"My pen creates wat im livin/they just livin wat they pens created"--
youre saying the same thing....if your pen creates what youre living, then your living what your pen created...vice versa....if your living what your pen created, ...if your pen creates what youre living...you pretty much said the same thing....good song but you said the same thing with that line....it was redundant....
@robinsthicke22 pretty sure he's saying that he actually means what he's saying while other MC's front with their lyrics and act hard when they aren't..my guess
was dope except for the complete contradiction of u saying u dont talk about making people eat lead but.. "All these whack rap cats quickly get berated"
nigga u left me speech less dawg awsome flow and your just naturaly skilled you got yourself another subscriber and try to keep an eye on my page imma do my verse for my new song unanswered! peace !
that was some good shit home boy.. on the realness man u the first kat that really caught my ear ... lyrics deep and dope delivery.. ill ass metaphors man .. check mine out peace
Im watching this again this is ridiculous. Yo i love your style man. We should definitely collab i gotta mixtape droppin soon man. Can u peep my verse man? Its got some nice punches. Hit me up for a collabo if your interested
Damn boy that shit was ill. All these whack rap cats quickly get berated, My pen creates what I'm living they just livin what they pens created. oooooohhh, it stings.
nice shit bro keep it up next time make a recording not a live product i would rather here it edited and shit it would of been even better but neways nice lyrics keep it up styll
oh shiiit! crazy!
Zrenjaninac 9 months ago
GodLike
CyphLe 9 months ago
Whoaa that sick teeens (16) line was illl
Leathaface13 10 months ago
yo where can u get this beat?
SwaqqKingzRecords 1 year ago
Very very nice my man. Good work, I'm gonna go check ur page now and make the acquaintance of the sub button.
Brahmanfire 1 year ago
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MookieSays1Love 1 year ago
"My pen creates wat im livin/they just livin wat they pens created"--
youre saying the same thing....if your pen creates what youre living, then your living what your pen created...vice versa....if your living what your pen created, ...if your pen creates what youre living...you pretty much said the same thing....good song but you said the same thing with that line....it was redundant....
robinsthicke22 1 year ago
@robinsthicke22 pretty sure he's saying that he actually means what he's saying while other MC's front with their lyrics and act hard when they aren't..my guess
jigsawdz 1 year ago
Dont rap about my shiny gems or how Ill make you swallow lead
Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads
dammnnn!!!!!!!!!! tight!!!
cheddab0b 1 year ago
"Dont rap about my shiny gems or how Ill make you swallow lead
Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads"
DOPE!
dingles4breakfast 1 year ago
keep goin with it get your shit heard man..guarantee ull start eating of rap if u make good songs
thewizest1 1 year ago
spittin fire for real, mad dope my man
AerialDreamz 1 year ago
I think u are the better than like all YouTube and like 90 percent better than most artists
ButtItchVideos 1 year ago
That's awsoume man
ButtItchVideos 1 year ago
I don't get the st judes and the 16 part o and some of the best punchlines i've ever heard.
ButtItchVideos 1 year ago
@ButtItchVideos St. Judes is a research hospital for sick kids.
emohkay 1 year ago
dope bro
yebomata 1 year ago
had to post a comment, you should get a deal before any of these youtube rappers. That was ill shit, go to st. judes to see 16's this ill.
Ive listened to a bunch of your bars and your the shit wyze geye. You deserve a deal no doubt, your just to ill and real for radio.
itsthekidbigc 1 year ago
Ill spillin quotes want a perfect description
Killin with rhythm and syllables my purpose to existence
Mc spittin scriptures letting time fly
Rhyming words paintin pictures simply for your minds eye.
you fucking serious! lol weze went in man
pulsegang 1 year ago
OMG THIS IS ILL
iTonyRose 2 years ago
awesome lyrics my dude, i made a remix to the beat but my lyrics can't touch yours...last couple lines sealed it
yallknowdaname6 2 years ago
All these whack rap cats quickly get berated
My pen creates wat im livin they just livin wat they pens created!!!!!!!!
WHAT?!?!
SON WE NEEDA COLLAB HIT ME UP REAL TALK
yungf1f 2 years ago
this kids a good lyricist... but WHERE THE FUCK IS THE EMOTION!!!! cmon now....
quincy3521 2 years ago
i agree...but this is like the second vid i posted and it was almost a year ago check my other vids ive gotten a little better
emohkay 2 years ago
that was dopeeness
RawBiznasProductions 2 years ago 2
Incredible lyrics man.
KujahKalade 2 years ago 2
this shoulda been on liquid courage instead of that 3rd verse
MookieSays1Love 2 years ago 4
I am cancerous rapture with a catalyst stature
who raps fast backslash im a blasphemist rapper
haha fuckin insane yo
too fuckin sick
iNFeXioNz 2 years ago 2
besides the crazy verse, realyze writing in the background at the beginning is a cool pic
JustMeStarlight 2 years ago 4
that woz dope man
npzstreetball 2 years ago
Your madddd underrated man.
619tumbleweed 2 years ago 2
infiniteknowledge515 is a faggot
this shit is fucking sick dude
iLikeTOMIXX 2 years ago
fucking insane man...
GBallaJ 2 years ago
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Not bad but all the verse is, is rhyming nothing else really. Your not saying shit.
infiniteknowledge515 2 years ago
Dont rap about my shiny gems or how Ill make you swallow lead
Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads
garret7777 2 years ago 3
THAT SHIT WAS MAD NICE
MUZICtuner 2 years ago
this song fuckin blew my mind. all your shit is ill man.
FreshestSince88 2 years ago 2
"Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads" i was freakin bobbin my head to this lol
2SidesOfAShinyCoin 2 years ago 13
he should have been on dat 2 mane.
xKJmac24x 2 years ago
good shit man stay up
MookieSays1Love 2 years ago
what does berate mean?
Oh yeah...... Wyze-geye is so freaking ill. Something tells me that you grind hard. Appreciate the passion man
use29 2 years ago
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beanerstink 2 years ago
was dope except for the complete contradiction of u saying u dont talk about making people eat lead but.. "All these whack rap cats quickly get berated"
masterviolenttibia 2 years ago
you must not know what berated means
emohkay 2 years ago 9
There's no contradiction there.
Raiher 2 years ago
tell me you aren't getting confused between the word berate and the word Beretta
ECWOz 2 years ago
That was amazing
Raiher 2 years ago
"Instead im quick to turn an audience into some bobble heads"
haha guy in the back bobbin his head.....
Robertlivinlikeapimp 2 years ago
haha i never noticed that
emohkay 2 years ago
"you have to go to st judes to see sixteens this ill" amazzzzzzin
iMylez 2 years ago
this guy reminds me of Ice-T haha
Props, this was tight
GrooveAnMove 2 years ago
yeah for sure, hes good, I just have a hard time with the delivery, but solid punchlines, solid lyrics
RealRaw613 3 years ago
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good but I saw a white boy kill it harder so you fail.
RealRaw613 3 years ago
I guess your talking about RAGE. He's good man but so is this Wise MOFO.
a1133882 3 years ago 3
damn.That was pretty fucking good.
flowfessional 3 years ago
nigga u left me speech less dawg awsome flow and your just naturaly skilled you got yourself another subscriber and try to keep an eye on my page imma do my verse for my new song unanswered! peace !
prominent27 3 years ago
dig, my dude...
you are insane, if you're up for a collab, pick an instrumental...
MDHaroge 3 years ago
this verse is hot - better than mine...keep it up homes, get at me to work on some mixtape / youtube stuff if you want
NameBrandClique 3 years ago
u know what, that was fkn good lyrics. u didnt pull it off well, but ur lyrics were the best in the contest.
dudewithcomedy1 3 years ago
stay sharpening em swords lord/ur skill real ill/mad props!/
p.e.a.c.e.n blessings
rebelsupreme 3 years ago
i love it!!! XD
TheMassacre91 3 years ago
sick you & your cousin won the contest
jcruz03 3 years ago
you wana no why my computer smells like crap and is in melted? CUZ THAT SHIT WAS FIRE
keelo42O 3 years ago
dammmmm shyt was hot
simon42o 3 years ago
holy fuck
"My pen creates wat im livin they just livin wat they pens created"
dope as fuck. str8 up
you're seriously lyrically talented. you are dope.
AubreyLover 3 years ago 2
this is too sick dude
straightupkid 3 years ago
Too sick
infiniteV115 3 years ago
easly the sickest entry besides rage
but on some real shit
needa work on delevery and passion
i felt it thou
not hating
jus some constructive critiscm
one love
-SD
siccmadewallstreet 3 years ago
Fresh.
C4rea 3 years ago
loved it
clitsNoreos 3 years ago
Paintin word imagery or call it verbal dictionary...omg how do u come up wit that...its crazy but other than that i didnt really like this one =(
breezybby5 3 years ago
That was hot man, I would've sent you mine, but its past the deadline so no point.
ripmeast21 3 years ago
wax said he was a youtube winner but he wasnt on the remix.
88hm 3 years ago
WHAT not even top 15 man
i liked it just that u used a few lines uve used before other then that sick man
26dolla 3 years ago
LYRICAL BEAST, send me a download link for your verse.
jcruz03 3 years ago
i would man but i dont have a mp3 link i recorded it but my mic is shitty so it sounds wack ...glad u liked the verse tho
emohkay 3 years ago
WOW OMG u r my HERO
alkatraztha1 3 years ago
yeeeeea u snapped on this one
good shit
specially wit the convicts and bobble head LOL
eckoeyo 3 years ago
that shit was hott...just put more energy in that..and u got somethin!
respect
stizz
mizzstizzie 3 years ago
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na na na na na na nigger
ukjarvis 3 years ago
thanks for the comment, man for real tho you straight killed it
theawkwerdyears 3 years ago
sik shit man
Switch613 3 years ago
FUCK YEAH!! dope shit son. very dope.
waxandherbalt 3 years ago 15
LIIIVEEE....grat verse dog...mad crazy punchilnes and perfectly put together the lyrics. a 10
1234Parcero 3 years ago
this was dope homie. wordplay on point.
intellectslang 3 years ago
SICK as FUCK. better with every verse you write man...stay up
Lucid2776 3 years ago
you and anomaly are the best ive heard so far...check mine
inter89 3 years ago
this one prolly gonna be on the remix
shits tight man
saucehawmie 3 years ago
go to st judes to see 16s this ill... legit
ActionBW 3 years ago
nice homie! flow was mad consistent fam... really dig it!... peep mine if you get a chance bro
SuburbanGhettoInk 3 years ago
pretty good shit man!
HappyBunny001 3 years ago
that was some good shit home boy.. on the realness man u the first kat that really caught my ear ... lyrics deep and dope delivery.. ill ass metaphors man .. check mine out peace
MCfoniks 3 years ago
hard lyrics, pretty nice verse :)
watergunna 3 years ago
You did the best one ! Those hating just dont understand your lyrics. Im pretty sure youre gonna win Thats what rap is all about Rhytm And Poetry
KevinNvk 3 years ago
This is gud shyt check mine out
InPhamous 3 years ago
That was SICK dude. Really killed it good. I respect that. If you could, hit mine up and let me know what you think.
wordsfirst13 3 years ago
my opinion best by far, no joke mad talent, makes me not want to submit mine
but wheres ur mic for the audio? cant let that verse go to waste
ballinabs 3 years ago
sick for sure, sounds like your write poetry as well, check my submission out.
-peace
madflowsmusic 3 years ago
nice...
give mine a listen
kpcurran11 3 years ago
i like your lyrics
good job homie
suspec91 3 years ago
nice..
you guys should check mine out....
My 16 will make you say, ain't no way that he 16..
DissKidGerm 3 years ago
dat was fuckin tight
nice hair
locnguyen223 3 years ago
i heard this one already i was wondering if u send him the audio cause that was crazy
boricuapride2243 3 years ago
thanks man...
but naw i havent sent it yet...i was planning on doing that today but my mic sucks...so well see
emohkay 3 years ago
hands down u woulda own u need to get a better mic so u could make hot songs
boricuapride2243 3 years ago
good job man check out mine we should do collab let meno
26dolla 3 years ago
Check mine out.
Been rapping for 2 months, let me know what you think.
kDMusik 3 years ago
i think we have a winner
88hm 3 years ago
this shit is fucken sick!! nice shit....
rbigshow04 3 years ago
MAn this is dope i like the diffrent style. its unique :)
OfficialJSwagga 3 years ago
Ohhh dude that was really sick
I dig your flow
Record this, and good luck on winnin the contest
xXEllez 3 years ago
sick man for real, check out my verse if u get a chance good luck in the contest
BankRow 3 years ago
damm that shit was hot
KosmoTV 3 years ago
Sick man. One of the best so far.
blksnaredrumer 3 years ago
man i knew that verse would be a hit when u was writin it....im not gonna post my now lol....citystarz
REALYZE4 3 years ago
Im watching this again this is ridiculous. Yo i love your style man. We should definitely collab i gotta mixtape droppin soon man. Can u peep my verse man? Its got some nice punches. Hit me up for a collabo if your interested
CharroN69 3 years ago
Damn boy that shit was ill. All these whack rap cats quickly get berated, My pen creates what I'm living they just livin what they pens created. oooooohhh, it stings.
TheModernEggFace 3 years ago
ya that line was fire!
jethier1 3 years ago
that was ill
kholla2222 3 years ago
yeah man i got to agree with Mdogg..this is the best one so far..i sent one in but i ain't gonna post it...that last line is killer man..keep it up
BLACKANDGOLD2486 3 years ago
Thanks for the comment, dope stuff man. Convicts line was ill.
RingerINC 3 years ago
feeling the structure of the filler that precedes the bobblehead line. good shit
letmehearsomething 3 years ago
yeah that was hot son thnxfor checkin mines out
patrone 3 years ago
the guilty convict line wasss soo nice this was ill
CharroN69 3 years ago
this fucking ill bro... good luck
Check my Verse n drop a Comment ... ezz
TomOh631 3 years ago
yo dude that was sick just to support you i subscribed to you
santimostwanted 3 years ago
Das pretty Sick dude... Nice lyrics bro.
TrubleMusic 3 years ago
good shit man, you just gotta make an audio track to hear..but nice nice lyrics
jsizzle20 3 years ago
PRETTY SICK
ChaosTheRapvirus 3 years ago
good flow and wordplay
thetakeover18 3 years ago
nice shit bro keep it up next time make a recording not a live product i would rather here it edited and shit it would of been even better but neways nice lyrics keep it up styll
tkostyle 3 years ago
nice
JBenfante 3 years ago
nice shit man
PRhymes13 3 years ago
this was probably the best lyrical one on the contest, and trust me I've seen a lot of the entries.
MDoggMusic 3 years ago
fuckin dope bro. fucking DOPE LIKE UNCUT RAW! im posting my new verse right now. check it out holla
city0fj 3 years ago
shit balls
that was good
ZackEads01 3 years ago
dope entry hopefully ill see you on the remix my man
SuburbanInvasion 3 years ago
oright now this is the sickest one for real.....u killin me off hate u my doode ..jp ....thasss wassup city starz killin
JLiiVE3 3 years ago