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From: rhiannon1992
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  • I really liked it. I definitely got into it more and more as it went on.

  • Rhia thats well good, I like the music, specially Simon And Garfunkel. That girl looks to nice to be a junky though.

  • thought i would write a bit more than "yeah its good"

    2:51 was realy cool with the trees spiining in black and white, maybe make it blur a bit?.

    no one would try heroin as a first drug, maybe show some before and like the progression from weed, with m8s to E at a club to cooking heroin in a burnt out old house.

    music was really fitting well done.

  • yeah i did want to do alot more for it, but i had a breif of 2:30 which i went over already by over a minute, if i were to make again without the restrictions i would make the storyline more understandable and add in details like you have mentioned, thank you for the comment though, appreciated :) x

  • @rhiannon1992 It's a great short you wrote

  • woah Rhia it's awesome...:)

  • i love it!! :D

    i think im a very good actress :D

    thank you Rhia for letting me star in this short film :D xx

  • yeah it came together well :)

  • @xlauraxprattx You're a beautiful lady. 

  • Goood stuff actually... Though the drugs is all wrong. <Joke...

    Got better as it progressed actually... Hmm.. Yeah! :)

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