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  • oh shiiit! crazy!

  • GodLike

    

  • Whoaa that sick teeens (16) line was illl

  • yo where can u get this beat?

  • Very very nice my man. Good work, I'm gonna go check ur page now and make the acquaintance of the sub button.

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  • "My pen creates wat im livin/they just livin wat they pens created"--

    youre saying the same thing....if your pen creates what youre living, then your living what your pen created...vice versa....if your living what your pen created, ...if your pen creates what youre living...you pretty much said the same thing....good song but you said the same thing with that line....it was redundant....

  • @robinsthicke22 pretty sure he's saying that he actually means what he's saying while other MC's front with their lyrics and act hard when they aren't..my guess

  • Dont rap about my shiny gems or how Ill make you swallow lead

    Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads

    dammnnn!!!!!!!!!! tight!!!

  • "Dont rap about my shiny gems or how Ill make you swallow lead

    Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads"

    DOPE!

  • keep goin with it get your shit heard man..guarantee ull start eating of rap if u make good songs

  • spittin fire for real, mad dope my man

  • I think u are the better than like all YouTube and like 90 percent better than most artists

  • That's awsoume man

  • I don't get the st judes and the 16 part o and some of the best punchlines i've ever heard.

  • @ButtItchVideos St. Judes is a research hospital for sick kids.

  • dope bro

  • had to post a comment, you should get a deal before any of these youtube rappers. That was ill shit, go to st. judes to see 16's this ill.

    Ive listened to a bunch of your bars and your the shit wyze geye. You deserve a deal no doubt, your just to ill and real for radio.

  • Ill spillin quotes want a perfect description

    Killin with rhythm and syllables my purpose to existence

    Mc spittin scriptures letting time fly

    Rhyming words paintin pictures simply for your minds eye.

    you fucking serious! lol weze went in man

  • OMG THIS IS ILL

  • awesome lyrics my dude, i made a remix to the beat but my lyrics can't touch yours...last couple lines sealed it

  • All these whack rap cats quickly get berated

    My pen creates wat im livin they just livin wat they pens created!!!!!!!!

    WHAT?!?!

    SON WE NEEDA COLLAB HIT ME UP REAL TALK

  • this kids a good lyricist... but WHERE THE FUCK IS THE EMOTION!!!! cmon now....

  • i agree...but this is like the second vid i posted and it was almost a year ago check my other vids ive gotten a little better

  • that was dopeeness

  • Incredible lyrics man.

  • this shoulda been on liquid courage instead of that 3rd verse

  • I am cancerous rapture with a catalyst stature

    who raps fast backslash im a blasphemist rapper

    haha fuckin insane yo

    too fuckin sick

  • besides the crazy verse, realyze writing in the background at the beginning is a cool pic

  • that woz dope man

  • Your madddd underrated man.

  • infiniteknowledge515 is a faggot

    this shit is fucking sick dude

  • fucking insane man...

  • Dont rap about my shiny gems or how Ill make you swallow lead

    Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads

  • THAT SHIT WAS MAD NICE

  • this song fuckin blew my mind. all your shit is ill man.

  • "Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads" i was freakin bobbin my head to this lol

  • he should have been on dat 2 mane.

  • good shit man stay up

  • what does berate mean?

    Oh yeah...... Wyze-geye is so freaking ill. Something tells me that you grind hard. Appreciate the passion man

  • was dope except for the complete contradiction of u saying u dont talk about making people eat lead but.. "All these whack rap cats quickly get berated"

  • you must not know what berated means

  • There's no contradiction there.

  • tell me you aren't getting confused between the word berate and the word Beretta

  • That was amazing

  • "Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads"

    haha guy in the back bobbin his head.....

  • haha i never noticed that

  • "you have to go to st judes to see sixteens this ill" amazzzzzzin

  • this guy reminds me of Ice-T haha

    Props, this was tight

  • yeah for sure, hes good, I just have a hard time with the delivery, but solid punchlines, solid lyrics

  • I guess your talking about RAGE. He's good man but so is this Wise MOFO.

  • damn.That was pretty fucking good.

  • nigga u left me speech less dawg awsome flow and your just naturaly skilled you got yourself another subscriber and try to keep an eye on my page imma do my verse for my new song unanswered! peace !

  • dig, my dude...

    you are insane, if you're up for a collab, pick an instrumental...

  • this verse is hot - better than mine...keep it up homes, get at me to work on some mixtape / youtube stuff if you want

  • u know what, that was fkn good lyrics. u didnt pull it off well, but ur lyrics were the best in the contest.

  • stay sharpening em swords lord/ur skill real ill/mad props!/

    p.e.a.c.e.n blessings

  • i love it!!! XD

  • sick you & your cousin won the contest

  • you wana no why my computer smells like crap and is in melted? CUZ THAT SHIT WAS FIRE

  • dammmmm shyt was hot

  • holy fuck

    "My pen creates wat im livin they just livin wat they pens created"

    dope as fuck. str8 up

    you're seriously lyrically talented. you are dope.

  • this is too sick dude

  • Too sick

  • easly the sickest entry besides rage

    but on some real shit

    needa work on delevery and passion

    i felt it thou

    not hating

    jus some constructive critiscm

    one love

    -SD

  • Fresh.

  • loved it

  • Paintin word imagery or call it verbal dictionary...omg how do u come up wit that...its crazy but other than that i didnt really like this one =(

  • That was hot man, I would've sent you mine, but its past the deadline so no point.

  • wax said he was a youtube winner but he wasnt on the remix.

  • WHAT not even top 15 man

    i liked it just that u used a few lines uve used before other then that sick man

  • LYRICAL BEAST, send me a download link for your verse.

  • i would man but i dont have a mp3 link i recorded it but my mic is shitty so it sounds wack ...glad u liked the verse tho

  • WOW OMG u r my HERO

  • yeeeeea u snapped on this one

    good shit

    specially wit the convicts and bobble head LOL

  • that shit was hott...just put more energy in that..and u got somethin!

    respect

    stizz

  • thanks for the comment, man for real tho you straight killed it

  • sik shit man

  • FUCK YEAH!! dope shit son. very dope.

  • LIIIVEEE....grat verse dog...mad crazy punchilnes and perfectly put together the lyrics. a 10

  • this was dope homie. wordplay on point.

  • SICK as FUCK. better with every verse you write man...stay up

  • you and anomaly are the best ive heard so far...check mine

  • this one prolly gonna be on the remix

    shits tight man

  • go to st judes to see 16s this ill... legit

  • nice homie! flow was mad consistent fam... really dig it!... peep mine if you get a chance bro

  • pretty good shit man!

  • that was some good shit home boy.. on the realness man u the first kat that really caught my ear ... lyrics deep and dope delivery.. ill ass metaphors man .. check mine out peace

  • hard lyrics, pretty nice verse :)

  • You did the best one ! Those hating just dont understand your lyrics. Im pretty sure youre gonna win Thats what rap is all about Rhytm And Poetry

  • This is gud shyt check mine out

  • That was SICK dude. Really killed it good. I respect that. If you could, hit mine up and let me know what you think.

  • my opinion best by far, no joke mad talent, makes me not want to submit mine

    but wheres ur mic for the audio? cant let that verse go to waste

  • sick for sure, sounds like your write poetry as well, check my submission out.

    -peace

  • nice...

    give mine a listen

  • i like your lyrics

    good job homie

  • nice..

    you guys should check mine out....

    My 16 will make you say, ain't no way that he 16..

  • dat was fuckin tight

    nice hair

  • i heard this one already i was wondering if u send him the audio cause that was crazy

  • thanks man...

    but naw i havent sent it yet...i was planning on doing that today but my mic sucks...so well see

  • hands down u woulda own u need to get a better mic so u could make hot songs

  • good job man check out mine we should do collab let meno

  • Check mine out.

    Been rapping for 2 months, let me know what you think.

  • i think we have a winner

  • this shit is fucken sick!! nice shit....

  • MAn this is dope i like the diffrent style. its unique :)

  • Ohhh dude that was really sick

    I dig your flow

    Record this, and good luck on winnin the contest

  • sick man for real, check out my verse if u get a chance good luck in the contest

  • damm that shit was hot

  • Sick man. One of the best so far.

  • man i knew that verse would be a hit when u was writin it....im not gonna post my now lol....citystarz

  • Im watching this again this is ridiculous. Yo i love your style man. We should definitely collab i gotta mixtape droppin soon man. Can u peep my verse man? Its got some nice punches. Hit me up for a collabo if your interested

  • Damn boy that shit was ill. All these whack rap cats quickly get berated, My pen creates what I'm living they just livin what they pens created. oooooohhh, it stings.

  • ya that line was fire!

  • that was ill

  • yeah man i got to agree with Mdogg..this is the best one so far..i sent one in but i ain't gonna post it...that last line is killer man..keep it up

  • Thanks for the comment, dope stuff man. Convicts line was ill.

  • feeling the structure of the filler  that precedes the bobblehead line. good shit

  • yeah that was hot son thnxfor checkin mines out

  • the guilty convict line wasss soo nice this was ill

  • this fucking ill bro... good luck

    Check my Verse n drop a Comment ... ezz

  • yo dude that was sick just to support you i subscribed to you

  • Das pretty Sick dude... Nice lyrics bro.

  • good shit man, you just gotta make an audio track to hear..but nice nice lyrics

  • PRETTY SICK

  • good flow and wordplay

  • nice shit bro keep it up next time make a recording not a live product i would rather here it edited and shit it would of been even better but neways nice lyrics keep it up styll

  • nice

  • nice shit man

  • this was probably the best lyrical one on the contest, and trust me I've seen a lot of the entries.

  • fuckin dope bro. fucking DOPE LIKE UNCUT RAW! im posting my new verse right now. check it out holla

  • shit balls

    that was good

  • dope entry hopefully ill see you on the remix my man

  • oright now this is the sickest one for real.....u killin me off hate u my doode ..jp ....thasss wassup city starz killin

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