The simplicity is good - although this performance is very 'tv' and would not fill a theatre. Be careful of emphasising personal pronouns unless it's for contrast. 'HIM did you leave' is more effective as 'HIM did you LEAVE'. You need some more gear changes, and don't be afraid to take longer in bringing out new thoughts - but the breaks that you have in the last lines come across as insincere. Trust the verse. What happens just before this speech - show us by your reaction. Hope that helps!
hawt.....very hawt.....and you did good...usemore gestures tho...
regirocksregi 7 months ago
You need to enuciate more, nod your head, use gestures, blink less, and smilie moar
iscrulz 10 months ago
The simplicity is good - although this performance is very 'tv' and would not fill a theatre. Be careful of emphasising personal pronouns unless it's for contrast. 'HIM did you leave' is more effective as 'HIM did you LEAVE'. You need some more gear changes, and don't be afraid to take longer in bringing out new thoughts - but the breaks that you have in the last lines come across as insincere. Trust the verse. What happens just before this speech - show us by your reaction. Hope that helps!
shandreyna 10 months ago
i think i love u 22222 hahahah xxx.
YorkXC15 1 year ago
soo good!!!
krisnich09 1 year ago
i think i love u haha xx
whitwhitwhitlaw 1 year ago