months ago
Thats cool dude
grayfeild 9 months ago
Nice...but you need to track to bullet holes in the car a little better. The bullet holes are not moving with the car correctly. example at :57 the bullet hole on the door jumps to the edge of the door. It does it really fast but you can notice it.
wordupmag 9 months ago
what for effect do you use with the shotgun? wich one excacly from action essentials? what's the name of the effect?
VVK28 9 months ago
pcool
Iambloodcrazy123 9 months ago
This looks like a Big Screen Movie Scene! Awesome bro!
OfficialChemaTV 10 months ago
Set it to 22fps
FSXFS2002 10 months ago
when is this coming out ?!
flipsiide10 10 months ago
Did you use sony vegas to make the gun effects?
PLANBUPTHEWALL2 10 months ago
sick mi like it
HyaPure 10 months ago
That was really good!
QuantumLegacy2010 10 months ago
EY! been waiting for over a year now, wheres the movie!?!?!
skotn 10 months ago 2
whats the name of the song in the background??
FeBReEzYUNLIMITED 10 months ago
What are those bb guns?If so how do you take the orange cap off LEGALLY?!
roger09doger 11 months ago
@roger09doger for christ sake thier blank guns. it gives the real look and sound w/o actually projectiles. WHY IN THE FUCKING WORLD WUD THEY USE BB GUNS?
gamebuff 10 months ago
@gamebuff Yeah but i live in canada.And the part i live in doesnt allow REAL guns.
roger09doger 10 months ago
Where did you get the sound effect for the Uzi? I MUST have it!
happycompy 11 months ago
Dear all Moviemakers-
can i get feedback for this? /watch?v=LRFPdB_vvOw
im a 14 year old filmmaker and the comping and cgi for that shot took forever so id appreciate feedback! :)
passtheyoggurt 11 months ago
can you realase a vid on how to get though widescreen setting imense and i cant find a vid on the vid
paradoiemaina 11 months ago
This is honestly one of the best edited action films on youtube I love the quick edits PERFECT ! great job bro !
swineflu813 11 months ago
DUDE!!! that was so sick, where did u get the sound fx from though?
BarrettKIQSer 11 months ago 9
ODB=Win
MarKSlamS621 11 months ago
WOW this will be a great movie it could be on TV
TheCrazy443 1 year ago
i meant i prefer final cut
AcceptedChallenge 1 year ago
are you using after effects or final cut? I prefer after effects because i'm more experienced with it.
awsomepossum1340 1 year ago
what song?
MultiJacob123 1 year ago
You kinda forgot about the 180 degrees rule around at 0:23; first you're filming him from the left, and in the garage you crossed "the line". :)
iamarcel 1 year ago
@iamarcel Its call crossing the line of action or better known as a "line break". This is how DP's create there own technique and push the laws of film to also create there own style. Not ALL film makers play by the book :)
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago 14
@goFLIKBOX Yea, I totally agree with pushing the laws of filmmaking, I just found it a bit confusing :)
iamarcel 1 year ago
@goFLIKBOX You have a good point against what iamarcel said, but it seems a little harder to follow when you cross the line. Nice video overall, however.
davdud101 11 months ago
@iamarcel no you can still tell where he is
asaktap98 9 months ago
Hey, i dont know if you would want to give it away but if you do can you please tell me what part of action essentials you used for the shotgun shots?
EditAffect 1 year ago
Yo were did you guys get your sound effects
ClownzMask 1 year ago
THIS WAS AWESOME!!
CNActionStudios 1 year ago
anybody that dont like this is retarted good scene
SUPAPRADUCA 1 year ago
anybody that dont like this is retarted good scene
SUPAPRADUCA 1 year ago
Sweet! Check out this action video!
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deathwish31 1 year ago
You did a nice job with this, but to apply some constructive criticism: I wouldn't go for the shakey camera look. It's a powerful technique if it's used right, but don't over do it. Also, try blurring some of your muzzle flashes so they blend in a little better. They sort of 'stuck out' at me. Otherwise, great job. Good acting and cutting. Keep it up!
TylerStep 1 year ago
Great job with this one, definitely worth a subscribe
NElangbam 1 year ago
wow that made me wanna duck for cover lol
ak9demikz 1 year ago
this is some GOOD shit.
xethanxflipsburgers 1 year ago
That was really good i think the complete version gonna be great
TheCrazy443 1 year ago
this was great. I loved the camera work nice job One thing I would spend a little more time tracking some of the bullet holes on the car that was one little thing that kept it from being that much better
ZmanZoo 1 year ago
good effects, good blood, good acting, good camera shots, just the gunshots could be a little louder
Havoc123Heli456 1 year ago
yearh, wonderfull
bestantoine 1 year ago
the flash is to bright better off using smoke and a little bit of flash if you really want it. the sound is off and you have a bit of tracking problems but the filming angles are good and the music in the background adds a good feel to it all.
MrGunmag 1 year ago
honestly dude, this is bad ass. but. if you took out the muzzle flashes and just used smoke it would be sooo much tighter. and plus there wouldn't be a flash since they aren't tracer bullets. but yeah dude you should just use smoke and see how it looks like.
MegaJoe63 1 year ago
This looks so pro. Great job
EndlessPr0ductions 1 year ago
Brooklyns Finest
taggermen 1 year ago
Where do u get ur sounds?
biggestwwefanlogan 1 year ago
Wow! Nice work
TheoAlexanderClark 1 year ago
very nice but the 1:03 muzzle flash needs some work
TheMumblingCouncil 1 year ago
great video!
Human3xtube 1 year ago
Amazing GUYS!
HYSSediting 1 year ago
This video is awesome
JRFILMWORKS 1 year ago
that looks really awesome!
TheTimeLordAnthony 1 year ago
@BlackLight601 dude, up up down down left right left right B A start.. the code for all!
TonyTwoToes6669 1 year ago
Seriously.. PROPS, nice use of the action essentials and editing, color correction, sound, very nice job!!!
TonyTwoToes6669 1 year ago
Shit, kick ass, man. I would love doing this shit, and i know how to do the effects, but.. i don't have the money for a nice camera lol.
Dylan6597 1 year ago
Bad Ass!
KriegBoy 1 year ago
this is really good
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MarkIVFilms 1 year ago
I love it! :D what camera were u using, very great quality!
XMoDTuTsX 1 year ago
i would really like to see the movie!!! I think it will be amazing! Can not wait !
Thank you for uploading this!
GERAEffectsTutorials 1 year ago
Though so, btw cool video, love the way you shake the camera ^^
MrCakecutter 1 year ago
i dont care what anyone says that shit was amazing !!!! i liked the camera shaking it gave it a more intense feeling.
GrandmasKittens 1 year ago
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MrCakecutter 1 year ago
add the effect in after effects then clip it in Vegas.
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
next to no bass in alot of the sound effects- i'd pump that up a bit, and maybe some bad-ass camera shake for close up gunfire like in kick-ass where big daddy storms the warehouse
(type this in search if you havn't seen it)
KICK-ASS "Big Daddy Warehouse Shootout": on Blu-Ray Combo Pack Aug 3 2010 : MAPLE PICTURES
ResoImages 1 year ago
FUCKING BRILLIANT!
aL3ks06 1 year ago
Go easy on the camera shake :P
TacTzords 1 year ago
Please remove this disgusting Anamorphic cropping. It just removes details and is completely unnecessary (you didn't shoot this movie with Cinerama camera) Besides that, great short!
LionEyeproductions 1 year ago
Filming was great, but the scene wasn't realistic.
subasurf 1 year ago
where did you get the sound fx??? please reply
TheBELTWHIPPING 1 year ago
that was honestly the best short ive seen using AE2. the music really gave it that cali gang bangin feel lol
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RealMatt8teen 1 year ago
btw are you filming in 24p ? or your converted that in your composition setting ?
Rockkk59 1 year ago
@Rockkk59 Shot in 24p 720p
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
@goFLIKBOX very very nice. whats your video camera ?
Rockkk59 1 year ago
@goFLIKBOX
What song is that?
biggestwwefanlogan 1 year ago
@Rockkk59 if you shoot in 240p, then you cant go any higher than that. however, if yo shoot in something higher that 240p you can make it 240p.....but who wants to do that
HoboEffects 1 year ago
perfect filming technique
Rockkk59 1 year ago
good job, shot well but you need to track the bullet holes on the car and match the muzzle fire
idltimcin1 1 year ago
will the whole film eva b made??
auzzieUNDERWORLDguy 1 year ago
Did you use mini DV or SD card camera? And which editing software? your movies cool.
Ryan4Butler2 1 year ago
@Ryan4Butler2 My camera uses Mini DV tapes, I use Sony Vegas to edit and sound design.
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
@goFLIKBOX no distespict, but there is no way that u did that with only Sony Vegas, u must of used After effects the tracking and some of the effects too, right?
great work though really liked it.
alharbimohammed 1 year ago
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alharbimohammed 1 year ago
@goFLIKBOX i love the dv tapes. old school dude lol.
MegaJoe63 1 year ago
@goFLIKBOX what camera were you using for this? it looks great. I didn't know that you can get this quality with mini DV tapes=D
DreamScapeFilm 9 months ago
Nice! pls subbed back :P
GermanTutorialsinHD 1 year ago
nice!!
pmk19921 1 year ago
dang on of the best i seen on youtube!!!
ruchigo35 1 year ago
DOPPPPPE
gotshred 1 year ago
sweet
kegcheck 1 year ago
Where did you get your tracer sounds?
GhostOfBlackwater 1 year ago
@GhostOfBlackwater soundsnap com
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
Wow the sound effects are epic! Good work.
BeradG07 1 year ago
Man i dont have alot of money it sucks
and where did you get your sound fxs?
BDPRODUCTIONSINC 1 year ago
Man i dont have alot of money it sucks
BDPRODUCTIONSINC 1 year ago
holy balls man why did you get the gas ones when you could just add effects?
BDPRODUCTIONSINC 1 year ago
@BDPRODUCTIONSINC adds to the realness
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
and what did you use for the ak 74 and uzi a spring one or expensive?
BDPRODUCTIONSINC 1 year ago
@BDPRODUCTIONSINC ak was around $140 and uzi was around $99
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
Great effects and compositing, but all a little fast. I was confused after the guy got out the rifle. Other wise, gr8! ;)
TreehouseMovieStudio 1 year ago
on the shotgun did you use one of the cgrome cheap ones and paint it? cause i just bought one and am going to paint it if so any tips?
BDPRODUCTIONSINC 1 year ago
@BDPRODUCTIONSINC we bought the shotgun from airsoftgi and then sawed off the barrel a bit to give it a more street feel. didn't paint it tho
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
are you uploading more of this stuff? better than freddiew!
OldMacSpasti 1 year ago
how were you able to get the bullet holes to stay so well on the cars with the camera moving around so violently? did you simply add the camera movements later or can I do a good track using Mocha???
GentlemenGhost18 1 year ago
@GentlemenGhost18 to be honest I was able to track some of it threw After effects and some I tracked myself due to lack of points on screen to track. Its not my best work and could have been done better.
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
Hey dude, that was so fucking prof man! Great effects!
Can I ask u where you get the sound effects, like the car hits and stuff? thx!
rarf2142 1 year ago
That was gangsta. I love how it was kinda in the ghetto. It was pretty sweet
MrSHIZAM99 1 year ago
All your effects look great, but the camera shakes around too much and it's tough to tell what's going on sometimes. I understand that it was an artistic choice, but next time you should use less shaky cam.
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TrailerWarsMedia 1 year ago
good stuff man, liked it
zombifiedmaster 1 year ago
sweet
paulanthonydavenport 1 year ago
and where is the movie?
hardyextrem23 1 year ago
good job, but muzzle flashs is amateur, can be make better..
boorockx 1 year ago
we in the building!!
dinero421 1 year ago
yea! we in the building!!! haha rick did jay fick ur car after filling it up with bullet holes?! LOL
dinero421 1 year ago
Where do you get your sound effects from?
EricHayez 1 year ago
check out my mini series DCP Goes To War! we used action essentials 2! thanks!
DarthChewyProduction 1 year ago
does anyone have any idea where he gets his sound effects??? Please Answer !!!
MC5Productions 1 year ago
Do all these people have infinite ammo mod?
and you should redo the sounds too. AKs don't sound like that all, whether being racked or being shot.
m5dusk 1 year ago
@m5dusk dude do u know how hard it is to find sounds good like that, if u want an ak sound, it is hard to find one that is actually good quality, handguns are really easy sounds to find but aks arent...........
MC5Productions 1 year ago
yeah baby i like it rawwwwwww
zachenke 1 year ago
wow! some of the best effects I've seen yet!
68calsurgeon 1 year ago
I think you should remove the muzzle flashes especially in daylight, smoke is also barely visible but in the other hand it was very good.
dehBix 1 year ago
wat camera did u use
darkdemand5 1 year ago
@darkdemand5 JVC GY-HD110u
goFLIKBOX 1 year ago
at 1:07 the bullet holes on the car move
ElliottChess3x 1 year ago
Everything seems golden, seriously. Just make the shots louder (like a real gun), like a lot louder, and it would probably be the most realistic battle scene I've ever seen in a low budget youtube short film.
demonofskyarchy 1 year ago
send this shit some were to get published this shit was amazing!!!
sourpatch713 1 year ago
looks really good cant wait to see full movie :)
completeidiot12 1 year ago
1:03 muzzle flash is way too bright, looks pretty fake, love the camera angles and the lighting though, good work.
capjack92yahoo 1 year ago
where did you get the sound effects???
OutlookProductionsZS 1 year ago
That was great! Where did you get your sound effects? I want nice gun shots like that for my movies.
tankmaster1018 1 year ago
Fantastic cutting, but previous posts were right about muzzle flashes. Outside, they don't appear that bright at all, but they do inside.
AddziD23 1 year ago
Where is the video. Can i buy it on DVD? haha. Fantastic
BlackLabsproductions 1 year ago
i loved it !!! it looked real !!!
to bad it was a short movie because i enjoyed it !!!
GOOD JOB !!!!
MisakyanTV 1 year ago
NICE!!!! This is probably the best one I've seen on youtube. PERIOD! yeah it has a flaw or two, but that's easily overlooked by the casual viewer.
Great Job!!!
iigunzent 1 year ago
omg loved it
NorthEastFlow 1 year ago
you should fix the color for the muzzle flashes. they are a lil too bright for the video. other than that, good job.
pianoaddict772 1 year ago
Incredibly original... I love it!!
arrudawakening 1 year ago
Man i have one word "Fantastic" i would give this a 4/5 but since its not a real movie, 5/5 :D subscribed :)) im expecting more from u guys
PivotAX 1 year ago
i agree with ar15 for the most part. I actually like the shorter scenes it gives the clip more action in my opinion. I would improve the tracking howerever, the bullet holes were moving a lot. Awesome though, Im definately considering getting action essentials for an upcoming movie im filming.
TheParkourDrummer 1 year ago
what kind of camera did you use?
shadowmoonninja 1 year ago