I not an expert on voices but heres some advice xD I think your trying too hard
just lighten up alittle on your voice.Don't strain your voice on the high and low pitches as you can see it leaves you out of breath so you speed up on parts also use virbrato in your voice when needed such as maybe in the low pitches + some high pitches.There are too many flats going on in some parts when there isn't. any.Otherwise you did pretty good=D
*o* hermoso
KamijoxxYuuji 1 year ago
I not an expert on voices but heres some advice xD I think your trying too hard
just lighten up alittle on your voice.Don't strain your voice on the high and low pitches as you can see it leaves you out of breath so you speed up on parts also use virbrato in your voice when needed such as maybe in the low pitches + some high pitches.There are too many flats going on in some parts when there isn't. any.Otherwise you did pretty good=D
DarkBlade411 2 years ago
are you serious xD?
ChiantiGinVermouthBO 2 years ago 3