You're moving your head around too much and you're shouting half the time. You're singing from the back of your throat and need to separate the words when needed. other than that you have a good voice
great talent, awesome singing, poor choice of a song for an audition.. not that the performance wasn't good or anything (counting out that part where the equipment failed due to the loudness lol - p.s loved it) but i really think you could have found a song that would show more of your skills then this one...
but w.e, i like the song and your singing, so the hell with it =D
Boy, you do have talent. Vocally this is pretty good, but please make up your mind: either sing it to 'us', the audience, or keep it to yourself; your eyes are so wandering.... I can't make up my mind watching you, and you shouldn't give anyone the oppertunity to doubt your goal! Great voice though :-)
Very nice. I liked your dynamics. It was a little bit breathy in the beginning and a "sanity close the the door and walk away" went a little flat also watch the last fine fine line it was a little shaky. It may have just been thios particular time but that can kill an audition.
Overall I would say you have a powerful voice though this is a beautiful song and you did do a wonderful job.
i agree here. i think that you need to let go of your sound a little more, your holding back just a touch, which is making it go into your throat. remember to really support yourself and get on top of those notes instead of come from beneath. overal, good job. a few more voice lessons and you'll have a really really solid voice.
it's pretty, but I agree with what others are saying. There's no real character in it, and you do get off at certain points. but hear me out before you get mad at me: Next time, put a personal story behind it. Think of a time when you felt the same way that Kate Monster felt. She wasn't just "oh pity me" it was "oh shiz, I just lost him, how did this all happen?" When you do that, not only will your character improve, but your singing as well.
Good, but what i would call swing or ensemble material, you were off on a couple of really important notes, and early vibrato is something to be wary of, a natural sounding ressinance is key in songs like this. But still a really really good effort I get the feeling that you have a powerfull voice and will make it to the big time in the end :) well done!
Umm dude, I'm not singing this!!! I just know a great voice when I hear it. Why in the world would I post a video under one name and post a comment on a differant?? That's a bit weird, don't you think?
Good voice but oh my god woman, STAND STILL!!
alittlebitmuddled 2 weeks ago
Too smiley for such an emotional song...and too shouty to be believable...pick your mood and stick to it!
OliviaTheGeek 5 months ago 3
You're moving your head around too much and you're shouting half the time. You're singing from the back of your throat and need to separate the words when needed. other than that you have a good voice
TheBroadwaybaby3 6 months ago
She has a nice voice but it doesn't sound like her heart is into it.
bigscorebadboy 10 months ago
nice work, you definitely bring some spice to the part!
TheOnlineMusical 1 year ago
Not bad... bit shouty at times LOL.
mike852846 1 year ago
There's a fine, fine line between projecting and just yelling.
v1de0gamr 1 year ago 44
great talent, awesome singing, poor choice of a song for an audition.. not that the performance wasn't good or anything (counting out that part where the equipment failed due to the loudness lol - p.s loved it) but i really think you could have found a song that would show more of your skills then this one...
but w.e, i like the song and your singing, so the hell with it =D
oh and 5/5 ^^
imthesoundoftruth 2 years ago
Boy, you do have talent. Vocally this is pretty good, but please make up your mind: either sing it to 'us', the audience, or keep it to yourself; your eyes are so wandering.... I can't make up my mind watching you, and you shouldn't give anyone the oppertunity to doubt your goal! Great voice though :-)
robbertstoop 2 years ago
Very nice. I liked your dynamics. It was a little bit breathy in the beginning and a "sanity close the the door and walk away" went a little flat also watch the last fine fine line it was a little shaky. It may have just been thios particular time but that can kill an audition.
Overall I would say you have a powerful voice though this is a beautiful song and you did do a wonderful job.
skyloch 2 years ago
i agree here. i think that you need to let go of your sound a little more, your holding back just a touch, which is making it go into your throat. remember to really support yourself and get on top of those notes instead of come from beneath. overal, good job. a few more voice lessons and you'll have a really really solid voice.
emrld22 2 years ago
This song has many different pitches in it...making it hard to sing. And yet, you made it sound good!
-applause-
x0xqweenx0x 2 years ago
Really good! Keep this up :)
I've got my sister singing this in my youtube lol
mattgrainger123 2 years ago
it's pretty, but I agree with what others are saying. There's no real character in it, and you do get off at certain points. but hear me out before you get mad at me: Next time, put a personal story behind it. Think of a time when you felt the same way that Kate Monster felt. She wasn't just "oh pity me" it was "oh shiz, I just lost him, how did this all happen?" When you do that, not only will your character improve, but your singing as well.
taintedlover2007 2 years ago 3
This is the most lifeless, off-pitch rendition of Fine Fine Line i heard.
Rachel Alejandro gave the most powerful, dramatic and haunting version of this Avenue Q favorite.
tedfrancisco 2 years ago
You are so amazing! haha one more diehard fan <3
anotherbuttercup 2 years ago
Good Job!
Watch your pitch thou!
Pansy1980 3 years ago
good, but not much character. im doing the same song for an audition and i think its such a good character piece
holland503 3 years ago 11
Good, but what i would call swing or ensemble material, you were off on a couple of really important notes, and early vibrato is something to be wary of, a natural sounding ressinance is key in songs like this. But still a really really good effort I get the feeling that you have a powerfull voice and will make it to the big time in the end :) well done!
withapapoose 3 years ago
Umm dude, I'm not singing this!!! I just know a great voice when I hear it. Why in the world would I post a video under one name and post a comment on a differant?? That's a bit weird, don't you think?
WickedWoman23 3 years ago
My Dad posts the videos. i just respond to the comments. =)
~Sarah
shmonkee 3 years ago
Yeah, someone thought it was me because I gave you a good comment. You have a great voice and that's why I commented. :)
WickedWoman23 3 years ago
Well that's one person's thought. I think she'd be amazing for Elphie.
WickedWoman23 3 years ago
WOW that's amazing!!! You have a beautiful voice. Have you done anything from Wicked? You should, it's perfect for your voice. GREAT JOB!!
WickedWoman23 3 years ago 2
She does have some auditions from wicked :)
armassmann 3 years ago
she didnt get the audition but she sounded good
bortenn 3 years ago
These were for college auditions and I got into all the programs I auditioned for.
~Sarah
shmonkee 3 years ago
what schools did u get in to? congratulations! u sound great
broadwaysurfergrl 3 years ago
I hope you got the part
You have a great voice
:D
chickflick9122 3 years ago
ooh what was the audition for?
sounds good
xNatalie02x 3 years ago
You have a nice voice
NinjaCoto 3 years ago
she's really good, did she get what she auditioned for? xxx
xGothicGlamourx 4 years ago 3