What could have made it better is if Jonnathan missed on purpose because he does not want to kill his best friend or hurt the one he loves. This is called "dumb shooting" in duels. Nathanael then can realize the stupidity of his senseless anger and engulf himself with grief and regret. The duel was kind of comical because they just stood there looking at eachother and shot eachother. The point of a duel is to see who can shoot the other first by taking a few paces opposite of eachother
then turning and shooting one another. So in a way, this was just senselss killing, not a duel at all. I would have liked to see Jonnathan's and Nathanael's expressions as their backs are facing eachother, each expressing turmoil and dilemma. That would have been awesome. But nice clip and good effort.
@xmirame If you have seen Barry Lyndon, In a setup similar to the one I did is how his father dies just in the opening of the movie (with the difference that they have witnesses, which I cant afford because of the cost of the costume rental). I guess there are different types of duel.
When, in the movie, Redmond duels his wife's son, the stand in front of each other taking turns. When her first duel the English officer both shoot at the same time.
Gracias por el comentario, aunque sobre la musica, hasta que no tenga a Philip Glass, a John Williams o a Danny Elfman trabajando para mi... Aunque como ya dije, la cancion lleva bastante edicion para hacer cuadrar los tiempos. Mas alla de eso, poco puedo hacer.
Jajajajaj, si tio, después del último nos tenías preocupados, a ver si te ibas a pasar al cine raro. No te dejaban ensuciar los trajes eh???? xDDD, ná sigue así. Lo único que me preocupa es el alto índice de masculinidad que hay en tus cortos, espero a que esto se deba únicamente a que el exceso de mujeres hablandaría las escenas y no al posible hehco de que no tengas tantas amiguitas como tenía previsto.
De hecho esta bastante editada para que el tempo y los momentos de tension coincidan con los momentos de mas fuerza de la pieza,pero aun tngo q trabajar bastante en todo el conjunto.Me alegra que te haya gustado,es de ese tipo de opiniones que realmente aprecio :)
xmirame....anyway thanks for watching it at least
sancipo 2 years ago
What could have made it better is if Jonnathan missed on purpose because he does not want to kill his best friend or hurt the one he loves. This is called "dumb shooting" in duels. Nathanael then can realize the stupidity of his senseless anger and engulf himself with grief and regret. The duel was kind of comical because they just stood there looking at eachother and shot eachother. The point of a duel is to see who can shoot the other first by taking a few paces opposite of eachother
xmirame 2 years ago
then turning and shooting one another. So in a way, this was just senselss killing, not a duel at all. I would have liked to see Jonnathan's and Nathanael's expressions as their backs are facing eachother, each expressing turmoil and dilemma. That would have been awesome. But nice clip and good effort.
xmirame 2 years ago
@xmirame If you have seen Barry Lyndon, In a setup similar to the one I did is how his father dies just in the opening of the movie (with the difference that they have witnesses, which I cant afford because of the cost of the costume rental). I guess there are different types of duel.
When, in the movie, Redmond duels his wife's son, the stand in front of each other taking turns. When her first duel the English officer both shoot at the same time.
TrueMetalLord 1 year ago
Sólo una cosa. Hay que pulir la música.
strikingtigers 2 years ago
Gracias por el comentario, aunque sobre la musica, hasta que no tenga a Philip Glass, a John Williams o a Danny Elfman trabajando para mi... Aunque como ya dije, la cancion lleva bastante edicion para hacer cuadrar los tiempos. Mas alla de eso, poco puedo hacer.
:)
TrueMetalLord 2 years ago
Congratulations Willie!!
I'm really proud of you! Great work!!
Love it! =)
LorihenSilvina 2 years ago
Jajajajaj, si tio, después del último nos tenías preocupados, a ver si te ibas a pasar al cine raro. No te dejaban ensuciar los trajes eh???? xDDD, ná sigue así. Lo único que me preocupa es el alto índice de masculinidad que hay en tus cortos, espero a que esto se deba únicamente a que el exceso de mujeres hablandaría las escenas y no al posible hehco de que no tengas tantas amiguitas como tenía previsto.
SpartanKel 2 years ago
De hecho esta bastante editada para que el tempo y los momentos de tension coincidan con los momentos de mas fuerza de la pieza,pero aun tngo q trabajar bastante en todo el conjunto.Me alegra que te haya gustado,es de ese tipo de opiniones que realmente aprecio :)
TrueMetalLord 2 years ago
Osso, por fin algo decente! xDDD
Esteticamente esta chulo. Has cosido tu los trajes por las noches? :P
Sólo una cosa. Hay que pulir la música. Muy plana, le falta edición o algo más que la pieza sin más. Pero se perdona por tirar de Vivaldi.
jangobout 2 years ago