AB005 - Keppel Offshore & Marine - Mary Pao & Melissa Loon

[rattyfyr]

Good work for an amateur !! If the intent is to promote and introduce Keppel on Offshore and Marine, you both hv achieved your objectives . But , I hv to see the clips twice to really understand the M&M portion as once i hear commerical break, my mind starts to switch off . Trying to use light hearted character eg. M&M to sell Keppel strategy ( a serious topic) does not seem to blend well. Perhaps, I'm too old n biz like to appreciate using this unconventional introduction...ha ha ha

[denwsf]

Hey Mel and Mary,

HAHAHAHAHHA! I had a really enjoyable time! Nice theme of using a reality tv idea! :D The branding recommendation is interesting and unique, not many teams used that idea.

Overall the analysis was sounds and substantiated with feasible recommendations :D

Mel, please use that energy for ABCC's publicity efforts! :D Continue to get those creative juices flowing! :D

Cheers, Sufan

[jynkang]

haha, really entertaining ;)

[bel19071991]

This is really engaging! I like the way they present their ideas in a simple yet clear manner! Keep up the good work!

[knightprime]

awesome stuff! i love the way the points were brought up in an engaging and informative way, coupled with awesome presenters :D

[Symphony6367]

this presentation is outstanding and creative. i love it~

[sweettoothforever]

Very well done & presented!

[thesparklingamethyst]

Good job! Very creative!

[dollytanbk]

Brilliantly done! The vision & sound effects & the creative presentation is really admirable. Three cheers. You are "hired"! The whole presentation puts the learner at a relax mode and yet not lacking in the detailed information. I thoroughly enjoyed the experience & knowledge this video presented. Good job ladies!

[myheartvalve]

awesome job :D

[boonfactor]

A very comprehensive presentation done in just 10minutes! There was a good analysis of Keppel's industry and environmental concerns, elaborate justification on the alternative solutions and strategies and their feasibility. You have identified salient issues in the case and explored these issues in the viewpoints of not just Keppel, but its stakeholders and competitor too. Content aside, I was thoroughly entertained! Extremely captivating with a good use of animations! Very professional. =)

[SuperSlackoff]

Informative, engaging and great sense of humour! Very clear presentation and creative usage of the Millionaire theme. Commendable effort and fantastic performance :)

[paulkwc]

Creative and lively. Well done - LL's comments.

[paulkwc]

Very well put together. Fun and impactful.

[chichira]

Creative way in bringing across the facts. It managed to capture the salient issues. The recommendation and commercial is amazing. AWESOME VIDEO !!!

[dlhh89]

Good Job! =)

[heilalelo]

good job! good analysis!

[Destinsy]

Interesting & enriching video! Thumbsup!! =D

[slxl1994]

awesome! :D

[suakookia]

very creative video. 

[eleyap]

lovely video!! really love the way you presented your recommendations and the commercial was really interesting! =D

[Fbgzbshjd]

gd job

[20thebigmanc]

cute & good effort,really highlights a lot of facts!

[houndy]

Interestingly portrayed

[441119]

Well done Melissa & Mary, your hard work had been paid off, creative presentation

[dannynannyacne]

great video! i definitely gained many insights after watching it

[colliesz]

The recommendation on the commercial was awesome!!! It certainly deserves a thumbs-up! 

[likebizop]

The considered options and final proposed strategy came across so clearly through the captivating 'game-show' delivery approach. And the very lively M&M commercial break was a very clever way of delivering further information without boring the listener. Thumbs up for ingenuity.

[believed]

Nice!

[yxnn91]

Succintly captured the key issues, in an interesting way! (;

[auntjennifer100]

Cute, innovative and very interesting! Nice to see such a different side of you, Mel :) Love, Aunty Jennifer

[justpolkadots]

Really interesting and UNIQUE way of presenting the case! Great use of subtle humour, yet there is no compromise on the content at all. Nicely done mel! (:

[altx90]

Really entertaining :) Though I feel oil would last more than the next 10 years... hahaha

[whizzdragon]

This is indeed a very creative and entertaining way to present  a case.

The video is able to capture a viewer's heart and attention. Awesome presentation !!!

The presenters are able to apply the video techniques intelligently. Great show...

[LSL769]

What a unique way of presenting a case ! Very refreshing !

[grandineconsultancy]

hey mel n mary! so creative! haha..:D n the quality of ur video is great! entertaining :)

[youudaman]

awesome how y'all breathed life into such a mundane topic:) i've such a short attention span >< but still was captured until the end! comprehensive yet informative, keep it up! (Y)

[berneloh]

Great video. Highly entertaining :) Awesome job M&M and Melissa, you are the next Michelle Chong (the Noose)!

[cellprof]

Positives:

Clever use of video technique, especially P-I-P & zoom-and-pan, to keep viewer interest while delivering content. Several varied & amusing role-plays, especially commercial break.

Presentation:

Game-show format entertaining (perhaps not well-suited to decision-makers).

Visually fussy: while very useful information portrayed, this was in some cases not linked to the case. All-in, a fun viewing experience!

Content:

Key issues & alternatives identified, but lack of supporting evidence