A great start! The editing could be a little smoother but I think some of the shots are sophisticated. Maybe try not to match cut so much, sometimes it screws up the pacing of the story. Nice job, though. Performances are impressive.
Nice work. I like the story it kept me intrigued and interested, and the intro felt like an authentic television title entrance. Critiques. Edits: Some match cuts could be a little smoother; develop a tempo with your cuts and make sure they are motivated. Don't be afraid to hold your shots.
Direction: Work in beats (in film terms the equivalent of a pause). Give your actors time to pace out the dialogue--slow them down a bit. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next installment!
Wow that's awesome.
Stickfire 3 years ago
I love the intro its very professional
outintheoutside 4 years ago
wow that guy in the blue jacket is really freakin hot!
tweb66 4 years ago
A great start! The editing could be a little smoother but I think some of the shots are sophisticated. Maybe try not to match cut so much, sometimes it screws up the pacing of the story. Nice job, though. Performances are impressive.
kb0034 5 years ago
Nice work. I like the story it kept me intrigued and interested, and the intro felt like an authentic television title entrance. Critiques. Edits: Some match cuts could be a little smoother; develop a tempo with your cuts and make sure they are motivated. Don't be afraid to hold your shots.
Direction: Work in beats (in film terms the equivalent of a pause). Give your actors time to pace out the dialogue--slow them down a bit. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next installment!
faroh73 5 years ago
ha ha ha mr lamb
elsarhae12 5 years ago
awsome great work will there be anymore i like it
nightmarestreet 5 years ago
wow please make more now i am curious
dante964077 5 years ago
u are a reallllly good actress you are good enough to be on tv.
PoppinDingy 5 years ago
what an actress. i love you maegan.
elsarhae12 5 years ago