werewolf chronicles episode 2 part 1

[URB4NWOLF415]

its a good idea i mean i dont see why no one else has started a werewolf story but the dialogue just needs more work other than that its really good

[factionguy1]

@URB4NWOLF415 thanks :) dialouge is hard for me to do but i think for my skyrim series itll be alot better :D

[YiffingPaws]

Here are some werewolf battles. monstersgame(dot)co(dot)uk/?ac­=vid&vid=11094079

[kenyan802]

I get all my mid evil speeches from dynasty warriors lmaof ^-^

[twistedenjoyment]

mm i have to say its got potential. key points you HAVE to work on. character and camera points (sometimes the camera view is really awkward), speech and spelling (sometimes the words dont fit well, like at 3:11 bring it on! ok! just sounds kind of weird), and slow it down a bit feels like the story is going to fast, and last but not least characters attitude and descriptions.like you have a very vague idea about the characters, but besides that the story is pretty good! hope i helped

[factionguy1]

its based off the friend who made the char, like her personality, like everyones words is based off their character,

[twistedenjoyment]

well (and dont take this pesonally) theyr mostly just picking destinations, asking questions and getting in fights, so i personally didnt learn much, but like i said its still very good.

[factionguy1]

lol its k XD my stlye is i like to just get into the action

[twistedenjoyment]

alright i respect that :D hey if you need any help with like mid evil lingo or like speech thingy mebobers (like how words fit together)

[factionguy1]

and also ty for your crtiquing :) i apprciate how you were nice about it :D,and also lithians nature of the beast ftw!

[twistedenjoyment]

hell yea! ur cool i think ill add you as a friend.

[Baryonix55]

Realy good. Definetly need to work on dialog(too kiddish at points, needs to be more midevil times). Work on spelling and grammar. But still KICK ASS!!!!

[factionguy1]

ty lol, im bad with dialog choices but still

[nafaka12]

yeh =.= That would be suckish or that the players are unattackable like a will or something you know when u hit a wall inside city's and Villages. and in the wild ur Killable

[factionguy1]

ty rain :D

[factionguy1]

its not its a full acotr copy

[OkamiAce5]

6:00 was that a Golden Saint?

[factionguy1]

yep a golden saint XD

[factionguy1]

np dude

[Azuandu]

5/5

must be hard finding James

[factionguy1]

yep its on the elder scrolls nexus :D

[factionguy1]

the sword is morrigeans axes swords and hammers

and the armor is morrigean armor its by the same person lol :)

[Zephyrous888]

good one man

i like the fights...

which program do u use?

[factionguy1]

i use fraps :D

[Zephyrous888]

lol i mean for having 2 chars or more together

[factionguy1]

o for that i use player.createfullactorcopy

you can only use it on the pc version though.

[Zephyrous888]

mouahahahahaha i c

[YouNeedMeJackie]

AAAhhhhhh! so-many-subs. *dies.* x.x

[sagethearchmage]

lmao, chompys hungry. my cute little chompy, i will feed him some pathetic bandits. lmao. jk nice job ^-^ 20/5

[JammieBoy07]

Unbeleivable Chris i fuckin luv it! And how my Char has been De-stoned was brilliant! Awesome Ep! Cant wait 4 prt 2 :D